CET 4 Writing大学英语写作(整体介绍、提纲式作文、语句改错)

1、CET 4 WritingTo get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 1You are going to mark four pieces of writing according to the CET 4 writing assessment criteria.1. 1. 评分标准：评分标准：写作题写作题满分为满分为1515分分. . 共分五等：共分五等：2-42-4分、分、5-75-7分、分、8-108-10分、分、11-1311-13分及分及14-1514-15分。分。2-42-4分分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多条理不清，

2、思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数严重错误。数严重错误。5-75-7分分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8-108-10分分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。其中有一些是严重错误。 11-1311-13分分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14-1514-15分分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上

3、无语言错误，切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误仅有个别小错误To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 1You are going to mark four pieces of writing according to the CET 4 writing assessment criteria.注：注： 1.1.白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给给0 0分。分。2.2.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数如题目中

4、给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数3.3.只写一段者：只写一段者：0 0- -4 4分；只写两段者：分；只写两段者：0 0- -9 9分（指规定三段的作文）分（指规定三段的作文）To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 1评分样卷 1 5 5分分 基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. T

5、hey worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in govener also. They lead other people comtral, and make out plans. There are many women scientist also. They event new things to improve our life.With the changes in their social role, womens position in the fam

6、ily has been improved as well. In ancient, womens position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion things with her husband, do what sh

7、e wants to do.In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. We also should realize, womens likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condit

8、ion. Im sure, the liberation of women would be increased.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 1评分样卷 2 11 11分分 切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误方面的错误Women are playing an increasing important part in society today. More and more women go to work to earn money instead of

9、 keeping the house or looking after the children. Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field. As we know, many women sports teams have won the worlds champion such as Chinese Womens Volleyball Team.With the changes in their social role, womans position in the family has bee

10、n improved as well. Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places. Husbands and wife are equal now. They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Also in some places, women are considered be

11、ing “things” belong to men. They have little chance to find jobs. They dont get equal pay for equal job. This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 1评分样卷 3 8 8分分 基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及用词

12、不当，但可以理解。用词不当，但可以理解。Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. Many women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before. For example, some women are not secretary in the office, instead , they become manager of a company.Wi

13、th the changes in their social role, womans position in the family has been improved as well. In the world today, more and more women have their own jobs. They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband. With the economic situation improved, their family position is improvi

14、ng.In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do some works or do some shopping. They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a company.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 1评分样卷 4

15、14 14分分 切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。小错，但不影响理解。Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can d

16、o are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each o

17、ther. Also, you can hardly find out that in todays families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. We also should realize that womens liberty is limi

18、ted. For example, many factories want men as their employees and the chance of women is slimer than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. Im sure the liberation of women would be reached.错误范例观点结构Some hold the belief that their children can benefit from the teachers abroad. For

19、 example, studying abroad can find a better job after returning home. （后一句的举例不能解释说明前一句的观点。）语法句型They want to find a good work with high salary are very difficult except the greatest people, but it is only a few people. （中国式英语造成双谓语。）Writing practiceFinish your writing before Wednesday.Use the followin

20、g structure.A General Statement Supported by Specific Details & Reasons Normally, a writer presents his statement at the beginning of a paragraph, and supports it with specific details, then hell briefly tell readers the reason(s).Writing practiceFinish your writing before Wednesday.Use the followin

21、g structure.A general point : Computers will play an increasingly important role in our daily life. Specific details:1. learn about news worldwide2. evaluate and treat sickness3. show routes, take money from our bank accounts4. take care of regular duties in the homeThe reason:Computers work efficie

22、ntly.Writing practice Decide the topic. Write the topic sentence . Turn the topic sentence into HOW & WHY question. Before writing, outline details & reasons of the questions.Writing practiceComputers will play an increasingly important role in our daily life. With computers linked to the Internet,

23、we can stay indoors and learn about news worldwide. Doctors will use computers to evaluate and treat sickness. Computers in cars will show our routes, take money from our bank accounts, identify motor problems, figure out repair costs and locate repair shops. Home computers will take care of regular

