高考英语改错2带答案

1、I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with

2、 him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality

3、 that needs improving.【答案】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term.confidenceaThe exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, Iannuallywas responsible for interview parents who bo

4、ught the learning tools. While talking with him, I found itinterviewingthemwas not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized thethoughtandexperience was_in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people. ofexcitingFrom this e

5、xperience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs删除 thatimproving.How to keep mental healthAs we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it's vital to keep ourmental health. Here are some advice on how to do it.Firstly, accept yourself t

6、rue. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal insteadof setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mentalhealth. Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. Its theircomfort and support which help you go t

7、hrough hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to yourcareer. Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!How to keep mental healthAs we know, mental health links to our

8、happiness index. However , it ' s vital to keep ourmental health.Therefore/ThusHere are some advice on how to do it.isFirstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal insteadoftrulygoalssetting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus e

9、njoy good mentalhealth.enjoyingSecondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It's their comfortandwithoutsupport which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Youreffortsthatbring you a sense of achievement, which will

10、in turn ensure your happiness.willIn a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!betterDear Mr. Li,I ' m Wang Tao. I ' m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the

11、 sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner' s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese canthey communicate with each other smoothly.Various of activi

12、ties out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.【答案】Dear Mr. Li,I ' m Wang Tao. I written to tell you my opinion about employing

13、 a foreign language teacher. writingopinionsThey are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher,Thereconsideration onewho makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the whichtoforeignerabisty to

14、speak Chinese matters much, soonly with the help of Chinese can theycommunicatebecause/aswith each other smoothly.Various ofactivities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should beorganized by或 Various 改为 Varietiesthe foreign language teacher, which brings the students more cha

15、nces to communicate with theteacher and improve hjs oral English.theirDear Ms Jenkins,I'm Li Hua. I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had already filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and forma

16、t. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and

17、format.I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.Yours,Li HuaDear Ms Jenkins,I'm Li Hua. I plan to take A part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday.I hadahavealready filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it.

18、But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare someThereforeadvicetime to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for 一 words andattachedfindingofformat? Besides, I&

19、#39;d like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.that 或 whichI would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you_reply.yourYours,Li HuaThe sun was just slowly come up over the mountains today as I took my dogs for its morningwalk. I smi

20、led as I watched the clouds gradually turn to white and gold. The air was cool and I worea big smile in my face. Even though there werent leaf on the ureeecoMd still hear birdssinging songs of spring. Even my dogs seemed to notice the different in the air. They were playing instead of just do their

21、morning business in the grass. The particular golden sun seemed to make it a beautiful day. As I headed back, I realize something. The beauty of day didn ' come from the warmth of the sun. It came from the warmth within my own heart and soul.71. come 改为 coming72. its 改为 their73. in 改为 on74. leaf

22、 改为 leaves75. 去掉but或but改为yet76. different 改为 difference(s)77. do 改为 doing78. particular 改为 particularly79. realize 改为 realized80. 在 day 前力口 theFor 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. It 's a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As

23、 Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several time along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs.

24、When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.walktheivaJln 噌aFor 65 years, Mr Li has beenaround our neighborhood twiceday. It s a part of hisretiringdaily exercise routine. He is arEtirBdbiology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to restseveraltime Hem .a

25、long his route.Therefore,he still gets up early and sticksAtnhis routine. Theneighbors have noticed his stops.We place different chairs alongourhi_Eroute and invite him to sit and0砧a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize webut should also get o

26、uthave a walk.Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at morethan $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position amongChinaest. Bus hweatayis outside the list ofthe world ' s 10 richpeople.Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enoug

27、h to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards hestarted a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introducedto the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in atour of the Great W

28、all. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forall of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with JerryYang.71.his fwho§eownedowns; rich frichest fought ffighting 去掉 in ; he 和 introduced 之 间力口上 was; before f when/after； in f on； obviously fobvious; all f bothLast w

29、eek I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tas

30、ted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying“ Good medicine for health tastes bitter to themouth” . Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.Last week I noticed Jack cou

31、ghing on_our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. ThereinSeeingthe doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate.if/whetherimmediatelyThe doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. WhenJack

32、instructionstasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying“ Good medicine forhealthbroughttastes bitter to the mouth” . Jack managedthemuntowingly. But when he had recoveredthree itdays later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.amazedIn order to pr

33、omote participation in outdoors exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Tianlong Mountain on April 10. The majority of my class joined the activity.Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to the thickly-forested Tianlong Mountain. We set out for t

34、he top in high spirits the moment when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky or steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from t

35、he top, the city was beautiful. Bathing in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game.This event was extremely beneficial and we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!短文改错：第一段： 第一行：outdoors - outdoor 第二行：joined后面加in 第二段 第一行： head-headed 第三行： 去掉 when

36、第三行:In a course of-In the course of 第五行： which - where 第六行：Viewing-Viewed 第七行： us-ourselves 第七行：game-games第三段 第二行 are held - be heldDear Peter,How time flies! It had been almost a year since you left China to Sweden. During your home stay at my home, we had such wonderful time that it seemed as if everything was happened yesterday. I have been long to hear all about you and missing you s