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1、.英语专项训练书面表达一. 如何写提示性作文?A. 仔细审题, 看明要求:对题目所提供的信息, 一定要认真分析, 弄明白这个题目究竟要表达什么要反复、认真地多读几遍, 吃透要点, 对其内容要求重新进行整理,组织, 使之条理化, 然后从适当的角度进行表达.B. 确定内容, 把握要点它的特点就是要把要点都表达得清清楚楚, 作者必须明确这些内容, 把握住全部要点, 既不无中生有, 也不丢三落四.C. 语言准确, 适当发挥不能拘泥于要点, 把要点翻译过来了事. 写作时应有所想象和发挥. 当然, 这种想象和发挥必须在整体框架内, 切不可离开提示去自由发挥. 若是英文提示, 不要照搬提示的原句. 若是中文

2、提示, 不要逐字翻译提示中的内容, 而要按照中文提供的信息, 用自己熟悉的英文来表达.D. 拼写正确, 书写工整中考时, 由于时间紧, 许多同学书写不认真, 单词写错, 字迹潦草, 标点符号不准, 给评卷人员带来很大困难. 一篇好的作文, 如果书写潦草, 也不会得很高的分数.E. 注意格式, 掌握长度提示性作文, 内容广泛, 形式多样. 题材包括记叙文, 说明文, 应用文等. 要注意格式上的要求, 还要这样字数上的规定, 掌握好长度, 字数过多或过少都是不符合要求的.二.英语写作中的常用连接词:A. 表示顺序、并列 first , second, third, firstly , second

3、ly , thirdly , finally/at last , at first , to begin with, to start with , first of all , and , then, also, as for, at the same time, besides these, whats more, whats worse(更糟糕的是), on the one hand , on the other hand , The most important thing is that .B. 提出观点或表达看法 I think / believe, Im sure, in my

4、opinion / view , as we know , Everyone knows that .C. 表转折、目的、因果、列举和总结 in a word(总之), in general , but , however, instead, instead of, though / although, yet, in fact , to be honest , to tell the truth , as a result , so, in order to / to, so that, such as, for example / for instance, like, sothat, s

5、uchthat, even though , because, 等.D. 表示时间 at present, at the end / beginning of , when, while, before, after, till / until , notuntil, as soon as, in the morning / afternoon / evening, since 等.三. 实例训练1 假定你是苏华。你在加拿大的笔友John在做一个关于世界各国中学生如何度暑假的调查。他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下有关情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复，可以有适当发

6、挥。 注意：1.词数在90左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。 2.回复中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。To: From: .caSubject: summer vacationDear Su Hua,Im making a survey on how students spend their summer vacation in different countries.I need your help. Would you mind answering the following questions ?1. When d

7、o you start your summer vacation and how long is it ?2. Will you go to a summer school ? And why ?I am looking forward to hearing from you soon . Best wishes, John参考答案：To: .caFrom: Subject: summer vacationDear John, Thank you so much for your email . Im very happy

8、to answer your questions. In China,we start our summer vacation at the beginning of July. It lasts about two months. We can do many things to relax ourselves during the summer vacation . I often go swimming , surf the Internet and watch TV. I will go to a summer school to study English for a month b

9、ecause it is important and I like it . But what I want to do most is traveling with my parents . We have been to many places . This summer, we are going to Beijing . I think we will have a good time there . I wish to visit you in Canada one day . Yours , Su Hua2 总结是有效学习的重要组成部分，每个同学都应重视和培养这方面的能力。今天的英

10、语考试已接近尾声了，经过近两个小时的答题体验，请总结一下自己在英语学习中取得的进步和和存在的不足，并对今后的英语学习拟定一些计划。要求：紧扣主题，观点正确，行文连贯、流畅。 字数在90个左右。写作思路：1.简述自己在本次考试的过程中的感受； 2.结合本次考试你的表现谈谈你在英语学习上取得的进步；说明取得成就的原因； 3.谈谈你的不足，并根据不足制定计划来把英语学得更好。参考答案： I have just had a wonderful time in this English exam . Im happy that I have done it well . I can finish it

11、without any difficulty. Because my English teacher often gives me much help ,he teaches me how to study . Many of my classmates also help me with my English homework . If I have problems with it ,my classmates are willing to help me . I find I have made great progress in English . But sometimes I ca

12、nt pronounce the words correctly . So I will communicate with my classmates in English as much as possible .In the future , I will try my best in it . I believe my English will be better and better . 3 假如你是某中学的一名学生，六月三日。是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。要点：1. 公交车上发生的事情；2. 你对所发生的事情的看法或观

