B7 unit3 writing投诉信

1、 Basic writing Complaining letter投诉、抱怨类的信件也是考试常常涉及到的投诉、抱怨类的信件也是考试常常涉及到的内容，一般是当自己的正常生活受到骚扰、内容，一般是当自己的正常生活受到骚扰、自己的利益受到侵害或当社会规范有失规范自己的利益受到侵害或当社会规范有失规范时，用来表达不满情绪和提出批评。时，用来表达不满情绪和提出批评。所有的投诉信都有一个共同点，就是最终是所有的投诉信都有一个共同点，就是最终是要收信人解决问题，所以需要提出解决方案要收信人解决问题，所以需要提出解决方案。注意注意: 如果题目中没有给出解决方案，那么如果题目中没有给出解决方案，那么就要根据投诉

2、内容中的不满提出自己的解决就要根据投诉内容中的不满提出自己的解决方案。方案。 Do you know how to write a letter of complaint and how to organize the article? 一般情况下，可以按照下面的思路行文：一般情况下，可以按照下面的思路行文：a抱怨投诉行为抱怨投诉行为b投诉内容具体描述投诉内容具体描述c要求弥补纠正赔偿要求弥补纠正赔偿d. 对被投诉人的敦促或威胁对被投诉人的敦促或威胁抱怨投诉行为：抱怨投诉行为：Im writing to complain about/that .Im writing to make a com

3、plaint aboutIm writing to bring your attention to the problems that.Much to my regret, I write this to place a complaint against .Heres the problem投诉内容具体描述投诉内容具体描述:First of all, secondly, thirdly.I felt really angry about.I find it difficult to.to be honest, I am not prepared to put up with.要求弥补纠正赔偿

4、要求弥补纠正赔偿:I think it is high time that you should.It would be very kind (considerate) of you toI would appreciate it very much if you could.Would you please .We ask you to take steps to .对被投诉人的敦促或威胁对被投诉人的敦促或威胁:I hope you could deal with it as soon as possible.I hope you can . and give me a face-to-fa

5、ce apology.If you cant give me a satisfactory answer, I will .I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, I will be forced to take legal action. I have sent a copy of this letter to my lawyer. 【写作内容】【写作内容】 你的邻居王先生的女儿总是在晚上练习你的邻居王先生的女儿总是在晚上练习钢琴，制造噪音钢琴，制造噪音 。请写一封抱怨信给王。请写一封抱怨信给王先生，

6、要求包含以下要点。先生，要求包含以下要点。1.噪音使得你无法学习和休息；噪音使得你无法学习和休息；2.傍晚比较适合练琴，要求王先生把练琴傍晚比较适合练琴，要求王先生把练琴时间安排到傍晚；时间安排到傍晚；3.请王先生马上改善状况，否则将不得不请王先生马上改善状况，否则将不得不 采取法律行动。采取法律行动。【实例剖析：】【实例剖析：】【写作分析】通过认真审题，确定如【写作分析】通过认真审题，确定如下写作要点：下写作要点： 文体：应用文文体：应用文 人称人称: 根据内容可确定本文人称为第根据内容可确定本文人称为第一人称一人称 时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时要点：写作内容已有要点：写作内容已有1).

7、你的邻居王先生的女儿总是在晚你的邻居王先生的女儿总是在晚上练习钢琴，制造噪音。上练习钢琴，制造噪音。complain about ，practice the piano Im writing to complain about the noise which is made by your daughter while she is practicing the piano at night.2).噪音使得你无法学习和休息噪音使得你无法学习和休息find it difficult to，have a rest； I find it difficult to concentrate on my

8、study and I cant have a good rest at all.3).傍晚比较适合练琴，要求王先生把傍晚比较适合练琴，要求王先生把练琴时间安排到傍晚练琴时间安排到傍晚 ；rearrange I would appreciate it very much if you rearrange the practicing time. I think the evening could be a better time for your daughters practice.4).请王先生马上改善状况，否则将请王先生马上改善状况，否则将不得不采取法律行动不得不采取法律行动 。deal

9、 with，take legal action I hope you could deal with it as soon as possible, otherwise, I will be forced to take legal action. Now discuss in your own group, and find one representing your group to speak to all , then compare with each group to see which group writes the most. Now look at the blackboa

10、rd and we check them together and then make a conclusion on the screen through the multimedia .Compose the letter, paying attention to use some junctional words. Make some changes if necessary.注意事项: 1.单词的拼写；动词的过去式、单词的拼写；动词的过去式、过去分词的拼写。过去分词的拼写。 2. 时态的运用。时态的运用。 3. 人称的一致（议论文）人称的一致（议论文） 4. 句子的完整。句子的完整。

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