大学英语四级作文模板修改PPT学习教案

1、会计学1大学英语四级作文模板修改大学英语四级作文模板修改第1页/共44页四、评分标准：四、评分标准： 1作文题满分为15分。阅卷标准共人为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。2分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分-基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。8分-基本切题，表达思想比清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多。11分-切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分-切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误。阅卷人员根根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为某一分数文件次（如8分）相似，即定为（8分）；若认为稍优

2、或劣于该档次，则可加一分（9分）或减一分（7分），但不得加减半分。字数不足应酌情扣分：少10字少20字少30字少40字少50字少51字累计字数110119100109909980897079 69扣分123455注：1、如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得记入所写字数。2、 只写一段者：04分，只写两段者：09分（指规定三段的作文）3、白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给零分。2. 设作文最低分，采用下列成绩计算方法： 1）作文分为0分者，总分即使高于60分，一律作不及格处理； 2）作文分大于 0 分小于 6 分者，按下 列方式计算成绩： 最后报道分 = 原计

3、算总分 6 + 作文实得分第2页/共44页第3页/共44页第4页/共44页四级作文命题透析第5页/共44页第6页/共44页第7页/共44页第8页/共44页第9页/共44页第10页/共44页第11页/共44页第12页/共44页第13页/共44页1) Be brought into public focus ：引起人们的关注 2） call for 要求、需要第14页/共44页Arouse the greatest concern: 引起极大关注第15页/共44页Be brought to our attention:引起了我们的注意第16页/共44页本模板第本模板第3句的空格中应该填上某个需要解

4、释的现句的空格中应该填上某个需要解释的现象或事件，第象或事件，第4句提出原因句提出原因I，第，第6句提出原因句提出原因，第第8句提出原因句提出原因，第，第5、第、第7和第和第9句对这句对这3个原因个原因进行了进一步论述。进行了进一步论述。1) Give sb a deep insight into :使、对、有了深入解； 2)foregoing：前面提到的（above-mentioned） 3) contributor :促成因素，贡献者第17页/共44页Account for 解释第18页/共44页Rewarding: 有报酬的、值得做的第19页/共44页具体句子数量可根据实际需要调整。具体

5、句子数量可根据实际需要调整。第20页/共44页第21页/共44页第22页/共44页第23页/共44页1) Attach importance to 重视 = place importance on 2) spare no efforts to 竭尽全力、努力去做 3）take some measure to 采取措辞第24页/共44页Top priority :应予最优先考虑的事 第25页/共44页steps=measures 2) undo=solve3) Contribute to 有助于第26页/共44页本模版中第本模版中第6句为主题句，第句为主题句，第7、8和和9句提供句提供3个个途径

6、，第途径，第10句为结论。句为结论。第27页/共44页Make joint efforts to 共同努力做、第28页/共44页第29页/共44页第30页/共44页第31页/共44页第32页/共44页模式模式1Different people have different opinions about （讨论主题）. Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that （观点1）. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that (观点2)./ Other peo

7、ple, however, think that （观点2） As for me, I agree with the former/latter idea. (I am in favor of the first/second idea.) (The following are the reasons of/for my choice/personal inclination.)First of all, (论据1).More importantly, (论据2).Most important of all, .(论据3).In summary, (总结观点). As a college st

8、udent, I am supposed to ( 表决心).或 From above, we can predict that (预测). 模式模式2 Peoples ideas/opinions/views on （讨论主题）vary from person to person. Some people hold/think that .(观点1). From their point of view, .However, others hold/think that (观点2). In their opinion, ./ Yet other people dont think in thi

9、s way. They argue that (观点2).As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, ( 论据1). For another, (论据2). Last but not the least, (论据3)./ First of all, ( 论据1)。Furthermore, (论据2)。 Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, (论据3)。To concl

10、ude, (总结观点). As a college student, I am supposed to (表决心). 或 From above, we can predict that (预测).模式模式3Different people have different views on (讨论主题) . Some people think that （观点1）. Other people hold that (观点2).Those who hold the first opinion think that （观点1） ( 论据1，2，3)On the contrary, those who h

11、old the second view think that （观点2） ( 论据1，2，3) As for me, I agree with the former/ latter opinion. ( 论据1，2，3)Therefore I hold that (观点观点1/2.)练习：练习：1. 1. 有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。 2. 2. 我认为数字和运气无关，我认为数字和运气无关， Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?第33页/共

12、44页第一、写作中的常用句式第一、写作中的常用句式一、开头常用语式一、开头常用语式( (主题段的引入主题段的引入) )A proverb saysAs the proverb saysSome people say thatMany people believe thatIt is generally believed thatWe all know that As we all know It is quite clear that Various views exist as to , butThere are many arguments/opinions/views aboutTher

13、e is much discussion about/attention to It is well known thatIt is said thatIt has been found thatIt is easy to see thatThe pie graph showsA recent survey providesThe chart/graph/table showsNo one can deny that Nowadays,.At present 第34页/共44页二、二、 中间常用句式（扩展段的连接）中间常用句式（扩展段的连接）通常按重要程度排列，我们习惯于先说最重要的，西方人则

