2021高三英语人教一轮课件：层级4第1讲书信和邮件

1、写作分层突破层级四类别构建第1讲书借和邮件一、感谢信和道歉信 （一）感谢信谋篇布局/直接说明写信目的一描述事情经过，写岀感谢的理由、再次表示感谢，希望做出回报壳点句式;夺人眼球开头句；9P 1 Pm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during.非常感谢您在期间给予我无私的帮助。；2 Pm writing to convey/express my gratitude for your kind/generous help during.我写信感谢您在期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。；3. I would

2、 like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持，我想借此机会表达感谢。亮点出彩篇中间4. Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to.；非常感谢您为帮助我们所做的一切。；5. Thanks to your generous/selfless/kind help, without which I wouldnt have made such

3、 great progress.多亏您慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，没有您的帮助，我就不会取 得这么大的进步。；韵味无穷结尾句6. It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.J您对我如此友好和慷慨，我真是感激不尽。；：7. I wish there were a better word than “thanks to express my appreciation for your generous help.任何语言都不能表达您对我慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。；8

4、.1 will be more than pleased 讦I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by.箱如果我有机会通过报答您的好意，我会非常高兴。I佳作背诵；（2019浙江卷）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex 即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1 ；1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；| 3临别祝愿。；注意：；1 词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。!【参考范文】Dear Alex,Im sorry to hear that you are going to return to your co

5、untry very soon and Im writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.First of all, thank you for helping me learn English. Without your help, I wouldnt have made so great progress in English-learning. Besides what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interes

6、t in foreign cultureI wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.Yours,Li Hua（二）道歉信谋篇布局/说明道歉的缘由一导致出错的原因，并提出补救措施、再次请求对方谅解院点句式夺人眼球开头句;1. Im writing to express/convey my sincere apology to you. 我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意。；2. Now,I am writing this letter to show you my deep regret. 现在，我写信向你表达我深切的悔意。

7、；亮点出彩篇中间3.1 apologize sincerely for what I said that day. I didnt mean to hurtyou.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。4. Much to my regret, I was unable to. And I wish that you willaccept my apology.I非常遗憾我不能够希望你能接受我的道歉。;韵味无穷结尾句5. I sincerely hope this doesnt cause you too much inconvenience. 我真诚地希望这不会给你带来太多的不

8、便。；6. Ifeel sorry indeed to have put you in such great trouble. 给你带来这么大的麻烦真的十分抱歉。；7. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。；8. Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused.对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。；:佳作背诵；（2016全国卷III）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去 书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1

9、 1.表不歉意；I I I I I I I ”；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。；注意:；1 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。!：!【参考范文】Dear Bob,I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much

10、 trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If it is convenient for you, lets meet at 8： 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,L

11、i Hua语篇演练（2019重庆一中模拟）假定你是一名加拿大籍交换生David, 2018年来到中国华为公司学习,期间好友李华在汉语学习和生活方面给了 你很大的帮助。请你给他写信，表示感谢。要点如下：1. 简述你在公司学习期间遇到的困难，如语言、生活等;2. 感谢好友李华给予的帮助；3. 邀请他来加拿大旅游。! ! I注意： IlliI1 词数100左右； II2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Li Hua,I am writing to express mjgenerous help given to me./ sincere gratitude to you for yourYo

12、urs,David【参考范文】Dear Li Hua,I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help given to me.Without your encouragement and advice, I wouldn*t have benefited so much from the experience.During my stay in Huawei, I came across a lot of difficulties. First of all, Chinese was the

13、major troublemaker for me. Due to a limited vocabulary, I was always afraid of communicating with others in Chinese It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself fluently in Chinese. Whats more, whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness, you were always with me, and were ready to g

14、ive me help patiently.My appreciation is beyond any words and I will be more than pleased if I can show you around Canada in return for your kindness.Yours,David（2019福建师大附中模拟）假定你是李华，前天是你的外国朋友 Arnie的生日。你本答应要参加她的生日聚会，但你当时正忙着准备 期中考试，忘了赴约。请写封信向Amic表达你的歉意，说明原因, 并提岀补救的方法。；注意：；1 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

