2014年最新英语中考书面表达预测2

1、2014 年英语中考书面表达预测提示性作文的写法 ：写提示作文要注意两个方面：一是内容；二是表达。 对内容的要求是包含所有要点，如果要点遗漏就会失分。为防止遗漏要点，下笔前可在题上标出 1,2,3。最难的是表达。一般要求是用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯，句型、短语使用正确，不出现语言错误； 较高的要求是能写出结构复杂的句子，熟练运用较好的短语和句型，并作适当发挥。步骤：1. 理顺要点在所给提示上标出要点，然后按事件的先后顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。2. 构成框架在理顺要点的基础上，定人称、定时态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾，形成框架。3. 组织句子，连句成篇多用熟悉的短语、句型来表

2、达，遇有表达障碍，可以换一种说法。注意句子间的逻辑关系， 适当采用递进、 让步、转折、因果等关联词语 ，使短文层次分明，过渡自然。5. 检查修改成文后，读一两遍，检查人称、拼写、短语有无错误，要点有无遗漏，有无语法错误。写作的突破方法 1、认真审题，明确要求在提笔写作之前， 花几分钟时间弄清楚题目提示的内容和要求， 以免文不对题。倘若审题不准，就有可能出现 “下笔千言，离题万里 ”的情况。除了审题还要确定文章所需的时态。方法 2、分析要点，编制提纲通过审题，弄清楚文章主题之后， 接着就要考虑文章的内容要点并组织语言材料。根据题目提示或说明， 按事件发生的时间顺序或空间顺序或事理重要性顺序，先取

3、那些典型的、 易于表达的材料作为自己写作的重点， 列出提纲。这样做，可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序， 可以使写作思路清晰， 避免在卷面上出现涂改现象，同时还可以节约时间。方法 3、依纲据点，扩展成文1列出写作提纲之后， 就可以着手写作了。 要注意把题目要求的东西无一遗漏地写进去，以确保内容的完整。同时，对于与要求无关的内容切记任意发挥，画蛇添足。这一步是整个写作过程的关键环节。方法 4、反复检查，查漏补缺在写好短文，从题目要求上要对全文进行检查和修改。经过反复修改润色，才能措辞准确，句子流畅，布局严谨。因此修改文章是提高写作水平的有效方法。注意问题：1.一要点齐全，二表达准确、清楚、地道，三

4、通顺；发挥适度，因为文采不加分，杜绝中文式的句子。2.一人一句，联句成段，张贴优秀范文，还有书写规范。3.句子是灵魂，谓语是关键。4.常见的写作弊病：（ 1）书写不规范，卷面涂改严重，直接影响了得分。（ 2）不按要求写作，无关主题的内容偏多，该表达的要点没说清楚。（ 3）对试卷中提供的要点生硬翻译，不懂得将提供的信息进行加工处理。（ 4）词汇贫乏，遣词造句的基本功不够扎实，对常用词和词组掌握不够（拼写、以及短语、词组的搭配出现错误较多，词义混淆，词性不分）命题原则：1）突出开放性。 书面表达题目将越来越摒弃早期那种 “汉译英 ”式的题目，而会提供更大的自由空间， 让学生都有话可写， 同时激发学

5、生的写作欲望， 唤醒与强化写作主体的意识， 启发思维，拓展心灵。这类题目让学生的写作空间更广泛，便于学生表达真实情感，充分展示个性，这一点与新课标的要求一致。2）突出时代性。 无论从认识、道德伦理、形象展示、哲理思考等方面，书面表达都会体现一定时代性的价值取向。也许有的同学会认为关注时代性 (共性 ) 与提倡发展学生的个性有矛盾， 其实个性化色彩并不排斥时代性， 个性化也要求关注时代性， 两者是相互通融的。 现代中学生应善于关注自己的小天地， 同时放眼大时代。提倡时代感同样可展示真善美的自我，否则写出的都是大话、空话、套话，融入不了个性。3）突出实用性。 细心的同学可能会发现，往年的英语书面表

