高考英语书面表达阅卷情况分析及启示ppt课件

1、 0808高考英语书面表达阅卷情况高考英语书面表达阅卷情况 分析及启示分析及启示 本次高考阅卷特点： 1.阅卷的速度快； 2. 阅卷时间长； 3.阅卷教师的心思形状： 4. 高考卷其他部分较浅； 给分中庸 平均分： 峰值： 约13分 1718分 最吃亏学生群：中等左右学生 书面表达是提高平均分 最大的潜力股 影响给分的四大要素：影响给分的四大要素： 一一. 作文的卷面；作文的卷面； 二二. 文中所采用的言语资料的层次；文中所采用的言语资料的层次； 三三. 行文的流畅度；行文的流畅度； 四四. 文章的思想性；文章的思想性； 一一. 作文的卷面；作文的卷面； 美丽的书写是写作得分的亮点 建议 I：

2、 1. 1. 高三各次考试中打卷面分；高三各次考试中打卷面分； 2. 2.大张旗鼓地组织学生练书法；大张旗鼓地组织学生练书法； 3. 3. 提供规范的考试用纸提供规范的考试用纸; ; 二二. 文中所采用的言语资料的层次；文中所采用的言语资料的层次； 人靠衣装，文靠词装 A. 词汇的选择灵敏新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型构造运用灵敏多变; good good 2. think2. think 3. in my opinion3. in my opinion perfect. excellent. outstanding promising favorable hold the view that

3、it is widely shared that it is universally acknowledged that for my part ， from my own perspective 4. more and more4. more and more 5. remember5. remember 6.for example6.for example 7. helpful 7. helpful keep in mind an increasing number of a growing number of to name only a few beneficial, rewardin

4、g 1. 充分利用课文；充分利用课文； 建议建议 II II： 2. 鼓励同窗平常注重优美语句鼓励同窗平常注重优美语句 的搜集和欣赏；的搜集和欣赏； 3. 从日常讲解作文做起；从日常讲解作文做起； Destination every now and then; get the itch to ; feel the urge to ; stretch itself lazily along; give a glimpse of; a walk through is a history lesson; Few visitors leave feeling disappointed. is a pa

5、radise for ; a feast for the eye; a wide variety of 三. 行文的流畅度 上下贯穿、一气呵成 建议 III： 2. 组织学生归纳各种功能的连词， 组建“连词库 1. 突出文章段落中的主题句； Some examples： 意义上承上启下的连词： Whats more, moreover, at the same time, then, besides, in addition, furthermore 意义转机的连词： however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, in o

6、ther words, by the way 四文章思想性的表达 “万能模板景象：新八股文 08年上海卷书面表达： Guided Writing 他班将组队参与学校组织的集体舞竞赛 group dancing competition)，班长 希望大家积极参与。对此谈谈他的看法。 他的文章必需包括以下内容： 他能否会参与竞赛 他做出该决议的详细理由 08年广东卷书面表达： 学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，他参与 其中的“大学校园生活讨论。听完Mike的发 言之后，他预备写一份发言稿，标题是 “Preparing Myself for College Life，内 容要点包括： 1. 以约30

7、个词概括Mike的发言要点； 2. 然后以约120个词谈谈他理想的大学生活， 内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受；(2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及他打 算如何顺应。 四文章思想性的表达 “万能模板景象：新八股文 建议 IV： 有思绪，有活路 补充： 1. 防止低级错误，尤其写好首尾段； 2. 对高考最后一段时间书面表达辅导的 认识; 高考29分高分作文欣赏 There are basically two ways to get work done. One way is working individually and the other is working

8、 in a team. Of course, they each have their own characteristics. The former, working individually, can allow people to do things in whatever ways they like. Besides, people can also solve problems by themselves. The latter, however, is quite different. It requires team spirit. As is known to all, tw

9、o heads are better than one. Many people can talk over problems together. Whats more, people can learn from each other in team work. Personally, I prefer to combine them together. Because working individually can help me build up my ability to stand on my own feet while working in a team gives me a

10、chance to acquire experience from others. (129 words. ) 26分作文鉴赏 There are basically two ways to get work done. Namely, working individually and working in a team. Each of them has its own advantages. The former one, that is，working individually, is a very way to develop ones DIY ability. People make

11、 arrangement and solve problems by themselves, which will contribute to the forming of personality of independence. The latter shows exactly the immense power of cooperation. People discuss together and learn from each other. And any problems can be overcome more effectively and efficiently. In terms of me, I prefer the latter one. As an old saying goes, three minds make a giant. Also it is easy to imagine that o