13、点。要求：1.80至100个词； 2.日记凯特已给出，不计入总数； 3.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。参考词汇：grandson , empty bottle (空水瓶），keep .clean作文思路：所发生的事必须根据提示词来展开想象（提示词未用不合格）；记日记要用一般过去时态。 参考答案：June 3, Friday FineOn my way home on the bus , I saw an old man get on the bus with his grandson of about ten . He was carrying the boys schoolbag and

14、a violin. I offered my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first . The old man had to stand nearby . After a while , the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus .When I saw this , I got very angry . I think the boy should not only respect

15、and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean . 4 初中生的生活紧张又忙碌，请根据自身情况叙述一下你是怎样利用课余时间来调节的。字数在90词左右。写作思路：1. 调节忙碌，应该写业余活动；2. 这篇短文写的是初中生的现实生活，所以应该用一般现在时态。3. 开篇突出一个“忙”字。参考答案：As a middle school student , I am always very busy . I have to study from early in the morning till late in the e

16、vening . So I always feel tired . I think its necessary to find some ways to make me relaxed . In my spare time , I often watch my favorite program on TV , but not too long . It makes me happy . I also like playing basketball with my friends when Im free . Besides, I think listening to music is also

17、 a good way to make me relaxed . I often listen to music even if while Im helping my mom do some housework .There are many good ways to make us feel relaxed . If you feel tired , try it . Its good for your study . 5 六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。为此， 某中学生英文报拟组织一次征文活动。 请你结合生活实际写一片题目为如何保护眼睛的征文稿，内容要点包括：1. 眼睛的重要性；2. 保护眼睛

18、的措施： （1）。不要长时间看书报； （2）。不要在太强或者太弱的光线下看书； （3）。坚持做眼保健操；要求：词数在90左右；不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。写作思路：1. 保护眼睛的重要性；2. 保护眼睛的措施；3. 呼吁大家都来保护眼睛。参考答案： Eye is the window of our mind .We use our eyes to see everything around us . Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness . So protecting our eyes is very important .

19、How to protect our eyes ? Its not right to keep your eyes working for a long time . Youd better not read in a strong or poor light. Dont read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day . Besides, a balanced diet is neces

20、sary . Follow my advice and form a good habit , everyone ！Its time to say goodbye to thick glasses .6 假如你叫刘妍，初中三年你与同学们在一起学习，参加各种活动，互相帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。你们即将毕业，校园网的英语论坛开辟了Thank-you letter专栏。请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信。内容包括：1. 这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢；2. 谈谈自己的感受或想法；3. 信中要简述感谢的原因，适当举例。注意：1. 词数90个左右（文章的格式已给出，不

21、计入总数）；2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人休息。参考答案：Dear Ling Feng, You have been very kind and helpful since we got to know each other . I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education . You have given me so much help that I will never forget . Last term , I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home

22、 for a week . While I was worrying about the lessons , you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject . With your help , I didnt fall behind(落后）others . Since then , we have been very close friends . Thank you again . Even though we may go to different schools , Ill always keep in

23、 touch with (保持联系) you . I wish you success for the future . Yours , Liu Yan七. 三年的初中生活就要结束了, 让我们记下其中的点点滴滴. 请描写一下你的校园生活. 要求: 1. 短文内容必须包括提示信息, 语意连贯, 句式规范, 字迹工整; 2. 文中不可用真实姓名; 3. 词数在90个左右. 提示词: remember , school life , very , favorite, classmate, like . My school life is very interesting . Classes begi

24、n at 8:00 a.m. . We have seven classes every day .We study Chinese, math, English, music, history, geography, physics, chemistry, biology, P.E. and so on . English is my favorite subject. I often speak English with my classmates. But I dont like math. Its really difficult for me . After class, I oft

25、en play basketball with my friends. Its my favorite sport . Sometimes I swim or draw pictures. Every Tuesday and Thursday, I go to the school library . My teachers are all friendly to me . I also like them very much . Do you think my school life is very interesting ? I will remember it forever .八. 每

26、个人都渴望获得成功, 渴望体验成功的快乐. 请写一篇90词左右的短文, 为大家讲述一件你最有成就感的事, 和大家分享(share with) 你成功的喜悦. 要点: 1. 对事情做简单的描述; 2. 分析成功的主要原因; (如;天赋所长, 不懈努力, 别人的鼓励和帮助, 以外的收获等) 3. 举例说明你是如何与他人分享成功的快乐的. I was very happy that I worked out a very difficult math problem. Nobody else in my class worked it out except me, so I took pride i

