初中英语写作思维导图,掌握住,英语作文想不得满分都难

1、中学英语写作思维导图，把握住，英语作文想不得满分都难！一提到写英 语作文，许多同学都无从下笔， 总是“信手写来 ”，没有 规划；这样 做的后果是，作文篇章 结构不清楚，内容 选择 可能会脱离主 题，从而影响作文的 总体得分；老 师为 了帮忙大家解决 这 一难题 ， 带来了英 语写作思维导图 ，让你以后作文提笔前胸有成竹，次次 稳拿满分！一、写作时需考虑哪些方面的因素？（ 1 ）本话题所需要的词块、语块；（ 2 ）本话题的写作模板结构等；（ 3 ）本话题所涉及到的经典名句、谚语等；二、困惑与计策困惑 1 ：写什么？以 howtolearnwell. 为题，写一篇作文，那么我们应当如何入手开头写作

2、呢？来看看以下几张思维导图，能够帮你整理好一篇作文的写作框架；lo classlearn wellcard beginn¡qgspeakingbefore classeadixgstenipg困惑 2 ：如何选材？即使知道了写作框架，但在补充框架时又会遇到另一个困惑：如何选材？以下是一些关于写作选材的建议：1 选定英语思维导图各区域所需的词块和语块；2 将各区域的词块和语块按段落写成连贯的语篇；3 对比思维导图自我批改，留意人称、时态语态、句型结构的正确使用；困惑 3 ：如何表达？许多同学在写作时，使用的句式比较单一，因此文章大多雷同，缺乏个性； 针对这些问题，我们可以从以下几个方面

3、改进：1 对相同意思，留意不同句式的表达法，选择更好的句式；2 短文写作，表达力求精悍、生动、丰富，防止重复用一样的句式；3 特殊留意使用承上启下的词语和句子；三、思维导图在英语作文写作中的应用实例写作流程：1. 审题、理清思路：考虑写什么（选择关键词，搭建作文框架）；2. 选择词语：依据话题和作文框架选用所需要的语料（词块和语块）；3. 遣词造句：依据思维导图中的语料，用合适的句型写作；4. 语篇定稿：依据思维导图修改润色作文紧扣主题、表达精确，关联自然，语篇流畅；实例 1 ：假如你有两位同学芳芳和明明，参与了上星期二学校组织的英语演讲竞赛，他们的不同表现使你深有感受；请你依据以下表各中的内

4、容提示写一篇英语短文；芳芳明明我1. 认为自己英语好，不需要努力；花费时间选择竞赛用的美丽衣服2. 因预备不足，太紧急，而没有完成演讲；1. 努力学习，向别人请教；赛前应当两天腿受伤，但向明不舍弃明学2. 在竞赛中表现习良好参考词汇：英语演讲竞赛english speech contest要求：1. 词数： 80100个2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did make

5、me think deeply.before the contest, fangfang thought .范文 1last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did make me think deeply.before the contest, fangfang thought her english was the best. so shespent lots oftime picking some beautiful clothes for

6、herself instead of trying to work hard at english for the contest. as a result, she didn't do well in the contest because shehadn't got ready for the contest.but mingmingwasdifferentfromfangfang.he workedhardat englishand asked others for help. especially, his leg was hurt twodaysbeforetheco

7、ntest, but he nevergaveup. intheend, he won the contest.no doubt, from mingming we should learn : no pains, no gains. from now on, i mush learn frommingming.范文 2last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did make me think deeply.beforethecontest,fa

8、ngfangthoughtshe wasgoodatenglish, and thatshedidn'tneedtospendmoretimeon the contestatall.shealwaysconsideredpicking somebeautiful clothesforthecontest. but mingmingwasdifferent.he worked hardatenglish and askedothersforhelp. though hehad hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave

9、up.in the end, fangfang didn't get ready well enough. at the contest,shewas so nervous that sheshefailed. but mingming won because of his efforts.inmyopinion,weshould learnfrommingming:workhardand make progress every day.范文 3lasttuesdayfangfangandmingmingenteredtheenglishspeechcontestdeeply.inou

10、rschool.whattheydidmakemethinkbeforethecontest,fangfangthoughtthatshe wasgoodat english. so it wasn't necessary to spend lots of time preparing forthecontest. whatsheonlythought waswhatclothesshould wear, which makeherselfmorebeautifulatthecontest.atlast, shewas too nervous to finishthecontestbe

11、cause shedidn'tget ready very well.instead,mingminghadbeen workingatenglish and asking others for help. what's more, he had hurt his leg two days beforethe contest. but he had never given up. as the result, he won the contest.ithink weshould learnfrommingming:workhardandnever give up.实例 2 ：生

12、活是丰富多彩的，没有爱好的人生是不完整的人生；亲爱的同学，在生活中，你有什么爱好爱好吗？这个爱好爱好是怎样培育起来的？它给你的生活增加了哪些颜色？请你以“ my hobby”为题，结合自己的亲身经受写一篇短文；（词数80 个左右）要求：1. 语句通顺，合乎规律，书写规范；2. 文中不得显现真实的姓名和学校名称；范文 1reading is my hobby. when i was seven years old, one day, i reada comicbookabouthowa girlbeata wolf.i wasmoveddeeply by the girl.from then o

13、n i became interested in reading books.readingcan notonly killthetime, butalso,moreimportantly, helpimprovemyskills.andbookscanteachmehowtobea good person. books can also solve many problems for me.inaword,readingbookscanmakemylifecolorful.iwillread more good books to improve myself in the future.范文 2my favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. three years ago, while i was watching the adventure 3d film avatar in the cinema, i was attracted by the beautiful sights. it was so creative that itmade me enj