6、达在设计时会考虑要考查哪些词汇、 哪些句式，而近年来的题目则倾向于考察如何解决某一问题，更注重了实用性。留言条、书信、日记等常见应用文普遍受到关注，电话记录、采访提纲、演讲稿、说明书、海报等应用文也不容忽视。我们还要注意到，一般的看图作文、记叙文、说明文、议论文也各有其 实用性 的一面。24)突出教育性。 书面表达的材料和提示语将更多地体现教育性， 以便让学生在读题和写作的过程中得到熏陶感染和教育。范文预测如下（ 30 个写作项目）：1.雅安芦山县大地震4 月 20 日，四川省雅安地区芦山县发生了罕见的7 级大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈

7、你的做法和感受。要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80 100 字左右 ;词汇参考：地震 earthquake，悲痛 sorrow，受到感动 be deeply moved，安慰 comfort，重建 rebuild，自愿做某事 volunteer to do sth参考范文：April 20th, a big earthquake happened in Lu Shang Town, YaAn ,Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sor

8、row. A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand. I mdeeply m

9、oved by these people. So I lluse my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2. 雪灾去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾

10、，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。 作为一名中学生， 你有何感想 ?有何打算 ?能不能改变这种状态 ?As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn t go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light

11、in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school.We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.3. “4.20”雅安市芦山县大地震后，某校将开展 “人人为灾区孩子献爱心 ”的主题班会活动，

12、现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：1）许多孩子地震后不能上学2）没有足够的学习用品和衣物3）每个孩子都应该有上学的权利34）我 作一些力所能及的事情去帮助、他 ，比如5）希望他 能尽快重返校园注意：1）可根据要点，适当 ， (参考 ： school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can)2） 数： 70 左右参考作文：Dear students，After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. S

13、ome of them are even homeless. Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They donhavet enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We

14、 can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.Students Union4. 甲型 H7N9 流感从 上看到我国上海，江 ，浙江等省份正流行甲型H7N9 流感 (A/H7NI9flu), 学校 引起高度重 ， 你 你正在上海上学的笔友Mike 的健康与安全担心。 立即 他写一封email 他的情况，并 他提出防 建 。要点

15、：1） ：他的健康状况 ;他 学校有无甲型H7N9 流感病例 (A/H7N9flu cases);他 是否 上学。2）建 ：尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;勤洗手 ; 生；多开窗，保持空气新 ;多吃水果蔬菜。范文：Dear Mike,From the TV, I know many A/7IN9 I flu cases are reported recently in some provences of China and many schools pay more attention to it as a result. I mso worried about you. Are you alr

16、ight? Are there any A/H7N9 flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?To stay away from the disease, you d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keepthem clean; Open the window to have more fresh ai

17、r in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you ll be OK.5. 生健康 食 :健康一直是人 关注的 我校要 行以 “关 健康 ” 的主 班会 , 根据下表内容 你的看法 ,写一篇 80 字左右的演 槁。(1)保持健康的重要性(2)保持健康的方法(3)保持健康的 4(4) 你的看法 :1)多吃水果蔬菜保持

18、饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2)多锻炼健身强体 ;3)鄙弃不良习惯范文 1） :Dear boys and girls,Here is my advice about how to keep health / fit.As a middle school student , first you d better do more exercise such as playingball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子 ). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Don t

19、eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit. Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger. Last you mustn tdrink wine orsmoke .They are bad for your health.That is my advice. I hope you are healthyand enjoy your life. Thank y

20、ou, bye!范文 2） :Dear boys and girls,I m talking abouthow to keep healthy/fit. Today many teenagers are unhealthybecause they do less exercise, eat more junk food, and they usually do not have enough time to sleep. If we wish to keep fit, my advices are as follow:Firstly, we must keep taking exercises

21、 every day , and eat lots of fruit and vegetables . Secondly, try to sleep for about 8 hours a night, and remember toto bed early to rise ”Finally,. stay away from cigarettes / smoking / drugs 毒品 . Besides(除此之外 ), don t forget to breathe (呼吸 )the fresh air in the open air .Keep happy every day. That

22、 is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.6. 有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭， 常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。 但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。 “英语角 ”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。 请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。参考词汇： not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer 范文：We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school be

23、cause the food isn t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something which they like to eat. But I mafraid that it bads for their health to eat lunch outside the school, becausesome of the food they buy isn healthy enough. In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and en