15、3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。：；：Dear Anne,I am indeed very sorry thatYour truly,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Anne,am indeed very sorry that 【didnt attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come

16、 and celebrated the precious moment with you. But the mid-term examination is around the corner. I was so busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examination? I

17、 do long for a pleasant chat with you.It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get- together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology.Your truly,Li Hua二推荐信和申请信(-)推荐信111谋篇布局;/直接说明写信目的陈一介绍推荐的物或人的几个方面，说明推荐理由 希望对方接受自己的推荐壳点句式;夺人眼球开头句；9P 1. Learning that you are coming to visi

18、t China, Id like to recommend several places of interest to you.得知你将来中国游玩，我向你推荐几处名胜。；2. Having learned that our library is planning to buy new books, Im willing to recommend some books to you.得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。；3. Tm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you are going to Beijing, and

19、Id like to offer my recommendation.得知你要去北京我很高兴，我想向你提岀我的建议。I亮点出彩篇中间4. It offers you an opportunity to do something interesting and creative. Meanwhile, it provides you a source of pleasureI它提供给你一个机会来做有趣且富有创意的事情，同时也向你提 供了快乐的源泉。 ;5 I recommend that you sleep in a tent at night so that you can get close

20、 to nature.我建议你晚上在帐篷中睡觉以便你可以亲近大自然。；6. There are all kinds of courses for you to choose from, so you can visit the website for detailed information.箱有许多课程可供选择，你可以登录网站了解更多信息。I韵味无穷结尾句7 . I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final decision.;我真希望你能考虑我的建议并作岀最后的决定

21、。：8 Ill be more than happy if you can take my recommendations/ideas into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。；佳作背诵；（2019安徽省五校联盟质检）假定你是李华。你班的交换生Jim对 中国传统文化感兴趣，准备下学期选修一门相关课程，向你征询建议。 请给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：；1.推荐一门选修课；:1说明推荐的理由；!3.提岀学习这门课程的建议。:注意： IlliI1 词数100左右； II2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Jim,I am glad tha

22、t you are interested in traditional Chinese culture and eager to explore more J think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. By learning ancient Chinese poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Furthermore, you can feel the charm of the language by reading

23、 poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, yoiTd better read and recite as many poems as possible. Besides, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.What do you think of the course? I am sure

24、you will have a lot of fun from it.Yours,Li Hua（二）申请信谋篇布局,自我介绍，说明招聘信息，提岀申请 一陈述自身优势和应聘目的说明获准后的工作表现并提出希望壳点句式;夺人眼球开头句;1 Tm writing in reply to the notice for volunteers, hoping that I may have an opportunity to act as a guide.；我写信以回复招聘志愿者的启事，希望我能有机会担任向导。2. Learning from the advertisement you have poste

25、d that you are in need of.to do.Im writing for a chance to work as.玉从您登岀的广告中得知您需要做我写信以求一个 做（工作）的机会。；:亮点出彩篇中间3. Iameasy-going and outgoing and able to get on well with others.!我很随和、外向，能够和别人友好相处。；4. Not only am I outgoing and energetic but also I am optimistic andenthusiastic.我不仅开朗活泼，而且乐观热情。；5. I have

26、 the education and the experience that fit me for your advertised position.6. I think I am qualified for the job, because I have a good knowledge of.我认为我能胜任这项工作，因为我精通韵味无穷结尾句7. I would appreciate it if I could be offered the chance. I am sure I can be of great help for you.I如果我能得到这个机会,我将不胜感激。我确信我能对您有

27、很大 帮助。;8. Should you treat my application favorably, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.如果您看中我的申请，我将不遗余力地提供最佳服务。；佳作背诵；（2019全国卷I）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术 馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：!1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；!3. 能做的事情。；!注意： IlliI1 词数100左右； II2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 结束语己为你写好。:Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir

