2020年高考英语作文高分素材训练：2.1-高考应用文写作高分技巧-31页

1、二、高考必须掌握的3类写作技巧 1. 高考应用文写作高分技巧类型一 邀请信 (2019全国卷改编)假如你是李华, 你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的朋友Allen参加, 内容包括:1. 时间;2. 活动安排;3. 欢迎他表演节目。注意:1. 词数80左右2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I (Li Hua), You(Allen)时态一般现在时, 一般将来时段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的, 并表达问候主题段落:此次活动的内容和目的, 并希望Allen表演节目结尾:再一次真诚邀请Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:aim at, enr

2、ich, promote, be involved in, issue the certificate, highlight, confirm(2)佳句:Aiming to enrich the students school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized

3、, such as National Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival. Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:音乐节安排在下周的周一到周五, 在礼堂举行。一般表达:The festival is scheduled from Mo

4、nday to Friday next week in the auditorium. 词汇或句式升级:(分词作状语以及定语从句)旨在丰富学生的学校生活, 促进传统文化, 我们将举办音乐节, 节日安排在下周一到周五的礼堂举行, 届时将组织各种各样的活动。Aiming to enrich the students school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during wh

5、ich time a variety of activities will be organized. 要点2:音乐节的末尾, 我们希望您能表演节目, 并为获奖者颁发证书。一般表达:At the end of the festival, wed like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. 升级表达:音乐节的末尾, 我们希望您能表演节目, 并为获奖者颁发证书。相信您的到场和参与将会成为音乐节最精彩的部分。At the end of the festival

6、, wed like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival. Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇Dear Allen, How are you doing? Im writing to invite you to join us in the Music Festival

7、to be held in our school. I feel honored if you are present. Aiming to enrich the students school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized, such as Nation

8、al Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on. At the end of the festival, wed like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among th

9、e highlight of the festival. Would you please confirm your participation at your convenience? I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us. Yours, Li Hua假定你是李华, 想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:1. 展览时间、地点;2. 展览内容。注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以

10、使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear HenryIm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set

11、 aside some time for the art feast. The exhibition, whose theme is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our clubs works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Bes

12、ides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! Im looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua类型二 建

13、议信(2018全国卷)假定你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:1. 到达时间;2. 合适的礼物;3. 餐桌礼仪。注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局类型建议信人称第二人称(you)时态一般现在时要点欢迎到中国做客, 愿意提供建议到访(朋友家)时间餐桌礼仪Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:the time to arrive, the appointed time, the suitable presents, table manners. (2)

14、佳句:I am very glad to hear that you will come to China for a visit. Its my pleasure to offer you some advice on the Chinese customs about visiting. Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:得知你要来中国朋友家做客, 真是太好了。一般表达:Its great to hear youre invited to a Chinese friends home. 很高兴得知你将来中国朋友家做客, 并且想了解有关访友的中国习俗。(增加细节)Its so great

15、 to hear youre invited to a Chinese friends home and want to know the Chinese custom about visiting. 很荣幸可以与你分享我的经历和介绍相关的中国传统与风俗。(高级句型)It is a great honor to share my experience and introduce the relevant Chinese custom and tradition to you. 要点2:首先, 到达时间要准时或稍微早一点。一般表达:Firstly, make sure to arrive on

16、time, or a bit earlier. 根据中国传统, 比约定时间早到5至10分钟比较好, 准时到达也可以。(高级句型)According to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time. 要点3:希望你在中国玩得愉快. I hope you can enjoy your stay in China. Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇Dear Terry, Its so great to hear yo

17、ure invited to a Chinese friends home and want to know something about Chinese customs. Firstly, according to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time. If youd like to bring a gift, fruit is usually a good choice. At the dinne

18、r table, it is appropriate to wait for the elderly people in the family to start eating. But if they insist that you start first, just go ahead. Sometimes the host offers guests more food than they need. In that case, its OK to let them know you are full. I hope you can enjoy your stay in China. You

19、rs, Li Hua假定你是李华, 你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信, 内容主要包括:1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者; 2. 赞赏该报优点:兼顾国内外新闻, 介绍名人成功故事;3. 提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear editor-in-chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I l

20、ike it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me und

21、erstand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Yours sincerely, Li Hua类型三 道歉信(2016全国卷改编)假定你是李华, 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店, 因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮

22、件, 内容包括:1. 表示歉意;2. 说明原因;3. 另约时间。注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I (Li Hua), You(Bob)时态一般现在时, 一般将来时段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的, 并表达歉意主题段落:说明致歉的原因结尾:再次致歉, 并另约时间Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:express my heartfelt apology;represent our school to do;available;as a result(2)佳句:I cant go with you as planned.

23、Im writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. How about going to the bookstore this Sunday. Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。一般表达:Im sorry that I cant go with you to the bookstore. 句式升级(高级词汇, 名词性从句, 分词作状语)我诚挚地向你道歉, 这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。I have to express my heartfelt apology to you that I cant go with

24、you to the bookstore this Friday as planned. 要点2:我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。一般表达:Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition. 句式升级(定语从句, for引导的并列句)我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛, 这对我非常重要, 因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛, 展示我们的实力。Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate compe

25、tition, which is of importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. 要点3:这个周的周日如何?那时你是否有时间呢?一般表达:How about going to the bookstore this Sunday? Will you be available then?句式升级(高级词汇, 意趣盎然)Would it be convenient for you if we go to the book

26、store this Sunday?Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇Dear Bob, How are you doing? Im indeed very sorry that I cant go to the bookstore with you this Friday as planned. How I wish I could go with you! However, Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance

