考试说明读后续写样题分析

1、读后续写样题veA funny thing happened to Arthur whe n he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue n ear the First Nati onal Bank, he heard the sound of some on etry ing to start a car. He tried aga in and aga in but could n t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked in side at the

2、 face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked,“ It looks like yougot a problem, ” Arthur said.t start my car. ”“I m afraid so. I m in a big hurry and I can“ Is there something I can do to help? ” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then sa

3、id, “Thanks. If you re sure it wouldn t be too muchtrouble, you could help meget these suitcases into a taxi. ”“No trouble at all. Id be glad to help.The young man got out and took one of the placing it on the ground, he turned to get up the first suitcase an alarm.suitcases from the back seat. Afte

4、rthe other one. Just as Arthur picked and started walk ing, he heard thelong loud no ise ofIt was from the bank. There had bee n arobbery（抢劫）!Park Avenue had bee n quiet a mome nt before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm andthe shoutsof people running from all directions.Cars stopp

5、ed and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other,“ What happen ed? But every one had a differe nt an swer.Arthur, still carry ing the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woma n in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and the n a

6、t him. Arthurshe look ing at me like that? I m the bank thief ! ”was surp rised.“ Why is” He thought.“The suitcase! She thinksArthur looked around at the crowd of people. He becamefrightened,and withoutano ther thought, he started to run.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的 关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的

7、 开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线 标出你所使用的关键词语。the young manshouting behind,“Stop,stop! ”the P olice Statio n and Arthur.the young man shout ing （动作）beh ind, “ Stop,P aragra ph 1:As he was running, Arthur heardP aragra ph 2:The taxi stopped in front of2样题参考范文P aragra ph 1:As he was running, Arthur heardstop!

8、” And at that moment （ 时间）,Arthur suddenly （ 时间）realized （ 心理） that maybe （ 心、理） the young man was the bank robber. Arthur was a bit frighteded （ 情感）,and he continued to rush （ 动作）un til he saw a taxi. He stopped it, jumped in with thesuitcase a nd told （ 动作）the driver, Goto the p olice stati on, pl

9、 ease. The man shout ing （动作）beh ind is the bankthief !The taxi raced away like the wind.P aragra ph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthurtold （ 动作）thepolice what had happened. On hearing （ 时间）his story, the police was determ in ded to（心理）find out the truth about the robbery.

10、They opened the suitcase and to their surp rise （情感）,they spo tted （动作）a large sum ofmoney in side it. The n （ 时间）the p olice asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase. Later （时可）,with the in formati on, the p olicearrested （ 动作）the robber. The p olice andthe bank both tha nked A

11、rthura lot.再来看该书编者提供的另一篇范文：（点击看原图）03评分原则及注意事项04解题思路1读懂前文，把握特色评分会从以下4个方面进行综合考量：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。在4项评分内容中，内容和形式（词语、 句式等）的上下连贯衔接占两项，给定内容的使用占一项，语言的综合能力占一项。 因此，读后续写的后文部分与给定前文应该是和谐完整、浑然一体的一篇文章，从 内容到形式要力争尽可能地保持一致，而且还要使用所给定的画线词语，这就要求 考生仔细阅读给定的前文，在充分

12、理解文章内容的基础上，还要认真体会前文的文 体、主旨句、词语和句式特点。只有在充分理解和把握前文的内容和特色之后，才 能续写出和前文高度一致的文章。样题中，给定的文章部分讲述了Arthur在帮助一个年轻人时听到有人抢劫了银行，于是Arthur怀疑这个年轻人就是抢劫银行的嫌疑犯。文章第一句话“ A funny thinghappened to Arthur whe n he was on the way to work one day.” 就是具有主题句性质的句子，说明下文所读到的文章是Arthur在上班路上发生的一件“有趣的” 事。funny 词奠定了全文的感情基调，我们后面续写的故事结尾就要

13、围绕“趣味 性”续写，从而使文章具有幽默特色。读懂了文章的主要内容后，我们可以发现，故事的发展因年轻人的身份不明而产生 两个不同的续写思路：一是这个年轻人就是抢劫银行的罪犯，Arthur帮助警察抓住了这个坏人；另一个思路是Arthur误会了这个年轻人，他其实并不是抢劫银行的罪 犯。基于以上思路，我们可以续写两个不同的结尾。但是，这两个结尾还是存在优 劣之分的。读后续写试题最后还有续写要求，尤其是续写两段给出了段首指导语，这也是文章 续写的重要提示，也是考生应该仔细阅读体会的地方。第一段中年轻人呼喊Arthur停下来，第二段中Arthur坐出租车到了警察局，这两句话基本设定了故事发展的主 线；文

14、章主题句中的funny也表明了文章的基调：这个故事是一个幽默故事，如果 以这个年轻人是抢劫犯最后被抓续写下去，故事的幽默性就远逊于第二个思路的续 写了。至此，我们要续写的文章部分从内容到文章基调就已经完全确定下来了。挑词选句，连篇成文读后续写试题要求续写部分使用至少 5个所给的画线词语，续写的段落数量也设定 为两段，而且每段的开头语已经写好，这就要求在确定文章内容后，注意选择不同 的句式，按照适当的顺序，将要求的词汇编排入自己的续写内容中。所给样题的文中共选定了以下10个词或短语：Park Avenue，the young man，in the back seat，bank ； 人物（3 个）

15、：the young man， ;事物（4 个）: suitcases ， loud noise of an alarm，suitcases ， in the back seat， loud noise of an alarm， robbery ， bank， the shouts， people ， the bank thief。这10个词或短语又可以根据类别划分为地点（3 个）：Park Avenue,people， the bank thief robbery， the shouts 。Arthur帮助警察抓住了那个年轻人，但发现他其实不是2个段落，根据第一段指导语(As he“Stop

16、， stop ! ”)联系我们前面想定的思路：抢劫银行的罪犯，是个误会。续写内容共分为was running ， Arthur heard the young man shout ing beh ind，禾R第二段指导语(The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station andArthur.)我们可以大胆想象出：尽管那个年轻人在身后大喊“停下来！”，但 Arthur还是成功地带着箱子坐上出租车，来到警察局。正当Arthur和警察以为发现了抢劫银行案件的线索时，年轻人进来了，证明是个误会，箱子里装的不是抢的 钱而是那个年轻人的个人物品！在这个内容中，

17、我们就可以保证能用到bank，theyoung man，the bank thief ， suitcases ， robbery 等词汇。再来看一篇范文，看看如何根据两段的开头语以及各段关键词，组织上下文：As he was running ， Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，“Stop，stop ! ” Con sideri ng the young man might be the bank thief : Arthur did ntstopped， in stead ， he ran faster and stopped a taxi

18、. Once he got into the taxi ， he told the driver the young man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the n earest p olice stati on. The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away quickly.（61 words）The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthurthanked the driverand directly went in. Just as Arthur was reporting the robbery case of the bank happened on the Park Avenue and describ ing the young man to the police ， he heard a voice outside ，“Help! Help !” To Arthurs surprise ，it was the young man. He had f