28、/Madam,My name is Li Hua. Pm a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in London now. Fm glad to learn that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition. I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition. So I am writing this letter asking to be a volunteer.I am good at English

29、 and familiar with Chinese paintings. I would like to volunteer to help visitors, introduce Chinese paintings, spread Chinese culture, and strengthen world cultural exchanges. My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China. I would appreciate it if you could agree to my re

30、quest.Yours,Li Hua语篇演练（2019保定市调研）假定你是李华，在你校学习的英国交换生Kavin计划寒假回国看望父母和朋友。他发电子邮件给你希望你给他推荐几件有中国特色的礼物带回国。请根据提示给他写一封电子邮 件，主要内容包括：；:1.推荐的礼物（中国结、剪纸、丝巾等）；2. 推荐的理由；!；!3. 希望和祝愿。注意： 11111 词数100左右；I :2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中国结Chinese knot【参考范文】Dear Kavin,Glad to receive your email. You asked me to recommend some C

31、hinese traditional gifts that you will buy for your family and friends. Here Id like to make some recommendations. The first one is the Chinese knot, which stands for friendship, love and good luck. The second one is the Chinese paper cutting, for it is a world cultural heritage. Paper- cuts vary in

32、 form and style and they are attractive. Chinese silk is one of the most popular handcrafts representing China so I think the silk scarf is a very good choice for you. In addition, it is convenient to take along. Hoping my suggestions can help you.Have a good vacation!Yours,Li HuaB；（2019成都市检测）假设你是李华

33、。你在网上看到了杜甫草堂招聘志愿者的启事，对此很感兴趣，请根据如下招聘信息写一封申请邮件。Volunteers WantedA group of middle school students from Australia are going to visit the Du Fifs Thatched Cottage on January 2nd, 2020. We are looking for three senior high school students as voluntary guides. The main responsibilities are to introduce Du

34、 Fu to the visitors and show them around the Cottage.If interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Mr. Zhang at zhanghu 163. com before December 27.i 注意：iii；i 词数100左右；:;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；J 薛童3产开头语和结束语已为你写好。；Dear Sir,Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir,Knowing that you want v

35、oluntary guides for Australian middle school students on the Internet, Id like to apply for it.First, allow me to introduce myself. Pm a high school student who is very interested in English and can speak English fluently. And I won the citys English speech contest last year, so its no problem for m

36、e to communicate with foreign friends, especially with my peers. In addition, as a native, I have a good understanding of Du Fus Thatched Cottage and visit it on a regular basis with my friends to learn more about our great traditional poems.Ill appreciate it if I am given this valuable opportunity.

37、Yours,三 邀请信和建议信()邀请信 I I谋篇布局说明活动并提出邀请说明活动内容和参加活动的益处期待对方接受邀请院点句式夺人眼球开头句;1 Its my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to join us. 非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们当中来。；2. I wonder if I/we have the honour to invite you to the party. 我想知道我/我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。；3. Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearb

38、y nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.箱我想邀请您下周六重阳节与我们一起去附近的养老院。1亮点出彩篇中间4. We are having/planning.on.（date） and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us.;我们定于（日期）（活动），如果你能来参加就太好了5. The following are some details about./Here are some details about./Some details about.ar

39、e as follows.的细节如下。6. To begin with, we will. Besides, there will be a number of/various activities such as.which will.首先,我们将0此外，将会有许多活动，例如这将韵味无穷结尾句7. Ido hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you.;我真心希望你方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。;8. We/I would appreciate it if you could confirm your pa

40、rticipation at your early/earliest convenience.如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们/我将不胜感激。；佳作背诵；（2019全国卷III）假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件 邀请你的英国朋友Allcri参加，内容包括：I|1. 时间；2. 活动安排；常3欢迎他表演节目。；注意:1 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Allen,Im Li Hua, your Chinese friend. Pm glad to tell you that a Chinese classical music concert

