剑桥商务英语bec中级写作讲义acca写作

1、剑桥商务英语bec中级写作讲义acca写作bec中级写作电子讲义 第一讲bec写作概述本课程安排简介写作共6次课，第1次讲概述。bec写作简介：1写作目的与要求1 can make notes that are useful to both him/herself and to colleagues.2 can write most letters he/she is likely to be asked to do; such errors as occur wi11 not prevent understanding of the message3 can write a simple r

2、eport写作考试共进行45分钟，占总成绩的25%,小作文占10分，大作文 占20分。更多的报名信息和成绩查询方法请上网了解：wvw. neea. edu. cn教育 部考试中心2测试范围与选材1、身份介绍(personal identification)2、工作环境与日常事务(the office, general business, environment and routine)3、接待与闲暇活动(entertainment of clients, free time, relationships with colleagues and clients)4、商务旅彳亍(travel)5、

3、健康(health)6、购买与销售(buying and selling)7、公司结构、系统及程序(company structures, systems,processes)8、产品与服务(products and services)9、成果与成就 (results and achievements)其外，还会涉及其他的一般商务话题(business issues)。3测试题型分析an overview of bec vantage writingpartfunctions/communicative taskinputresponseregister1business correspond

4、ence:e. g giving instructions, explaining a development, asking for comments, requesting information, agreeing to requestsrubric only (plus layout of output text type)note, message, memo or e-mail (40-50 words)neutral/informal2correspondence:e. g. explaining, apologising, reassuring, complainingrepo

5、rt:describing, summarisingproposal:describing, summarising, recommending, persuadingone or more pieces of input from: business correspondence (medium may be letter, fax or e-mail), internal communication (medium may be note, memo, or e-mail), notice, advert, graphs, chart, etc. (plus layout if outpu

6、t is fax or e-mail)business correspondence (medium may be letter, fax or e-mail) or short report or proposal (medium may be memo or e-mail) (120-140 words)neutral/formal题型： 1商务便条类；2商务便函类；3商务书信类；4. 商务报告类注意：bec不是单纯的英语考试，也不是考察商务知识。对策：学习、模仿高水平的论文例题解析：* you work for a company which produces laser printer

7、s you are visiting another company, softcell, to buy some computer software for your department they have expressed an interest in your company? s printers and you would like to take twenty brochures and three sample printers with you.相关词汇：laser, inkjet, projector (barco), photocopier(xerox), fax ma

8、chine, scanner, computer, monitor相关词汇：company literature; brochure; leaflet; flyer; white book; data sheet; prospectus* write a short note to mr. jim asano, the sales manager* asking for his permission to take these items* explaining why you want them* mentioning the time and date when you want to c

9、ollect themwrite 40-50 words on your answer sheet便函便条类题目的结构input: situation descriptiontask: memo, note, emailcontent pointswrite: internal message (40-50 words)注意：格式；发挥部分要确切评分标准bec写作评分方法级别第一部分分数5 全部完成答题要求*所有内容点都已包括在内并在答题要求允许的情况下加以发挥*语言规范、自然；错误最少，均属小错。*多样化的语言结构和丰富的词汇量。*组织效果好，注意前后呼应。*语域和格式完全适当。给读者的印象

10、极佳。9或10分4较好的完成答题要求*所有内容点都处理得不错。*大体准确；运用复杂语言吋有错误。*结构合理，用词准确。*大体上组织较好，注意逻辑关系。*语域和格式总体來说适当。给读者的印象良好。7或8分3尚能达到答题要求*所有的主要内容点已包括进去，遗漏了一些次要的内容。*出现一些错误，但不妨碍交流。*结构和词汇掌握范围适度。*组织和安排总的來说令人满意。*语域和格式尚可，虽然并不完全成功。给读者的印象较好。5或6分2不能完全达到答题要求*遗漏了一些主要的内容点或者处理得不充分，可能有些不切题。*有时错误影响清楚交流，错误较多，使读者感到迷惑。*结构、词汇掌握范围有限。*内容条理不清、不连贯，

11、造成理解困难。*语域和格式不适当。给读者的印象不佳。3或4分1未能达到答题要求*显著的内容遗漏/或大量内容不相关，可能由于对题冃要求的误解。*严重不规范，经常出现基木错误。*题冃要求的结构和词汇几乎没有提到。*缺乏组织，造成交流失败。*儿乎没有使用适当的语域和格式。给读者的印象极差。1或2分0什么要求也没达到。字数少于所需字数的25%,或是完全不能辨认或 是完全不切题。0分注意：content; accuracy; conciseness【例题】* christmas is coming your company is going to hold the annual christmas pa

12、rty as the secretary of the general manager, you help arrange the preparation for it.* write a memo to all employees* announcing the planned party.* welcoming all employees to join it.* introducing the programs of it.* mention the time and place that it takes place* write 4050 words on your answer s