24、joy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.7. 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由1)广交朋友但浪费时间2)可自由表达思想但影响学习3)有利于外语学习但可能上当受骗你的看法是 -【参考范文】5Should students make friends on line? Some pe

25、ople say yes. Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting on line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even get help for their foreign language studies。Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be

26、spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line。It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us。8. 多学 生活中的 都会使人 生 力， 了更好地 及解决同学 中存在的心理 力

27、 ，你 班特意开展了一次以 Less Pressure, Better Life 主 的英 演 比 ， 你准 言稿， 你的一些 解 力的好 法， 与同学分享，内容包括：1）同学 中普遍存在的 力是什么；2）我的 力是什么；3）我是如何成功 解我的 力的。注意： 1）文中不得出 真 的姓名和校名。2） 数 80100；短文的开 已 出 (不 入 数 )。参考范文：Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Students in our class

28、are under too much pressure. Some students canget on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams。I malways under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends。Last Monday evening, I had a talk w

29、ith my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem。That s all. Thank you!9. 李 是某校九年 （ 1）班一名新 入的外地学生。几个星期来，老 和同学 她的关心和帮助 她倍感温暖，使她逐 适 了新的学 和生活 境。假如你是李 ， 你根据下面表

30、中的提示 写一 日 ， 叙述 几个星期以来他 你各方面的关心、帮助以及你的感受和愿望。生活方面：1）同学 从家中 来当地可口的食物 我吃；2）同学 我参 校园，周末邀 我到他 家做客；3）下午放学后，同学 常 我去操 跑步、打排球。思想方面：老 、同学 找我 心，和我交朋友。学 方面：感受和愿望：范文：6th JuneMy teachers and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here. They6brought me local food from their homes. They were very delicious. My

31、 classmates showed me around our school. They even invited me to their homes, watching TV and enjoying dinner. After school they often ran and played volleyball with me in the playground. They came to talk with me when we were free. We have been good friends. They helped me with my lessons. When I h

32、ad problems, I went to them for help. I feel very happy here. I hope to make more friends and make progress in my studies.10. 初中的学 生涯即将 束了。 三年来，在你 取知 的同 ， 你的外貌， 趣 好， 都有了一定的改 吧！ 你一定以 (How I Change) ，写一篇短文，告 我 你的 化好 ？字数在 80 左右。温馨提示： 1.短文中 勿使用真 姓名、地点或所在学校名称。 2. 些 也 你有帮助 :hobby, habit, used to, enjoy on

33、eself3.短文开 已 你写好（字数不 入 数）， 你接着往下写。How I ChangeMy life has changed a lot in the past three years.范文两篇：How I Change （一）My life has changed a lot in the past three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was a short and shy girl with long hair. I often listen to music at home. But now I like to make friends an

34、d take part in all kinds of activities. I prefer running with my classmates.So I becoming much healthier than before. Not only my parents but also my teachers are satisfied with me.How I Change （二）My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school

35、. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me.Now, I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some

36、interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.11. 假如你叫 蒙，班主任李老 想了解班 同学的状况，以便有 性地 学生 行考前心理疏 。 你根据下面的内容要求， 班主任李老 写封e-mail， 明自己的情况，并 她 你提一些建 。内容要求：1）学 任 重 ,睡眠不足 ,缺少体育活 。同学 缺乏沟通和交流。2）在家不允 看 、上网、听音 等。3） 数 80 左右。文中不得出 真 的校名、姓名。4）开 和 尾已 出。不 入 数。参考范文 :Dear Ms Li,I m veryglad to w

37、rite to you. I have a lot o f troubles these days. Every day Ihave a lot of homework to do at school. I don t enough time to sleep. I nearly have notime to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk, or play together.When I get back home from school, I m notoallowedwatch TV, surf the I

38、nternet orlisten to my favourite music. I feel worried about them. I don t know what I should7Could you please give me some suggestions?Best wishes.12. 假定你是李华，最近你们班就 “低碳 ”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友 Jack 来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：1）节水节电；2）垃圾分类；3）少用纸巾，重拾手帕；4）步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。参考词汇：低碳 low carbon 纸巾 tiss

39、ue参考范文：Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it。We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the In