24、 duties in the home, help with housework, and order food. This is because computers can work more efficiently.Sample WritingTo get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 1. 1. 大纲要求：大纲要求： 写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。2.2.写作部分考核的技能写作部分考核的技能A.A.思想表达思

25、想表达1）.表达中心思想2）.表达重要或特定信息3）.表达观点、态度等B.B.篇章组织篇章组织4）.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5）.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 2 2. . 大纲要求：大纲要求： 写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。3.3.写作部分考核的技能写作部分考核的技能C.C.语言运用语言运用6）.运用恰当的词汇7）.运用正确的语法8）.运用合适的句子结构9）.

26、使用正确的标点符号10）.运用衔接手段表达句间关系(如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等)D.D.写作格式写作格式11）.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 4 4. . 考试题型考试题型 描写文（Description） 说明文（Exposition） 议论文（Argumentation） 应用文：书信作文To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 w

27、riting in terms of requirements. 5 5. . 高分策略高分策略 坚持听作文 背诵：精彩词汇、句型、句子、框架、范文 默写 写作实践To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 6 6. . 近年作文题近年作文题2006.6 Volunteers Needed(应用文)2006.6.On Students Selecting Lecturers（论说文）2006.12.Spring Festival Gala on TV(论说文)

28、2007.6. Welcome to our club （应用文）2007.12. What Electives to Choose（论说文） 2008.6. Recreational Activities(论说文) 2008.12. Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags （论说文）2009.6. Free Admission to Museums（论说文） 2009.12. Create a Green Campus (论说文)To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in t

29、erms of requirements. 6 6. . 近年作文题近年作文题2010年6月 Due attention should be given to spelling(论说文)2010年12月 How should parents help children to be independent?(论说文)2011年6月 Online shopping (论说文)2011年12月 Nothing succeeds without a strong will (论说文)2012年6月 On excessive packaging (论说文)2012年12月 柱状图2013年6月 看图作文

30、（多题）2013年12月 看图作文（多题）To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 7 7. . 练习过程练习过程 分题型讲解 对各种题型的范文进行抄写，并整理句型To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 8 8. . 提纲式作文（以范文为例）提纲式作文（以范文为例）（）开头段写作（多以现象描述引入主题）（）论述段开展（观

31、点分析（）论述段开展（观点分析）（ 3 ）总结/ 个人观点表述To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 8 8. . 提纲式作文（以范文为例）提纲式作文（以范文为例）（）开头段写作（多以现象描述引入主题）（）论述段开展（观点分析）（ 3 ）总结/ 个人观点表述9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意选词的准确性：注意选词的准确性：learn knowledge （）acquire/get knowle

32、dge（）As the only child in my family, Im not used to sleeping with so many people in the same dormitory. （）As the only child in my family, Im not used to sharing a room with so many people. （）To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写

33、作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意选词的准确性：注意选词的准确性：Professor Li is very popular with the students because he is modest and childish. （）Childish childlikeMary won Jane in the speech contest （ ）won beatWith the development of big cities, a problem has arisen before us: traffic in cities has become more and

34、 more serious than before. （）more and more serious heavier and heavierTo get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意选词的准确性：注意选词的准确性：They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a good climate and weake

35、n noise.They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a healthy climate and reduce noise. In addition, a bicycle will never give off poisonous gas as a car and it needs only a little place to park.In addition, a bicycle does not give off poisonous gas as a car and it needs only a small place to

36、 park.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意词义：注意词义：With the industrious development, there is a great need for different kinds of energy. industrious industrialTV commercials have a profound influen

37、ce on our every day life. every day everydayFirst we should use our natural resources in an economic way. economic economicalTo get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意词汇的搭配：注意词汇的搭配：However, the speed of

38、a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. However, the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle. In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. In the past the price of milk was so high that most families could not afford it. To get familiar wit

39、h CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意词汇的搭配：注意词汇的搭配：The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speak English. The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be poorer if one