41、 will be held in the music hall of our school on November 8th. According to the concert poster, many music masterpieces will be played by a famous band. Knowing that you are fond of classical music, Id like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance. Pm sure it is a good chanc

42、e to perform your favorite music.If it is convenient for you, Ill meet you at the entrance of the music hall at 7:00 that evening.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua（二）建议信谋篇布局/说明写信缘由 -陈述具体的建议和理由、希望建议被考虑和采用売点句式;夺人眼球开头句；1 Since/Now that you are worried about the cultural differences, Im writing

43、 to/Id like to offer some suggestions about how to.因为你担心文化差异，我写信/我想就如何提些建议。:2 . I am sorry to learn/know that you are now having trouble/difficulty communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.存游得知你在与他人交流方面有些困难，你也可能经常感到孤独，我 很难过。亮点出彩篇中间3. In addition, it would be a good idea/a wise choice

44、 if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this, you will calm yourself down.g另外，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意/明智的选择。 通过这样做，会使你自己平静下来。!:4. Ld like to suggest/advise that you should make use of time to master the present subjects.;我建议你利用时间掌握现在的课程。；5. Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of C

45、hinese and adapt to the life here more easily.只有用这种方式，你才能加深对汉语的理解并更容易适应这里的生活。6. As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is very important.箱至于如何与同学相处，记住，友善最重要。II韵味无穷结尾句7. I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful.;我希望你会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。;:8. I

46、 am convinced that with your effort, you can manage to get over/overcome these difficulties.諾我相信，有了你的努九你会成功克服这些困难的。:佳作背诵（2017-北京卷）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国 旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：；1.你建议的线路；1你的理由；!；!3.你的祝愿。1注意：1111.词数不少于50； 12.开头和结尾已给岀，不计入总词数。；Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】D

47、ear Jim,Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot

48、about the histoiy of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That*s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choiceHope youll have a good time in China.Yours,Li Hua语篇演练（2019安徽六校教育研究会联考）假定你是李华，正在你班学习汉语的英国留学生Bi

49、ll对中国的建筑很感兴趣，周末你想带他到苏州园 林游玩。请你给Bill写一封电子邮件，邀请他一同前往:谿注意：1 111,11势词数100左右； iiii; 可2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。: ；3开头语和结束语己写好，不计入总词数。；Dear Bill,How are you doing?Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Bill,How are you doing? Pm writing to invite you to visit SuzhouGardens with me.As the weather is excellent this weekend, I will

50、pay a visit to Suzhou Gardens, a beautiful tourist attraction. As far as I know, you are deeply interested in Chinese history and culture, especially Chinese buildings of fancy designs. In Suzhou Gardens, Pm convinced that you are sure to be attracted by varieties of buildings. If free, would it be

51、possible for you to meet me at the railway station at 6 a. m. on Saturday morning? We will go there by train and return on Sunday afternoon. I would be delighted if you could be with me.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li HuaB；（2019湖南省六校联考）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jamie来信 说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多 汉字不认识

52、，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回 信，内容包括：；:1.表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提岀建议。：；注意： I I I I I I Iqi 词数100左右 :；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；：3. 开头语和结束语己写好，不计入总词数。；： 参考词汇：中国传统文学traditional Chinese literature；汉字Chinese characterDear Jamie,Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Jamie,I am more than glad to know that you are interested in t

53、he traditional Chinese literature. Ifs never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you dont have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how

54、to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and Tm always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and practicing. You are sure to make progress!Best wishes!Yours,四介绍信和祝贺信（一）介绍信1111谋篇布局;/说明写信目的0具体介绍相关信息表达期望和祝愿売点句式;夺人眼球开头句；1. Delighted to know you show great interest in.（某文化习俗/活 动）,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.很高兴得知你对兴趣浓厚，我写信告诉你相关细节。；2. Having heard that you are interested in I would like to introduce something about it.;得知你对感兴趣，我想介绍一些相关情况。：3. As for your last letter askin