27、n(= was /felt very proud of ) myself . I could work it out because I love math very much. I enjoy reading books on math, working on difficult math problems. And I often spend several hours working on just one problem without feeling bored or tired. I shared my answer with my classmates at the end of

28、 the class. I stood before the whole class and explained . It was such a wonderful time that I had a chance to show Im always the best at math in our class .九. 请以 “My pleasant day” 为题, 根据提示和要求写你记忆中愉快的一天.提示: 1. 请叙述着一天你怎样度过, 有哪些活动; 2. 体现出是愉快的一天.要求: 词数在90 左右, 语言通顺, 符合逻辑; 文中不能出现作者的真实信息. My pleasant day

29、Last Sunday, all the students in our class went to the nursing home(敬老院) with our teacher Miss. Li. There were many old people living there. Since there were many things to do , we decided to work in groups to try to make the old people happy .Five of us played chess with them . Ten students chatted

30、 with them .Some girls did some washing for them . Some students cleaned their rooms and swept the floor. Others went for a walk with them . We did many things for them . At last, we sang songs and danced together . All the old people were happy . From this, I know that giving others pleasure can al

31、so make ourselves get pleasure . What a pleasant day !十.请以 “believe yourself , and you will win” 为题, 写一篇自己在学习或生活中的并战胜困难的短文. 要求切合提意, 内容完整, 表达清楚, 书写规范. 提示: 1. 你遇到了什么困难 2. 你是如何克服困难的? 3. 你从中体会到什么? Believe yourself, and you will win One night in August while I was doing my physics exercises, I met a diff

32、icult problem. I spent forty minutes on it , but I still couldnt work it out . The answer was in the last page of the exercise book. How I wanted to see the answer ! However, the teacher told us to do our homework by ourselves . My sister was studying in a high school then. Shed like to help me , Bu

33、t I refused . I thought over the lesson I had in a day carefully, from one example my teacher gave us , I worked the problem out at last . How happy I was ! Now, friends, remember. “Believe yourself , and you will win!”十一. 近期, 你所在的学校开展了以 “感谢父母, 立志成材” 为主题的活动. 请你根据提示, 用英语写一篇 “Love for my parents” 的短文,

34、 记叙你为爸爸或妈妈作过的一件事, 以表达你对他们的真实情感. 90 词左右. Love for my parents In our life, parents give us too much care and love . As a middle school students, I think its necessary to try to do something helpful for them . Yesterday was Mothers Day. I got up earlier than usual. After washing, I went into the kitche

35、n and began cooking breakfast . As it was a special day for my mother , I wanted to give her a special gift - a delicious breakfast. After the breakfast was ready, I made a card, writing, “ Happy Mothers Day, mum. I love you very much!” Then I went to school. When I came back home at noon, mum was w

36、aiting for me. With a smile, she said, “Thank you for your wonderful gift . I like it very much .” On that day, both my mother and I were happy. And I decided to do more things for my parents from then on .十二. 假如你是初三学生杨帆, 在复习备考阶段遇到烦恼时, 你的笔友Mike给过你很多鼓励. 现在请给他回信, 感谢他对你的鼓励和帮助. 内容提示: 1.What troubled you

37、 ? 2. How did he encourage you ? 3. Thank him for his help . 要求: 90词左右. 开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总数; 信中不得出现真实姓名和校名.Dear Mike, Although I havent written to you for a long time , Id like to thank you from the bottom of myheart . Since I failed the English test, Ive lost interest in studying other subjects. I tho

38、ught no matter how hard I worked, I wouldnt realize my dream into a senior high school. Its you that encouraged me to overcome myself(战胜自己). What you said is right . Whether to enter an ideal(理想的) school shouldnt be my only goal(目标). The most important thing is that one should be always trying his b

39、est . Even though I dont succeed , I wont feel guilty . Im lucky because I have a friend like you . At present , I have become interested in studying And Im working hard at all my subjects. Thanks for your help .十三. 假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice给你发来的e-mail, 请根据此内容, 给她写一封回信, 与她交流看法, 并帮她排忧解难. 提示词: liste

40、n to, mothers love, care about, communicate with 要求: 语句通顺, 书写工整. 用提示词适当发挥, 90词左右. E-mail 如下:Dear Han Mei, Im afraid Ive got a big problem recently . My mother talks too much to me . She always tells me , “Be careful while crossing the street”. “Put on your clothes” . “Did you do a good job at school