27、to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. As a result, I have to miss our appointment. Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?Im looking forward to y

28、our reply. Yours, Li Hua假如你是育才中学的学生李华, 昨天你在英语课上做数学作业被英语老师Miss Cheng发现了, 你的数学书被英语老师收走了。请用英语给英语老师写一封道歉信, 内容应包括以下要点:1. 向老师道歉;2. 解释上课为什么做数学作业;3. 提出自己的请求并作出保证。注意:1. 词数80左右, 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;2. 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。Dear Miss Cheng, _Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Miss Cheng, I sincerely apologize to you

29、for doing maths homework in your class. I would appreciate it if you could forgive me. Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse may be meaningless. However, I did so because my mother happened to fall ill yesterday and I had to send her to hospital and look after her by

30、 myself, for my father is a migrant worker working far away. As you know, the next class would be maths. If I couldnt finish my maths homework before it, I would be severely punished. Anyway doing other things in class is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will never happen again. But I do ne

31、ed my maths book back. Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a lot. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 类型四 感谢信(2019浙江高考改编)假定你是李华, 经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件, 内容包括:1. 表示感谢;2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;3. 临别祝愿。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(Li Hua), You(Alex)时态一般过去时,

32、 一般现在时段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的, 感谢对方帮助主题段落:具体指出曾经的帮助结尾:再次表达感谢, 给出临别祝愿Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词: have difficulty in, under your patient guidance, not only. . . but also. . . , generous(2)佳句I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English. It is you who taught me how to learn English w

33、ell. Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:你教给我如何学英语。一般表达:You taught me how to learn English. 句式升级 (强调句)是你教给我如何学英语。It is you who taught me how to learn English. 要点2:你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。一般表达:You helped improve my English and gave

34、me more confidence in learning. 句式升级 (倒装句)你不但帮助我提高了英语, 并且给了我更多学习的自信。Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear Alex, Ive heard that youre leaving China soon, so Im writing to express my sincere blessing and thanks. I can well remember

35、 there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English. It is you who taught me how to learn English. Under your patient guidance, I gradually made progress and began interested in English. Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Thanks again for

36、your generous help. Wish you a pleasant journey home. Yours, Li Hua假设你是李华, 梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造, 现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取, 请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。1. 表示感谢;2. 感谢原因;3. 如何回报。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Ch

37、emistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. Not only did you write commendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University, but also gave me careful and patient inst

38、ructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.

39、 Yours, Li Hua类型五 申请信(2019全国卷)假定你是李华, 暑假在伦敦学习, 得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者, 内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势;3. 能做的事情。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(Li Hua), Sir/Madam时态一般现在时, 一般将来时段落布局开头点题:问候并说明写信的原因及目的主题段落:分两点阐述为什么申请做志愿者:个人优势;能做的事情结尾:衷心的祝愿Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:apply for position, be q

40、ualified for, as follows, specific introduction, furthermore, share. . . with. . . (2)佳句I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, and Im writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position. The reasons why Im qualified for the job are as follows. Furthermore, I can speak fluent C

41、hinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world. If Im chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them. Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:我有一些胜任这份工作的

42、原因。一般表达:I have some reasons to be qualified for the job. 句式升级(定语从句)我胜任这份工作的原因如下。The reasons why Im qualified for the job are as follows. 要点2:如果你们给我这份工作, 我将尽最大努力去帮助参观者。一般表达:If you give me this job, I will do my best to help the visitors. 句式升级(被动语态, 虚拟语气)如果我能被选为志愿者, 我有能力去帮助参观者理解绘画作品, 并与他们分享在绘画后面的历史。If

43、 Im chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them. Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇Dear sir/ Madam, Im Li Hua, a Chinese student having education in London now. I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to

44、be held, and Im writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position. The reasons why Im qualified for the job are as follows. Firstly, I have had an interest in Chinese painting ever since I was a child. As a result, I am familiar with this art form and can give very specific introduction to the v

45、isitors. Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world. If Im chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings

46、 with them. Thank you for your time. Hope to hear from you soon! Yours, Li Hua假定你是李华, 你校英语协会招聘志愿者, 接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘, 内容包括:1. 口语能力;2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English assoc

47、iation. I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whats more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students. Im particularly interested in this job because I want to further im

48、prove my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance. Yours faithfully, Li Hua类型六 告知信(2019全国卷改编)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加的比赛, 内容包括:1. 比赛信息;2. 赛前准备;3. 表达期待。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(Li Hua), You(Ch

49、ris)时态一般现在时, 一般将来时段落布局开头点题:写明比赛信息, 包括比赛时间和地点主题段落:赛前准备什么, 是否需要训练结尾:期待Chris能够积极参加Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:schedule, take an active part in, make full preparations for, adapt to, favourable(2)佳句As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hop

50、e you could take an active part in it. Whats more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match. Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:我们计划本周六上午八点在操场上举行比赛。一般表达:We plan to hold the match at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend. 句式升级(定语从句, 宾语从句)按照计划, 比赛将于本周

51、六上午八点在学校操场举行, 并且我希望你能积极参加。As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hope you could take an active part in it. 要点2:你最好带些热水, 以便赛前赛后喝。一般表达:Youd better carry some hot water so that you can drink it before or after the match. 句式升级(动名词作主语)并且带些热水是很有必要的, 以便你赛前赛后喝。Whats more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match. Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇Dear Chris, Im Li Hua. Im glad to tell you some information about volleyball match. As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our