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1、目录Subject-verb agreement1Fragment: Subject and verb must both exist.1Sense: Subject and verb must make sense together.1Number agreement: Subject and verb must agree in number1Additive phrases1Or, eitheror, neithernor: nearest1Collective nouns: almost always singular1Indefinite pronouns: usually sing
2、ular1SANAMM words: some; any; none; all; more; most;1Each and every2Quantity words and phrases2Subject phrases and clauses: always singular2Parallelism2Parallel markers2Parallel elements2You can split apart the expressions:3Parallel clauses should start with the same word3Lists with AND3Idioms with
3、parallel structure4Superficial parallelism vs. actual parallelism4Watch out for linking verbs4Treat any linking verb as a parallel market.4And they have to make sense.4Pronoun5Antecedent must exist: as a noun5Antecedent and pronoun must make sense together5The antecedent must be unambiguous5The ante
4、cedent and pronoun must agree in number5Pronoun case5Watch out for parallelism5s is often poor antecedent6The deadly five: it, its, they, them, their6This, that, these, and those6Adjectives:6New copy6Agree in number with previous version6This, these, that, and those cannot be used as nouns.6Modifier
5、s7Adjectives and adverbs7Adjective + adjective + noun7Adverb + adjective + noun7Noun modifiers7Misplaced modifier8Dangling modifier8Modifiers have to make sense.8Noun modifiers with relative clause8Essential vs. non-essential noun modifiers9Verb modifiers9Verb tense, mood and voice9Tense9Simple tens
6、e9Progressive tense10Keep verb tense consistent10Present perfect: still in effect10Past perfect: the earlier action10Tense sequence10The subjunctive mood11Hypothetical subjunctive11Ifthen constructions11The command subjunctive11Active voice vs. passive voice12Comparisons12Keeping comparisons paralle
7、l12Comparisons must be logically parallel12Comparisons must be structurally parallel12Omitted words13Comparative and superlative forms13Idioms13Odds and ends22Connecting words22Connecting punctuation23Comma23Semicolon23Colon23Dash24Quantity24Advanced strategy: GMC/S-V/PARALLELISM24Concision: specifi
8、c patterns of wordiness24Pattern 1: prefer a verb to an action noun25Pattern 2: prefer a That-clause (with verbs) to a series of phrases (with nouns)25Pattern 3: prefer a verb to an adjective.25Pattern 4: prefer an adjective to a noun26Pattern 5: prefer an adverb to a prepositional phrase26Pattern 6
9、: prefer an adjective to an adjective clause with be26Pattern 7: remove IT ISTHAT27Concision: dont make it too short27Pattern1: keep the prepositional phrase if you need to27Pattern2: keep THAT OFor THESE OF if you need to27Pattern 3: keep THAT after a reporting verb28Parallelism: concrete nouns and
10、 action nouns28Infinitives29Adjectives and participles:29Advanced strategy: pronouns and modifiers29Other pronouns29There29Itself, themselves:30DO SO versus DO IT30Placeholder IT301. Postpone infinitive subjects302. Postpone That-clause subjects303. Postpone infinitive or That-clause objects30Nuance
11、s of pronoun reference:31Modifiers: Exceptions to the Touch Role311. Mission Critical modifier312. A very short predicate falls between, shifting a very long modifier back.313. A short non-essential phrase intervenes and is set off by comas.324. The modifier is part of a series parallel modifiers, o
12、ne of which touches the noun.32Possessive Nuances32Subgroup modifiers32More on relative clauses vs. participles33Absolute phrases33Advanced strategy: Verbs & comparisons34Helping verbs: BE, DO and HAVE34Infinitives35Gerunds35Participles36When to use which word36More on LIKE and AS36Numbers in compar
13、isons37Other comparison constructions38Subject-verb agreementFragment: Subject and verb must both exist.Missing of working verb: The electron named in 1894.Connecting word and no main clause: Because the dog was never mine/ Which will be approved tomorrow.Sense: Subject and verb must make sense toge
14、ther.Wrong: The proliferation of computer games designed to involve many players at once were first developed before the widespread availability of high-speed internet connections.Right: Computer games designed to involve many players at once have proliferated; such games were first developed before