41、” ? and so on. Im annoyed . What shall I do ?AliceDear Alice, As a teenager, I met the same problem as you . But now I can get along / on well with my mother . Here are some ideas for you . Your mother talks too much because she cares about you . Maybe its not a good way , but it shows your mothers

42、love. I think you should understand her and listen to her . If your opinions are different from hers, you could communicate with her , and tell her what you are thinking about . If your mother doesnt take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile . In fact, if your mother know what you are

43、thinking about , she will understand you more . Perhaps she will change her way . I hope what I say here can help you a lot . Han Mei 十四. 去年6月1日起,全国各大超市和商店被禁止免费提供塑料购物袋. 治理 “白色污染” 刻不容缓! 作为中学生, 你做了些什么? 请根据提示写一篇短文, 谈谈自己是怎样做的. 内容提示: 1. 从自身做起, 不使用塑料制品; 2. 用再生纸或旧衣服自制购物袋; 3. 鼓励家人用布袋或篮子购物; 4. 节约用纸, 不乱扔废纸. 要

44、求: 90词左右; 语言流畅, 书写规范; 文章的开头和结尾给出但不计入总数. To protect the environment, the supermarkets and shops in China have stopped providing free plastic shopping bags .This is a good solution to solve “ white pollution” problems. As middle school students, we shouldnt use plastic things any more, such as plastic

45、 bowls, cups, bags and so on . We should try to make shopping bags out of recycled paper or old clothes by ourselves . We should also encourage our family members to use cloth bags or baskets for shopping. At the same time , we must save paper and mustnt throw waste paper everywhere. Lets do somethi

46、ng useful to protect the environment together !十五. 假设你将代表你校2012届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言,请你用英语写一篇发言稿. 要点: 回顾三年的学习生活; 老师和同学的帮助; 对同学和老师的祝愿. Good afternoon , ladies and gentlemen , my dear teachers and classmates, . Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and classmates . Its a great pleasure for m

47、e to be here to make a speech . It has been three years for us to study in this school. Our teachers always try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting. Theyre strict with us in our study and friendly to us in our life . We have learned a lot over the three years . Without our teache

48、rs help, our parents support and our classmates love, we can hardly succeed. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us . I hope our school will become more and more beautiful. I also wish all of us a wonderful future .Thats all . Thank you for listening .十六. 帮助别人

49、是快乐的, 快乐是一次经历, 一种感受. 请你以 “Helping others is a great pleasure”为题, 写一篇短文, 叙述你帮助别人的一件事和你的感想. 要求: 语句通顺, 合乎逻辑.词数在90 -100 . Helping others is a great pleasure Helping others is a good behavior. Helping others is a great pleasure. Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily . There were lots of peop

50、le there. I found a little girl crying in the corner. She got lost and she couldnt find her mother . We decided to help her. I looked for her mother everywhere. At the same time , Lily played with her and looked after her carefully there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily . At last

51、 , I found her mother . The girl was happy to see her mother . And the mother was very thankful to us . Today I was really tired but happy because I did a good thing . I believe if we all help each other , our world will become more beautiful .十七.朋友, 还记得那些陪伴你左右的同桌吗(deskmate) ? 他们乐观向上; 他们自强不息; 他们诚实可信

52、; 他们勤奋好学你的生活因他们而精彩! 请通过一件事的记述, 让我们认识一下你的一位勤奋好学(hard-working)同桌吧! 要求: 1. 请根据所提供的信息材料和话题(不要逐句翻译), 写出结构严谨、内容完整、语言丰富优美、语法准确、可读性强的短文. 2. 至少90个单词. 3. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名称. 4. 题目自拟. My deskmate I have many deskmates these years, but I think Wang Lei is the best one. We are neighbors, and we arte friends . We g

53、o to school, go home and do our homework together . He is a clever boy, and he is very hard-working . His lessons are very great . Especially he is good at English and math. Everyone in our class likes him very much . Last year we were in Grade Two, but I lost myself in playing computer games so muc

54、h that I didnt want to study in the slightest . I was often late for school. My deskmate Wang Lei was very worried about me. He told me it was bad for me to play computer games too much . He did many things to help me with my lessons. Little by little , I caught up with(赶上) the others . We were both happy. Im very lucky to have this deskmate. Do you think so ?十八.家庭作业既有好处也有弊端. 请你以 The advantages and disadvantages of homework 为题, 用英语写一篇短文. 词数要求在90左右. The advantages and disadvantages of hom