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1、例题1 （文字题） The staff at your company were rece ntly asked what they thought about work ing con diti ons. Your line man ager has asked you to write a report summariz ing their opinions and suggesti ng po ssible imp roveme nts. Look at the information below, on which you have already made some han dwri

2、tte n no tes. Then, using all your han dwritte n no tes, write your report. Write 120-140 words. 精品文库 Meet ing with empio yees about work ing con diti ons give an exa mple Staff had some good things to say but they also men ti oned these p roblems: the need for more flexible work ing hours expinwhyn

3、eeded suggest a soluti on poor con diti on of some office areas 欢迎下载5 Sam pie 1 Report on: Staff opinion about work ing con diti ons This report aims to summarize the results of the last staff meeti ng. Findings First, most of the empio yees are really satisfied with the new smoking policy. But ther

4、e are also some p roblems. Due to the fact that many empio yees have to care for children they would rather prefer flexible working hours. Furthermore some office areas are in a poor con diti on, most imp orta nt is that a few of them do not have sun light at their work place. There is also a p robl

5、em with the p ayme nt whe n going on holiday, which is too less for our workers. Con clusi on In con clusi on the opinions about this topic are much better compared with last year, but there is still a lot to do. Recommendation : It is suggested to create a bonus system for in creas ing holiday p ay

6、me nt and not of least to in crease p roductivity. Band 3 All the content points are covered and des pite a nu mber or Ian guage errors, the message is clearly con veyed. The report has bee n orga ni sed into secti ons, although at times p aragra phing is in n eed of atte nti on. Sam pie 2 Report on

7、 satisfactio n-level of staff members In troductio n This report aims to show weather our staff members are satisfied with their work ing con diti ons or not. Findings The rece nt meeti ng shows clearly that our staff is quite satisfied with the worki ng con diti ons. Esp ecially, a lot of them have

8、 praised our pension scheme and our childcare vouchers. Nevertheless, some complained about unflexible work ing hours, as they have to take care of their childre n at home. Apart from this, the poor con diti on of some office areas was men ti on ed. A lot of them are dissatisfied with the dirt on th

9、e floors and the old-fashioned computer systems. Fin ally, I would suggest to in crease the nu mber of days off, as most members feel quite exhaustedafter 6 mon ths without holiday. Con clusi on In my opinion, we should try to imp rove work ing conditions for this will lead to more productivity in the en d. Band 5 All the content points have bee n addressed and the target reader would be fully in formed. The report is effectively orga ni sed, mak ing use of head ings and discours