短文改错专项训练

1、文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。1.The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have plenty of practice in what you were doing，you will be perfect in itIf you wan

2、t improve your study and work，remembering that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practiceFor example，when learning a language，though you can make full use for your talent，practice is necessaryIf you only learn grammar rules by the heart and dont do enough exe

3、rcise，its certain that you cant understand the language perfectlyBut if you real practise a lot，maybe you will understand them much betterIn this way，you can apply that you have learned better2Nowadays, there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering. Its well-known

4、that volunteering jobs are making contributions to society with something in return. Its as the Spirit of Lei Feng. However, knowing this, there are still many people would like to devote themselves to this trend. For instance, the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers. They make lots

5、of contributions to the success of the Olympics. Moreover, we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm to them. Even though some peoples career is a volunteer. They are ready to helping others. Although the volunteers are much more common, we still need to thank they for devoting

6、 themselves to society.3All of us need friendship. An understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend

7、 indeed.” So really friendship should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is wise to have as many good friends that we can. The more fiends we have, the more we can learn for one another, but the more pleasure we can share together.4Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and rel

8、ax, and in some schools students are not giving enough time to do outdoor activities. Teachers ask students to spend most of their time at studies. But if students feel tired, they cant pay attention to that theyre studying. They will be in a bad health. Its also not good for his studies. In my opin

9、ions, its important give students enough time to do outdoor activities. Then they will enjoy better health and work hard. So please pay more attention to student health and growth.5My car just wouldnt move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet n

10、ight. I decided walk around a little before accepting Id have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and was delighting when a p

11、leasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasnt any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.6We all want to grow up happily and healthy, and for this goal we must do several things. Firstly, we shou

12、ld develop good attitude for life. Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard time. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because of knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build your country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we

13、need to do sport so that we can keep fitness. We can go running, playing ball games but simply take a walk after a days study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.7Dear John,Last summer, I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have to

14、ld one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closely to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only fiveho

15、urs a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.Yours,Li Ping8As a student, Li Hua works very harder at his lessons, so he is always one of the top student in our class.

16、He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends. Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons, so she always helps them after class.As a monitor, Li Hua has organized some voluntary activities successful. We visit a nur

17、sing home last month, and we pick rubbish in the park near our school every week. What we do is warmly welcomed by the community. This is how Li Hua is so popular.9Yesterday I paid a visit to the Hongen Temple Park with my friends. The park was full of fresh and beauty flowers. When I was enjoying t

18、he wonderful scenery around, something unpleasant catch my eye. A young couple on the grass was eating, talking and laughing loudly even if they were the only people in the world. Whats better, they spat and even threw rubbish onto the grass, ignoring the sign “No littering” nearby. What a shame!Suc

19、h behavior left me in thought. If all visitors to the Hongen Temple Park do as the young couples did, the park will be severely polluting and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think both of us should mind our behavior in the public places. Only in this way can we live more comfortable and beautiful

20、 surroundings.10I am a 18 year-old middle school studentI have been busy in my study and seldom helped my parents with the houseworksFeeling quite sorry for that, and I begin to think about what to do to helpLast Sunday, when my parents went out shop, I suddenly got an idea: why not giving the rooms

21、 a throughout cleaning? Firstly I collected both the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put it in placeThen I wiped the dust off all the furnitureAfter that, I swept and mopped the floorsAt this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprising to see all the roo

22、ms tidy and floors shiningMy mother gave me a hug and I see satisfaction in her eyesTired as I was, I never felt so happy11Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient but consid

23、erateBesides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in classI decide to make the best use for it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmatesWhenever I had difficulties, they were always helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence an

24、d I got more motivatedMy experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are12As a middle school student of Senior ThreeI do sports one and two hours a day, such as doing morning exercises, playing basketball, long-distance running and so onI thi

25、nk it is very helpfully in meTake exercise makes me even more healthier so that I won't be ill very often. What's more, I also get myself relaxing in different kinds of sports. Only in this way I do a better job in my study in high spiritsFor doing physical exercise, I'm becoming stronge

26、r and more confident than agoI did think it is necessary for everyone to spend some time on sports every day so people's health is important in modern life13。Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city to you. Our city is a new modern city. It set up in the early 1980s. But it has been

27、 developed very rapidly. From here you can travel everywhere by the sea, by air or by land. Recently another freeway connects with Beijing started being used, The places around our city is rich in natural resources. And we have enough supply in electricity and energy resources. The public order is n

28、ice. The government will support investors with many ways. We wish more foreign friend to invest in our city.14Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class while the teacher suddenly slip and fell. We were all worried about her. One of the boy carried her on the back, under the help of some others,

29、 to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was breaking and she had to stay in hospital. The following day, we went to visit her with flowers and fruit. Seeing her laying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. Lucky enough,

30、 this Thursday she returned back to the class in a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were both deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.15Some peoples hold opinion that wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honesty labor

31、. They work hardly and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleasing. Even their spend money is a kind of happiness.But some people believe wealth cant bring him happiness. For example, when one makes a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of t

32、he country and try to share the wealth for him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.In my opinion, I think there is no doubt whether wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is

33、 not anything。16When traveling to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. Fortunately, a well-dressing man on the bus helped me great. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctors office and took me there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. Because of I didnt speak French well, I couldnt

34、talk with him very much. However, even we couldnt talk, we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned what communication can take place without much actual language at all.17The Magic T

35、ree House series are among the most popular book series ever writing for children. It tells a story of two kids, Jack and his sister Annie, seem to be very excited about finding a tree house in the woods. A tree house is magic and can transport him to various places and various times in history. It

36、turned out that King Arthur from Camelot needs help. However, Jacks head librarians, Morgan le Fay, sends him and Annie to help. They end up go to many different places and time periods through history on their adventures, which attract to readers a lot.The series so far has had over 40 books and is

37、 likely to grow.18Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and relax, and in some schools students are not giving enough time to do outdoor activities. Teachers ask students to spend most of their time at studies. But if students feel tired, they cant pay attention to that theyre study

38、ing. They will be in a bad health. Its also not good for his studies. In my opinions, its important give students enough time to do outdoor activities. Then they will enjoy better health and work hard. So please pay more attention to student health and growth.19Tom and Dick are next door neighbor wh

39、o both work in same officeThey often walk together to and from workOnce they were walking to home together while it suddenly started to rainTom quickly opened his umbrella and said proud，“My wife really has great foresight（先见之明）She said this morning it would rain and tell me to carry my umbrella”Dic

40、k smiled and walked up to her under the protection of the umbrella，said，“Mine has even great foresightShe didnt let me carry one as she knew youd share yours to me.参考答案1.1mean改为means. 2.were改为are. 3.添加to. 4.将remembering改为remember.5.将for改为of. 6.去掉the. 7.将exercise改为exercises.8.将real改为really. 9.将them改为

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