15、 the wide spread availability of high-speed internet connections.Number agreement: Subject and verb must agree in numberAdditive phrasesOr, eitheror, neithernor: nearestCollective nouns: almost always singularIndefinite pronouns: usually singularSANAMM words: some; any; none; all; more; most;Some of
16、 the money was stolen from my wallet;Some of the papers were stolen from the bank.另外如同majority minority plurality 等词也是要看情况的Each and everyEvery dog and cat has paws.Each of these shirts is pretty.They each are great tennis players.Quantity words and phrasesA number of The number ofSubject phrases and
17、 clauses: always singularHaving good friends is a wonderful thing.Whatever they want to do is fine with me.ParallelismParallel markersMarkersStructuresAnd X and YX, Y and ZBoth/andBoth X and YOr X or YEither/orEither X or YNot/butNot X but YNot only/but alsoNot only X but also YRather thanX rather t
18、han YFrom/toFrom X to YParallel elementsElementsExamplesNounsHer expression reflected both anger and relief.AdjectivesThe park was neither accessible nor affordable.We collected both second and third-grade books.VerbsThe custodian cleaned the basement and washed the windows.InfinitivesWe would like
19、not only to hear your side of the story but also to provide a response.ParticiplesThe actor left quickly, shunning fans and ducking into a car.PrepositionalIt was important to leave the money in the drawer rather than on the table.Subordinate clausesThey contended that the committee was biased and t
20、hat it should be disbanded.You can split apart the expressions:The division was opening offices, hiring staff and investing in equipment.The railroad can either lose more money or solve its problems.They wanted to increase awareness, spark interest, and motivate purchases.Parallel clauses should sta
21、rt with the same wordWrong: I want to retire to a place where I can relax and that has low taxes.Right: I want to retire to a place where I can relax and where the taxes are low.Wrong: Ralph likes both those who are popular and who are not.Right: Ralph likes both those who are popular and those who
22、are not.Lists with ANDBe careful as you tally items:Wrong: She argues that the agency acts with disregard for human life and property and reckless abandon and it should therefore be shut down.Right : She argues that the agency acts with reckless abandon and with disregard for human life and property
23、 and that is should therefore be shut down.Idioms with parallel structureSuperficial parallelism vs. actual parallelismWrong: Sal applied himself in his new job, arrived early every day, skipped lunch regularly, and left late every night.Right: Sal applied himself in his new job, arriving early ever
24、y day, skipping lunch regularly, and leaving late every night.Watch out for linking verbsTo BEOther linking verbsIsAppearSeemAreBecomeSmellWasFeelSoundWereGrowStayAmLookTasteBeenRemainTurnBeRepresentBeingResembleTreat any linking verb as a parallel market.Wrong: The bouquet of flowers was a giving o
25、f love.Right: The bouquet of flowers was a gift of love.And they have to make sense.Wrong: Upon being nominated, this politician represents a step forward in urban-rural relations in this country.Right: The nomination of this politician represents a step forward in urban-rural relations in this coun
26、try.PronounsAntecedent must exist: as a nounWrong: The park rangers discussed measures to prevent sever wildfires, which would be devastating to it.Right: The park rangers discussed measures to prevent sever wildfires, which would be devastating to the park.Antecedent and pronoun must make sense tog
27、etherWrong: Although the term “supercomputer” may sound fanciful or exaggerated, it is simply an extremely fast mainframe that can execute trillions of calculations every second.Right: Although the term “supercomputer” may sound fanciful or exaggerated, it simply refers to an extremely fast mainfram
28、e that can execute trillions of calculations every second.The antecedent must be unambiguousWrong: Researchers claim to have developed new “nano-papers” incorporating tiny cellulose fibers, which they allege give them the strength of cast iron.Right: researchers claim to have developed new “nano-pap
