初一年级英语作文(共6页)

1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上7上写作复习写作策略：1.优秀作文结构：使用三段式，要有开头，正文和结尾。2. 优秀作文要求：1.审题严密，结构完整。2.条理清晰(段落分明、有层次。如：能够使用顺序词或连接词）。3.语句无误，逻辑性强。4.句式多样，富于变化。用词精确，意义表达不牵强。5.恰当使用谚语或优美句子。3. 优秀作文写作步骤：1）审题构思，初步确定三段内容。2）熟记并套用 固定句式，不漏掉重要信息。3）设计一至两句优美句式点睛。4）重读检查，确保无错误。往年调考试卷真题解析：（07-08）假如你是新来的学生李刚，请向大家介绍一下你的个人情况，包括姓名，年龄，联系方式，个人爱好及理由等。要求

2、：句子通顺，语法正确，50词左右。开头：Hello, everyone! My name is Li Gang.结尾：This is me. How about you? Can you write and tell me about yourself?Would you like to be my friend?Do you want to make friends with me?或者用上一句复杂句式：If you want to make friends with me, you can call me at ./ Please send an e-mail to me. My e-ma

3、il address is abc.正文：My name is . Im years old. I like best. My favorite color is because I think. My favorite food is and . For dinner, I like and. In the subjects I have at school, I like best. Because the teacher is. My telephone number is . 锦上添花句式： As for sports, I like best. In my free time, I

4、like playing basketball. I think thats good for my health. The teacher is so wise that he always makes his class interesting and lively. 20082009你了解自己的父母吗？你知道他们的生日，兴趣，爱好吗？请以我的父母为题写一篇50词左右的短文。开头：My father/mother is a worker. He is a _ man. 锦句：I think my fathe is the greatest father in the world.结尾：I

5、love my father . We are a happy family. How about your father? 锦句：I love my parents. They give me so much love.正文: My father is a _. His birthday is _ .Although he is very busy, he often plays _ on weekend. Because his favourite sport is_. He also likes _.My mother is a _. She was born on _. She lik

6、es doing _ in her free time. She cooks well. She often cooks lots of healty food for me. 20102011亲爱的同学，你的日常生活怎么样？请以“My day”为题写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下你一天的生活吧。要求：1 短文中不得出现真实的人名，校名。 2 词数：60词左右开头：Do you want to know about my day? My name is _. Im a middle school student. I go to school on weekdays.结尾：Its my day.

7、 How about your day? 锦句： What a busy day I have! 正文： My dayToday is _. Its my favorite day. Because I have _ on _ . I usually get up at around six-thirty. I brush my teeth and have a shower. Then I _ . What a funny time to _! After breakfast, I take the number _bus to school with my classmate. I hav

8、e classes all day. But I eat lunch at twelve oclock in the school . At _ ,I do my homework. At nine oclock, I finish my classes. 习作评析：优秀作文的标准你掌握了吗？我们一起来做评卷老师，看看这些习作能得多少分吧！你能让它们更符合优秀作文的标准吗？ MyselfHello ,everyone. My name is Li Gang. I am happy to be here. I am 13 years old. I like playing basketball

9、and volleyball. Because its good for my health. I often play basketball and volleyball with my friends. And I have lots of healthy food. I like fruit. Strawberries and oranges are my favorite. My favorite color is blue. If you want to make friends with me, you can call me at 123. My parents My fathe

10、r is a worker. He often goes to work at seven oclock. His birthday is August eighth. He likes to play basketball. He often watchs TV at home in his free. He works very hard. I love him. My mother is a worker too. Her birthday is july first. She likes shopping and watching TV. She likes Beijing Opera

11、. She cooks well. She goes shopping with me. I love her too. My day Well, I usually get up at around six-thirty. I brush my teeth and have a shower. Then I eat my breakfast. What a funny time to est breakfast! After breakfast, I take the number 10 bus to school with my classmate. I have classes all

12、day. But I eat lunch at twelve oclock in the school . At seven oclock,I do my homework. At nine oclock, I finish my classes. My mother take me home.七上作文话题：一 介绍某人的房间。Unit 3开头：This is sbs bedroom. / Welcome to sbs room./ Look! This is sbs room.结尾：Can you tell me about your room? How about your room?正文

13、：You can see a 。, a 。 and a in it. The desk is 。. Some books are on the desk and her bag is on the desk, too. Under the bed, you can see her white shoes. On the bed there are some clothes. Her red sweater is on it. There is a + 介词短语。 There are + 介词短语。 常用介短： On the sofa, under the bed, between the bo

14、okcase and the TV, near the window, behind the door， on the wall, etc.二 介绍某人的家庭/家庭照片。Unit 3 开头：Look, this is my family photo. / Do you want to know about my family?结尾: This is my family. / I think I have a happy family./ Oh, what a happy family I have!/ How about your family?正文：There are 6 people in

15、 my family. They are my grandparents, my parents , my aunt and I . My mother is a . She is very busy. And my father is a . He likes . 锦句：My grandparents neednt work. They retire at home. 三 介绍家人的运动爱好和运动品收藏。Unit 5开头： is my aunt/uncle/ father. And my is a teacher. We all like sports. Sb has a great / s

16、mall sports collection.结尾: We think doing sports is good for our health. How about you? Do you like sports? Do you have a sports collection? / What kind of sport do you like best?正文：Sb has a great sports collection. He has ten balls and nine .balls. He plays with sb every day. / He doesnt play sport