40、 cannot speak EnglishIn recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased. In recent one and two years, the number of people who take TOEFL test has decreased.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的

41、词汇选择恰当的词汇注意词汇的搭配：注意词汇的搭配：In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%. In the past few years, the consumption of grain has decreased by nearly 20%. To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意修

42、饰语注意修饰语：He neither speaks English nor Chinese. He speaks neither English nor Chinese.At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons. When I was six years old, my father began to give me English lessons.Having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples living standard has bee

43、n greatly improved. Since economic reforms have been carried out in our country, peoples living standard has greatly been improved.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意修饰语注意修饰语：To improve ones writi

44、ng skill, regular practice is essential. To improve ones writing skill, one must make a regular practice.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意注意词性：词性：This term well very busy. This term well be very

45、 busy. The cave like a room very much. The cave looked very much like a room. To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意注意连接词：连接词：I started to play table-tennis in middle school, still play it now. I sta

46、rted to play table-tennis in middle school, and I still play it now. TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it. TV becomes an important part in our daily life, because we cannot live without it. To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing i

47、n terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意注意连接词：连接词：The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly, everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk.The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk.In

48、spite of this obvious advantage, it also brings inconvenience to some people, who have to take buses not their cars, and so slow down their speed.In spite of this obvious advantage, it also brings inconvenience to some people who have to take buses instead of their cars, and so slow down their speed

49、.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意注意连接词：连接词：The old ones may think too much about safety, the young ones accept it more quickly.Old people may think too much about safety, while/but/whereas youn

50、g people accept them more quickly.Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished. Then everyone will comply with this regulation.Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished so that everyone will comply with this regulation.To get familiar with CET 4 writingSt

51、ep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意注意连接词：连接词：But in fact, there are also many people who think numbers have nothing to do with luck.But there are also many people who think that numbers, in fact, have nothing to do with luck.To get

52、familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：A)A)选择恰当的词汇选择恰当的词汇注意注意指代关系：指代关系：People have been fighting against the influences of TV commercials, but it often proves useless. People have been fighting against the influences of TV comm

53、ercials, but this effort often proves useless. Television provides us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly. By providing us with a vivid, colorful world, television enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing

54、in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：B B) )选词的丰富性选词的丰富性例如：（1）除了用clear, 还可用obvious、apparent, evident 来陈述观点-Its very clear that可替换important 的还有significant, vital, crucial, momentous, etc.（2）句与句、段与段之间的转折和承接but, and, so that, as well as, not onlybut alsoFirstly Secondly/Moreover/In add

55、ition/ FurthermoreFinally.By way of conclusionTo get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：C)C)时态和语法时态和语法This is what we called the problem of population explosion. (注意时态)This is what we call the problem of population explosio

56、n.Smoking harms our health. （注意习惯）It is harmful to smoke.This year my listening skills have made much progress.（注意文法）I have made great progress in my listening this year.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：C)C)时态和语法时态

57、和语法注意时态注意时态With the opening of our country toward the world in recent years, English becomes more and more important.With the opening of our country toward the world in recent years, English has become more and more important.Do you have a feeling that the world is getting smaller and smaller althou

58、gh the size of the earth doesnt change?Do you have a feeling that the world is getting smaller and smaller although the actual size of the earth hasnt changed?To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：C)C)时态和语法时态和语法注意时态注意时态

59、The need for more jobs makes us develop our industries.The need for more jobs will make us develop our industries.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. . 写作过程中的注意事项：写作过程中的注意事项：C)C)时态和语法时态和语法注意习惯：切勿写中国式英语注意习惯：切勿写中国式英语Reading books can acquire k

60、nowledge.Through reading one can acquire knowledge.Now people go abroad is not easy.It is not easy for people to go abroad now.His joke made me laugh to death.I was quite amused by the joke he just told.To get familiar with CET 4 writingStep 2Introduce CET 4 writing in terms of requirements. 9 9. .