29、ers” incorporating tiny cellulose fibers, which allegedly give these materials the strength of cast iron.The antecedent and pronoun must agree in numberPronoun caseWatch out for parallelismSupernovas destroy their immediate environments in vast explosions, but by synthesizing heavy chemical elements
30、, they provide the universe with the possibility of biochemistry-based life as we know it.s is often poor antecedentWrong: The board is investigating several executives compensation packages in order to determine how much may have been improperly awarded to them.Here THEM refers to “packages”, so it
31、 is wrong.Right: The board is investigating the compensation packages of several executives in order to determine how much these executives may have been awarded.The deadly five: it, its, they, them, theirWrong: Whenever a student comes, take down their information.Right: Whenever a student comes, t
32、ake down his or her information.Right: Whenever students come, take down their information.This, that, these, and thoseAdjectives:New “nano-papers” incorporate fibers that give these materials strength.New copyThe money spent by her parents is less than that spent by her children.The money spent by
33、her parents is more than it was expected to by.Agree in number with previous versionWrong: Her company is outperforming those of her competitors.Right: Her company is outperforming the companies of her competitors.This, these, that, and those cannot be used as nouns.Wrong: Her products are unusual;
34、many consider these unique.Right: Her products are unusual; many consider them unique.ModifiersAdjectives and adverbsAdjective + adjective + nounBoth adjectives modify the noun.Wrong: James Joyce is Maxs supposedly Irish ancestor.Right: James Joyce is Maxs supposed Irish ancestor.Adverb + adjective
35、+ nounThe adverb modifies the adjective.Wrong: Maxs grandmother is his supposed Irish ancestor.Right: Maxs grandmother is his supposedly Irish ancestor.Noun modifiersTypePositionExampleAdjectiveBefore nounAfter nounThe lazy cat took a nap.The cat, lazy from overeating, took a napPropositionBefore no
36、unAfter nounOn the couch, the cat took a nap.The cat on the couch took a nap.Past participleBefore nounAfter nounThe tired cat took a nap.Tires from chasing mice, the cat took a nap.Present participle without commasBefore nounAfter nounThe sleeping cat took a nap.The cat sleeping on the couch is nam
37、ed “Sue”.Relative pronounAfter nounThe grey cat, which loves tuna, took a nap.The cat that lives next door is noisy.The person who lives next door is noisy.The city where I live I noisy.Another nounBefore nounAfter nounA lover of mice, my cat hunts night and day.The cat, a tabby raised on a farm, to
38、ok a nap.Misplaced modifierWrong: Jim biked along an old dirt road to get to his house, which cut through the woods.Right: To get to his house, Jim biked along an old dirt road, which cut through the woods.Dangling modifierWrong: Resigned to the bad news, there was no commotion in the office.Wrong:
39、There was no commotion in the office, resigned to the bad news.Right: Resigned to the bad news, the office workers make no commotion.Also true for verb modifiers:Wrong: Using the latest technology, the problem was indentified.Right: Using the latest technology, the engineer indentified the problem.M
40、odifiers have to make sense.Wrong: Only in the past century has origamis development, a ceremonial activity invented millennia ago, into a true art form taken place.Right: Origami-a ceremonial activity invented millennia ago- has developed into a true art form only in the past century.Noun modifiers
41、 with relative clauseThat or whom can be dropped when acting as the objectiveThe security guard we met was nice.The movie we watched last Friday was scary.“Where” cannot be used to modify a metaphorical placeSuch as condition, situation, case, circumstance, or arrangementWrong: We had an arrangement
42、 where he cooked and I cleaned.Right: We had an arrangement in which he cooked and I cleaned.Essential vs. non-essential noun modifiersVerb modifiersTypePositionExampleAdverbBefore verbAfter verbFrequently, I walk to the store.I frequently walk to the store.I walk frequently to the store.Preposition
