英语 必修一Unit 1 建议信（谷风讲课）

1、必修1,必修一 Unit 1 Friendship Writing如何写建议信 how to write letters of advice,1,沐风教资,如何写建议信 how to write letters of advice,2,沐风教资,写作三步曲,说明写信目的提出建议以及改进措施，忠告表达希望采纳建议，或者期盼回复。,注意！,语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点。,3,沐风教资,建议信,三段式： 第一段： 点明主题 第二段： 陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由 （是什么，为什么，怎么样） 第三段：总结全文，表明希望,4,沐风教资,适当运用模板,5,沐风教资,De

2、ar Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said+ 你碰到的问题. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, _,because_. Secondly, you should_, because_. Thirdly, youd better _.Only in this way can you _.Whats more,_. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Be

3、st wishes. Yours, xxx,6,沐风教资,建议信重点,第二段： 说明建议的内容；（是什么） 提出具体建议的原因；（为什么） 指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样） 注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,7,沐风教资,Opening sentences 开头句,I am very glad to hear from you. Thank you for your letter. 3. You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some suggestions. 4. I am writ

4、ing in reply to 5. I am sorry to hear that,8,沐风教资,表示建议的句子 You should/must Dont What/How about trying a new method? Why not find a new way? Youd better change your former plan. Id like to suggest you make a new plan. If I were you, I would Id like to suggest I strongly recommend You might as well ,9,

5、沐风教资,学会用not only but also表示并列含义 亲爱的朋友们，去参加课外活动吧，这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩，还会改善你的学习。 Dear friends, please take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school like colorful, but also improve your learning.,10,沐风教资,Closing sentences 结束语,I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/

6、useful. 2. At last, I hope I will be your best friends forever! Good luck to you! 3. Lets keep in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you.,11,沐风教资,Read Xiao Dongs letter on page 7 and answer: What is Xiao Dongs problem? Read the instructions at the top of page 7 and find out what you are require

7、d to do.,Hes not good at communicating with people. He finds it hard to make friends with his classmates.,I Lead in,12,沐风教资,To ask people their likes and dislikes,To join in discussions,To show interest in others ideas,To share his feelings with others,II Brainstorming,Your advice for Xiao Dong,13,沐

8、风教资,Presenting the problem,Proposing the solution,Conclusion,14,沐风教资,Dear Xiaodong, Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you: First, why not? If you do this, Secondly, you should/can Then/ That w

9、ay, Thirdly, it would be a good idea if By doing this, I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours, Miss Wang,Outlining,15,沐风教资,建议信重点,第二段： 说明建议的内容；（是什么） 提出具体建议的原因；（为什么） 指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样） 注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,16,沐风教资,Firstly, why not go and talk to people standing alone. I agree that this is diffic

10、ult but that student may be lonely too,If you do this,Im sure you will soon have new friends. Secondly, you should begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,That way,you will soon find people with the same interests,because that is a good way to find new friends. Thirdly,it wou

11、ld be a goos idea if you try to join in a discussion. You may feel that is right.By doing this,you are letting people know how friendly you are.So there should be no problem.It should provide you with some new friends.,17,沐风教资,即时训练,你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建

12、议信。 1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。 2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。 3. 尽量不要收费。 4. ,18,沐风教资,写作分析：,第一段：引出话题，得知要建娱乐中心，想提建议。 第二段：建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场。 第三段：建议课余时间开放，能使其得到充分利用。 第四段：免费开放，有些学生经济困难。 第五段：简单总结。,19,沐风教资,Dear Mr. President, Its come to my attention that our school is going to build a new leisure center. Im writing to ask you

13、to consider the following suggestions. Firstly, Id like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. Secondly, coul

14、d the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use of it. Thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense. Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. If the cen

15、ter is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,范文,20,沐风教资,建议信模版,Dear _, You have asked me for my advice with regard to(关于) _, and I will try to make some conductive(建设性的) suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_(建议

16、的内容) . I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details. Good Luck with your_(祝愿) Yours sincerely 签名,English/exams,21,沐风教资,假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。 建议内容： 1. 不要灰心，保持良好心态；

17、 2. 掌握学习方法； 3. 培养对英语的兴趣爱好。,22,沐风教资,第一步：审题 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：,第一人称,一封信,对英语学习给出建议,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,23,沐风教资,假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。 建议：1. 保持良好心态； 2. 掌握学习方法： 如坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多 练、多问等。 3. 培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。 develop a

18、n interest in learning English 坚持每天记单词： insist on/ persist in doing insist on/ persist in remembering words every day,24,沐风教资,Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said you have some difficulties in learning English. This is a normal problem that e

19、very student could suffer, so I think I can give you some useful suggestions. My suggestions/ advice are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak En

20、glish with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. Whats more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.,25,沐风教资,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点： 参加中文学习班； 看中文书刊、电视； 学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友。 注意：可适当增加细

21、节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。 Dear Peter, Im glad to hear that you can ask for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _ Best wishes, Li Hua,Homework:,26,沐风教资,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take

22、a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll l

23、earn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua,27,沐风教资,第二篇建议信： 对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学习的建议信 建议内容： 1）和他面对面地交流、沟通； 2）给她发邮件或短信； 3）告诉他

24、学习的重要性。,Homework:,28,沐风教资,Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said your friend spends most of his time chatting on the Internet and often goes to the Internet cafe instead of attending classes. You really want to help him out but you dont know wh

25、at to do with it/ how to help him. Well. I would like to give my advice for you. My advice are as follows. Firstly, I think you should have a talk with him sincerely. Because if your friend skips classes, he is not going to do well at school.,29,沐风教资,Secondly, you can e-mail him or leave a message.

26、Thirdly, you should tell him the importance of study. Because every one of us just has one chance to go to high school, he should study hard and not waste time in indulging on the Internet. In a word, I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. / Best wishes. Yours, Editor,30,沐风教资,Homework 假定你是某中

27、学的学生李华，请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，主要内容包括： 优点：1.话题广泛 : 2.图片丰富 3.有助于提高学习兴趣 建议：适当降低词汇难度 Dear Editor, As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house._,31,沐风教资,常用关联词,表示并列的过渡词或短语 as well; or; too; also; as well as; and ; not onlybut also. ; both and. ei

28、ther or ; neithernor First；Second; Third For one thing; For another (thing) 2. 表示递进的过渡词或短语 Moreover ; Whats more; Besides; Whats worse,32,沐风教资,3. 表转折对比的过渡词: instead of, but, however, on the contrary, although, different from, despite in spite of, Some ;Others On the one hand,;On the other hand, 4. 表

29、原因的过渡词: because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to（由于）,33,沐风教资,5.表结果的过渡词: so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, 6.表条件的过渡词: if, unless , as long as7.表时间的过渡词: recently, finally, at the same time, at last, from now on, 8.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:first, firstly, second, secondly, th

30、ird, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last,34,沐风教资,9.表换一种方式表达的过渡词: in other words, that is to say10.表进行举例说明的过渡词: for instance, for example, such as11.表陈述事实的过渡词: In fact, To tell you the truth12.表目的的过渡词： for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to13.表总结的过渡词: In a word(总之，简言之), in short(总之), generally