14、相反，但都得符合逻辑顺序。1表示“首先”first, firstly, first of all, to begin with 在跌降法里用first and foremost 但不可用 at first。2表示“第二”、“此外”“其次”、“况且”second, secondly, and, besides, moreover, additionally, furthermore, whats more, in addition, besides+名词短语，in addition to+名词短语，another+名词短语3表示 “最后”finally, last, lastly, 但不可用at

15、 last 或 in the end。4表示 “最重要的是” above all, most important of all，在跌降法里用last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的是。5.表示“更严重的是”、“更糟糕的是” more serious, even worse, to make matter worse6. 表示“最为严重的是”、“最糟糕的是”most serious of all, worst of all例如：1 1）First of all, First of all, 论据1. More importantly,More importantly, 论据2.

16、 Most important of all,Most important of all, 论据3. In In summary,summary, 总结观点.2)2) The advantages can be listed as followsThe advantages can be listed as follows：First,First, 好处1. Besides,Besides, 好处2. Most Most important of all, important of all, 好处3. But every coin has two sides. The negative asp

17、ects are also apparent.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with,To begin with,坏处1. To make matter worse,To make matter worse,坏处2. Worst of all,Worst of all,坏处3. From the above analysis, I believeFrom the above analysis, I believe 观点.3 3）For one thing, For o

18、ne thing, 论据1. For another, For another, 论据2. Last but not the least,Last but not the least, 论据3. To To conclude, conclude, 总结观点或 From above, we can predict that From above, we can predict that 预测. 4 4）First of all,First of all, 论据1。 Furthermore, Furthermore, 论据2。 Among all of the supporting evidenc

19、es, Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is,one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。 A natural conclusion from the above discussion is A natural conclusion from the above discussion is thatthat总结观点。 或 From above, we can predict thatFrom above, we can predict that 预测.第35页/共44页

20、例文Key to Success In such a competitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and In such a competitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and in his life. But how to achieve success? in his life. But how to achieve success? In my opinion, there are three main key

21、s a clear objective, strong willpower and diligence. FirstFirst, , it is very important to set up a goal before you start. No one can be successful without a goal in his mind. BesidesBesides, , you need a strong willpower to keep you go ahead. There always are tough stones in every road to success.

22、Whether you can go through it depends on whether you are persistent enough. Last but not leastLast but not least, , everyone who wants to suceed should be diligent. There is and old saying, “No pains, no gains.” Most successful people owe their success to hard working, such as Einstein.In conclusion

23、In conclusion, , if we want to be successful, we have to master the three main keys mentioned above.There is no shortcut to success. The three keys will assure you to realize your beautiful dream.练习：Advertisement 1） 广告给人们带来的益处。 2） 广告给人们带来的烦恼。Advertisement can be a service to people. First, First, it

24、 is informative, and can help people buy and sell goods. Second, Second, it can widen peoples knowledge, and make people more experienced. Lastly Lastly, people can enjoy themselves through those programs which advertisements have been put into. Some advertisements, however, however, are not very us

25、eful to people, sometimes even harmful. An advertisement like this, for example, for example, may put thousands of women and girls into trouble. Disillusioned with life, love, marriage? You need help. Phone me. And the Savior gives his phone number to his sheep. 第36页/共44页5其他词语或句式：1）用于强调：after all, a

26、ny way, in fact, indeed, apparently, clearly, obviously, especially, 2）用于对比：however, on one hand, on the other hand, in contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, instead, but, different from, 3）用于比较：similarly, likewise, like, in the same way, 4）用于列举：for example, for instance, such as,

27、takefor granted, except(for)5）表示时间：later, then, next, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, after that, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, after some time, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, presently, since, as soon as, after

28、wards, some time later, temporally, in the meanwhile, after a while,6）用于解释：in other words, as a matter of fact, that is,7) 用于让步：although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if, though, no matter how8) 用于结果：consequently, thus, as a result, as a consequence, hence, so, therefore, accordingly9) 其他

29、：not onlybut also, as far as I am concerned, when it comes to, in practice, in principle, another key aspect ofis, it is true that, what is more serious is, there is no doubt that,but it is a pity that,but the trouble /problem/point is 例1 Brain Drain in China (接开头)1）中国人才流失的现状；2）对人才流失的看法；3）如何解决人才流失。H

30、owever, people see this phenomenon in different perspectives. Some hold the opinion that China suffers a lot from brain drain. They argue, on the one hand, that brain drain considerably weakens our international competitiveness. On the other hand, they believe that the talent should serve their nati

31、ve country first.In contrast, others highlight the advantages of international exchange and cooperation. They claim that Chinese youths should go abroad to study and gain more experience. Whats more, the long-term benefits will outweigh losses we suffer now. 第37页/共44页三、结尾常用句式（终结段的连接）三、结尾常用句式（终结段的连接）

32、1表示 “总之 ”、 “总而言之 ”、 “简言之 ”in conclusion, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, to sum up, in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole2“综上所述 ”from the foregoing, from what has been discussed above, from what has been mentioned above, from the above analysisObviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion thatThus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find t