43、Before verbAfter verbOn Mondays, I walk to the storeI walk to the store on Mondays.SubordinatorBefore verbAfter verbWhen my car is broken, I walk to the store.I walk to the store when my car is broken.Some modifiers can modify both the subject and the verb.TypePositionExamplePresent participle with
44、comasBefore verbAfter verbWhistling “Beat it”, I lifted the weight.I lifted the weight, whistling “Beat it”.Preposition + simple gerundBefore verbAfter verbBy concentration, I lifted the weight.I lifted the weight by concentration.Infinitive of purposeBefore verbAfter verbTo free my leg, I lifted th
45、e weight.I lifted the weight to free my leg.Verb tense, mood and voiceTenseSimple tenseSimple present tense is often used to express “eternal” states or frequent events.Use simple present to define general definitions.Use simple present with state verbs such as KNOW and SIGNIFYProgressive tenseKeep
46、verb tense consistentIf you want to switch tense, make it clear:Right: He is thinner now because he spent the last six months on a strict diet.Present perfect: still in effectPresent perfect indicated either continued action or continued effect of a completed action.Right: The child drew a square in
47、 the sand, but the ocean erased it.Right: The child drew a square in the sand, but the ocean has erased it.Awkward: The child has drawn a square in the sand, but the ocean has erased it.If you want to talk about a specific, completed time period, use the simple past:Wrong: Veronica has traveled all
48、over the world in 2007.Right: Veronica travelled all over the world in 2007.Past perfect: the earlier actionYou should use past perfect only to clarify or emphasize a sequence of past events.If the sequence is already obvious, we do not need to use past perfect.Right: Antonio drove to the store and
49、bought some ice cream.When you see BEFORE Or AFTER, dont use the past perfect.Right: Laura locked the deadbolt before she left for work.Tense sequenceScientist: The supercollider is ready, it did not cost too much, and it will provide new insights into the working of the universe.Report: The scienti
50、st announced that the supercollider was ready, that it had not cost too much, and that it would provide new insights into the workings of the universe.Avoid mixing present tense with conditional tense:Right: The scientist believes that the machine will be wonderful.Right: The scientist believed that
51、 the machine would be wonderful.Wrong: The scientist believes that the machine would be wonderful.Wrong: The scientist believed that the machine will be wonderful.The subjunctive moodHypothetical subjunctiveIfthen constructionsTypeFormExampleGeneral rule with no uncertaintyIf present, then presentIf
52、 Sophie eats pizza, then she becomes ill.General rule with some uncertaintyIf present, then CAN or MAYIf Sophie eats pizza, then she may become ill.Particular case (in the future) with no uncertaintyIf present, then futureIf Sophie eats pizza tomorrow, then she will become ill.Unlikely case (in the
53、future)If hypothetical subjunctive, then conditionalIf Sophie ate pizza tomorrow, then she would become ill.Case that never happened(in the past)If past perfect, then conditional perfectIf Sophie had eaten pizza yesterday, then she would have become ill.The command subjunctiveBossy verb + that + sub
54、ject + command subjunctiveWrong: We propose the school board disband.Wrong: We propose that the school board should disband.TypeWord ExampleVerbs that take only the command subjunctiveDemand, dictate, insist, propose, recommend, request, stipulate, suggestWe demand that he be here.Verbs that take on
55、ly infinitiveAdvise, allow, forbid, persuade, wantWe allow him to be here.Verbs that take either formAsk, beg, intend, order, prefer, urge, requireWe require that he be here.We require him to be here.Nouns that take the command subjunctiveDemand, requestHis demand that he be paid full severance was
56、not met.Adjectives that take the command subjunctiveAdvisable, crucial, desirable, fitting, imperative, important, mandatory, preferable, urgent, vitalIt is essential that Gary be ready before soon.Avoid the use of the command subjunctive after WHETHER.Wrong: I like ice cream, whether it be chocolate, vanilla, or any other flavor.Right: I like ice cream, whether it is chocolate, vanil
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