40、ternet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when

41、we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world。13. 节约水是我们每个人的责任 , 我们知道，水对人类来说是非常的重要。没有水我们就不能生存。 适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。 但是有些人却不关心或不在意。日常生活中他们浪费很多水。 更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。 他们还到处乱扔垃圾。 很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。 人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。只有这样，我们才过得幸福开心。如果我们不节约水，那么最后一滴水也许会

42、是我们人类的眼泪。It s our duty to save waterAs we know, water isvery important toman, we can t live without water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water in to river

43、s. They throw rubbish everywhere, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.Only in this way can we live happily. If we don tsave water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.14. 今春宜宾市部分地区发生干旱，水资源严重短缺。请你以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文。(参考词tap

44、水龙头reuse 再利用recycle 再循环drought 干旱 )内容包括： 1.水的重要性2.人们浪费水的不良现象3.提出几条建议要求： 1）词数： 80100 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。范文：Saving WaterAs we all know, water is important to us all. People canlivet without water.8Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world.But there are still some

45、people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, we dbetter recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead

46、of having a shower.Water is really important to man. Let ssave water from now on.15.今年宜 市响 党中央的号召， 启 了“文明餐桌行 ， 又叫光 行 ”，号召全体市民“文明用餐， 惜福” 。 合 片， 系 ，适当 ，以“ Save(节约 ) Food and Eat Healthily” ， 写一篇 60-80 的英 短文。 文章开 已 出，不 入 数。waste too mucheat up all the foodeat junk foodeat a balanced diet范文：Save Food An

47、d Eat HealthilyYue yang government has called on the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.To save food, we shouldntwaste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldntorder the food more than we

48、 can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don thave enough to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldnteat junk food but healthy food. It s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. Wed better not eat in small restaurants. The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. W

49、ed better eat at school or at home if we have time.16. 某一 威机构公布的 2012 年学生体 健康 果 示， 学生近 率仍 持在高位水平， 且越来越低 化。 根据下表所提示的内容， 用英 写一篇短文，并 表自己的 点。现状大 70%学生眼睛近 1.睡眠不足主要原因2. 看 、做作 、用 、看 等 防方法1.做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 2.养成正确的用眼 你的 点 .（至少一条）注意：1） 数 80 左右。开 已 写好，不 入 数；2）内容必 包括上表中的要点，可作必要的 ；3）条理清楚、 句 ；4）文中不得出 真 的地名、校名和人名等信息

50、。9（参考 ：近 的shortsighted）One possible version（范文） :The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes. Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or

51、doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time. In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us shou

52、ld understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.17. 你是学校英文 的小 者李 。 你校初三学生写一封公开信，就如何保持考前心理健康提出建 。主要内容如下：(1)早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；(2) 食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；(3)多做体育运 ；(4)你的其它建 。注意： 1） 数 80 左右 (信的开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数)；2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否 不予 分。Dear students，As we all know,good health is important

53、for success in the exams，so Im writing to Best wishes and stay healthyYours，Li Hua18. 人人都希望生活在 环 境 美的城市中，作 为 中学生，我 们 要 极为创 建“文明城市 ”作 献。 你根据下列 图 表所 给 提示 词 写一篇 言稿。要求：1） 句通 ， 写 范，文章中不得出 真 姓名和校名。2）必 运用所有提示 ，并写出两个以上自己的 点。3） 数在80 左右。Civilized （文明） Citygood behaviorexcellent environmenthad bettershoulddont

54、cannot10talk politelyplantyour ideastraffic rulesbe friendly topick up litterloudlyhelpclean the small ads19. 近来由于极端天气，宜宾市部分地区发生了特大旱情，致使小河断流，湖泊干涸，鱼类死亡，湖底成了牧场。请结合下面的提示词，以“ LetsDo Something to Save OurEnvironment”为题写一篇 80 字左右的短文。内容应包括从干旱引出的环境现状、环保意识到节水，节能，控制污染等环保措施方面的描述。首句已给出，不计入字数。提示词： bad weather, bottom（底部） , river, lake, grass land, save water, drop, tap （水龙头） , energy, turn on / off, recycle, control pollution, tears(眼泪 ).要求：1）条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。2）书写工整，句式规范，标点符号使用正确。3）短文中应尽量包括提示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。One possible version（范文） :Lets Do Something t