17、s, he only watches them on TV!Sb also has a sports collection. She likes Yao Ming very much.四 介绍你的健康饮食。Unit 6开头：Hello! My name is Paul. I eat lots of healthy food every day./锦句：Do you care about your health? Do you eat healthy food every day?结尾：I dont eat too much junk food. I think its bad for our

18、health.正文： I eat and for breakfast. For lunch, I eat some . I like and for dinner. And for dessert, .五 为商店写一份促销广告。Unit 7开头：Hello, boys and girls! I am a clerk at Mr Cools Clothes Store. Come and have a look at store. We have a big sale!结尾：Everybody can afford our prices!锦句： Dont miss it! Come and se

19、e for yourself at store. 正文：We have _ in colors for 3 dollars. We have _ at a very good priceonly yuan.The blue _ are 7 dollars. The whit _ are on sale for 6 dollars. For boys, we have _ for .yuan each. A pair of _ is only 1 dollar. We also sell _for only 18 dollars. 六 介绍一下你喜爱的电影和影星。Unit 9开头：Do you

20、like movies? I like movies very much. 锦句：In my free time, I often go to the movies. I think its a good way to relax myself.结尾：Why not go to the movies ! lets go to the movies together!正文：I often go to movies with_. We like movies very much. I like _ . I think they are _. But _ doesnt like them. He t

21、hinks they are _. He likes _. He thinks _. My favorite movie star is_. He is a great actor. My favorite movie is_. Its a very successful comedy. _s favorite actor is_. He is a great actor. _ thinks his_ is very exciting. Its an action movie. _ wants to be an action movie actor one day .七介绍某人的一天。Unit

22、 11开头：.is a _ . Every day she is very busy.结尾：What a busy/ happy day it is!正文：She has four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. She gets to school at _in the morning and she has lunch at home. School is over at _ in the afternoon. She often does sth. after school. Then at around 5:00, sh

23、e gets home. She eats supper at_. And she does her homework form 7:00 to 8:00. Then she _ for an hour. At _, she goes to bed. 八 介绍你最喜欢的科目./ 你最喜欢的上学日。Unit 12开头语：1.The subjects we have at school are _. is my favorite subject.2.We have many subjects at school. In these subjects, I like best.3. I like M

24、onday best. Because I have .on Monday. 结尾：Whats your favorite day /subject?正文：1.The subjects we have at school are _.2. My favorite subject is because its _.3. I have on_.4. I like because the teacher is .点睛句：The teacher is so wise that he always makes the class_.5. In this class we can _ .九书信的格式：很多

25、作文题目要求我们用书信的格式表达观点，你知道书信的格式是什么吗？称呼：顶格写，Dear ,开头：空两格，Thanks for your letter. /Do you want to know about my .?结束语：I hope you can write and tell me about your ./ Best wishes to you. Write to me soon.落款: Yours, Your sincerely, Your friend, Love, 落款要放在右下角。人名要大写。小小习作几篇：我们一起来评一下这些作文吧！它们符合优秀作文的要求吗？一 介绍某人的房间

26、。Unit 3This is my sisters bedroom. You can see a desk, a bed and a chair in it. The desk is under the window. The chair is next to the desk. Some books are on the desk and her bag is on the desk, too. Under the bed you can see her white shoes. Some pictures are on the wall. The wall is blue. Theres

27、a clock on the wall, too. Its ten to five now. On the bed there are some clothes. Her red sweater is on it. My sister isnt at home now.二 介绍你的家庭；家庭照片。There are six people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my sister and I.My father is a doctor. He is 40 years old. My mother is a hous

28、ewife. She is a year younger than my father. She is busy with the housework every day. My sister and I are students. We are in the same school. Shes in Grade Nine and Im in Grade Seven. What do my grandparents do? They neednt work. They retire at home. Were a happy family.三 介绍你的叔叔Jim Green的运动爱好和运动品收

29、藏。Unit 5Jim Green is my uncle. He is an English teacher. And he is a sports fan. He has a great sports collection. He has ten soccer balls and nine volleyballs. He plays soccer with his students every day. His daughter Linda is a sports fan, too. She also has sports collection. She has two tennis ra

30、ckets and three basketballs. In the morning she plays tennis with her mother. And in the afternoon she plays basketball with her friends. She likes Yao Ming very much.四 介绍你的健康饮食。Unit 6Hello! My name is Paul. I am an English boy and I am eight years old. I eat lots of healthy food every day. I eat eg

31、gs and bananas for breakfast. For lunch, I eat some vegetables. I like strawberries and pears foe dinner. I like playing sports. I play ping-pong every afternoon. I like green. I have green pens and green shirts. Would you like to be my friend?五、 假设你是Cool先生服装店的店员，为店里写一份促销广告。Unit 7Hello, boys and gir

32、ls! My name is Zhang Hanyun, and my English name is Selina Zhang. I am a clerk at Mr Cools Clothes Store. We have shorts in black and white for 3 dollars. We have shirts in blue, black and white. The blue shirts are 7 dollars. The black shirts are also 7 dollars. The white shirts are on sale for 6 d

33、ollars. For boys, we have white socks. A pair of white socks is only 1 dollar. We also sell black shoes for only 18 dollars. Come and see for yourself at Mr Cools Clothes Store.六 介绍一下你喜爱的电影和影星。Unit 9My name is Ben. I often go to movies with my friend, Tom. We like movies very much. I like comedies. I think they are funny. But Tom doesnt like them. He thinks they are boring. He likes action movies. He thinks they are exciting. My favorite movie star is Paul Jackson. He is a great actor. My favorite movie is his My Fathers Birthday. Its a very successful comedy. Toms favorite actor is Jackie