13、heet-商务书信类这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文，如书信、传真、便函、留言 条(屯话留言条)等，起草一封书信，字数要求达到120140词左右。题冃结构：input: 1 situation description2 task3 target readerreading: texts in note, letter, fax, memo + content points (handwritten notes; second letter)write: business letter (120-140 words) 注意英美拼写问题【例题】* you have organised a prod

14、uction conference for your company which will be held on 10 october 2005 the following is the letter of confirmation you received from the conf ere nee centre * read the letter and fax below, which gives details of the conferenee.* then, using all information from the fax, write your letter to john

15、smith at the nuffield conference centre, explaining the changes to the arrangements* do not include postal addresses* write 120-140 words on separate sheetdear conference organiser,i am writing to confirm the arrangements for the conference.date and time:number of guests:rooms reservedcatering:10th

16、0ctober-10 a. m. to 5 p. m.5010 a. ni. to 12: 30 p. m.conference hall 32 p. m. to 5 p. m.seminar rooms 1, 2, and 3coffee一一11 a. m. to 11:30 a. m.lunch-12:30p m. to 2p.m.conference centre restauranttea-4 p. m.we look forward to welcoming your company to the nuffieldconferenee centreyours faithfully,j

17、ohn smithtoday your production manager has sent you the fax below with changes he would like to make to the conferenee arrangementsfaxi m afraid we have to make some last-minute changes to the arrangements for our production conferenee.1. ten more guests have accepted2. the president wants only one

18、hour for lunch, and just a simple buffet-not seated in the restaurantthe conference speaker (tom moors) can' t come until 2 pm. so he will give his presentation in the afternoon. can we move the seminars to the morning?sorry about this!sam注意：1不要跑题2适当发挥3冃标读者4不要抄袭三种对策：a换句型e.g. this rule applies in

19、 every casethere are no exceptions to the rule(肯定句变否定句)b换同义词e. g. the arguments put forward by these two authors are nearly the samethe views expressed by the two writers are almost identica. 1.c改词性e. g. the english language has had a major impact on developing other world ianguagesother world langu

20、ages have been greatly affected by the english language in their developments商务报告类【例题】* you recently attended a one-day course on office management. below is the course programme, with the comments you wrote on it.* write a short report about the course for your managerinelude all your comments and

21、say whether your company should send other staff on this course write 120一140 words* write on your answer sheet do not write in capital lettersoffice management seminarfield house, london 26 may 1999programme9. 00-10. 45managing people and developing productiveworking relationships10. 45-11.0011.00-

22、12.45coffeeplanning the day, work-flow, prioritising12.45-1.301. 30-3. 15lunchproblem-solving and decision-making3. 15-3. 303. 30-5. 00teastaff appraisal and staff development第二讲bec写作的语言、语法、组织和文体评分标准：级别第一部分分数第二部分分数5全部完成答题要求*所有内容点都已包括在内并在答题要求允许的情况下加以发挥*语言规范、自然；错误最少，均属小错。*多样化的语言结构和丰富的词汇量。*组织效果好，注意前后呼应

23、。*语域和格式完全适当。给读者的印象极佳。9或10分18或20分4较好的完成答题要求*所有内容点都处理得不错。*大体准确；运用复杂语言时有错误。*结构合理，用词准确。*大体上组织较好，注意逻辑关系。*语域和格式总体來说适当。给读者的印象良好。7或8分14或16分3尚能达到答题要求*所有的主要内容点已包括进去，遗漏了一些次要的内容。*出现一些错误，但不妨碍交流。*结构和词汇掌握范围适度。*组织和安排总的來说令人满意。*语域和格式尚可，虽然并不完全成功。给读者的印象较好。5或6分10或12分2不能完全达到答题要求*遗漏了一些主要的内容点或者处理得不充分，可能有些不切题。*有时错误影响清楚交流，错误

24、较多，使读者感到迷惑。*结构、词汇掌握范围有限。*内容条理不清、不连贯，造成理解困难。*语域和格式不适当。给读者的印象不佳。3或4分6或8分1未能达到答题要求*显著的内容遗漏/或大量内容不相关，可能由于对题目要求的误解。*严重不规范，经常出现基本错误。*题目要求的结构和词汇儿乎没有提到。*缺乏组织，造成交流失败。*儿乎没有使用适当的语域和格式。给读者的印象极差。1或2分2或4分0什么要求也没达到。字数少于所需字数的25%,或是完全不能辨认或 是完全不切题。0分0分评分五个方面：1 content2 language3 structure & vocabulary4 organisation展开论述上面的5个方面1内容的完整性2语言6c原则1 准确(correctness)包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；使用精确措 词，传达准确信息；正确地使用语法和标点符号；拼写正确。(1) 恰当的语言风格请比较下面两组例词：formalinformalapproximately inquire asce