江苏高考英语作文summary-技巧ppt课件

1、Summary writing,Learning objectives : 1. To have a better understanding of the elements of a summary; 2.To learn and be able to write a satisfactory summary,Summary writing (约30个词概括,概要:约30词，少于25或多于40词均扣2分,抄袭原文材料为无效要点；改变句式表达方式，并有适当发挥，不认定为抄袭,读写作文写好summary 的意义,第一段是定调子，阅卷老师往往读 完第一段就已经打出基本分了。 -高考阅卷老师 相对于

2、写作的其他要求来说，这一 部分较难写，这一部分先读后概括， 而其他部分都是有中文提纲的。 -往届实验班考生,What is a Summary,A summary is a short account giving the main points of something longer or detailed,以约30个词概括主要内容,A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days complaining about it. “It is true that you cannot sin

3、g,” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!” “Oh, but what good is all this beauty,” cried the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!” “Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet vo

4、ice, you would still complain about another thing. Why cant you just be happy about what you have already got,人称时态,The story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you ha

5、ve already got,feels,comforts,you,you,过多细节,In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of compla

6、ining about what he didnt possess,53 words,直接引语,A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, “No one is perfect, each one should be happy about what you have got.,- -,过早表达观点,Each of us has strengths and weaknesses, such as a peacock. A peacock was upset about his voice,

7、but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got,A peacock complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with,dos and donts,1、注意人称时态正确； 2、不写过多细节:实行精“兵”裁“员” 3、不用直

8、接引语； 4、不能过早表达观点； 5、不可完全照抄原文； 6、不可加入自己的观点； 7. 思路清晰，巧用关联词增强文章的 连贯性,Styles of passage,2015高考作文,1.记叙文,写作方法：串联要素法 六个要素： who; when; where; what; how; why 某人做了某事, 结果如何？ The passage mainly talks about,This story is about a peacock who complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beaut

9、iful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with,1）对象、性质功用、利好 （2）问题、解决方法 （3）现象、原因、结果,2、说明文及新闻报道,koalas in wildlife parks that are repeatedly awaken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals,Koa

10、las in wildlife parks cant fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is considering making the tourists behavior illegal to protect the animals,Practice,Passage A (2014年江苏高考作文,Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of

11、Contemporary Chinese has included 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not,WithEnglishwordsgetting popularinbothmediaanddaily life,aChinesedictionaryhas included239ofthem,leaving thepublicdividedintotwo opposinggroups:“For”and“Against,三要素：论点、论据、论证。 文章结构：总分结构、分总结构、 平行结构,3、议论文,Get

12、ting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the

13、 air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bo

14、dies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to ke

15、ep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it,1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea,Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance,2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences,a better memory a healthier body a better preparation for the

16、 day,3. Conclusion/suggestions,a good habit / benefit a lot,Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day,Teamwork is about people working together as a team. The idea has spread fr

17、om the world of sports to business. In the 21st century, as people and their work are becoming more technically advanced, working as a team makes it easier to get things done. Some things cannot be done by people working individually. More complex goals usually require that people work together. Any

18、one who has ever been to a job interview will almost certainly have been asked what teamwork means to them. This is because companies want people who are team players, who can get along with their colleagues and work together in a group. Because teamwork is required by many organizations today, they

19、 will often organize team building events in an attempt to get people to work as a team than as individuals,Teamwork,required by,There are seven important skills that one must learn in order to be a successful team player. They are as follows: Listening-listen and allow people to freely express thei

20、r ideas. Questioning-ask questions and discuss the objectives of the team. Persuading-encourage people to exchange, defend ,and rethink their ideas. Respecting-treat others with respect and to support their ideas. Helping-help ones partners, this is the general theme of teamwork. Sharing-share ideas

21、 and resources with the team to create an environment of teamwork. Participating-all members of the team are encouraged to participate in the team,skills,The passage states the importance of teamwork in business and that, in a more competitive world, people must co-operate in order to achieve their

22、goals. Besides, seven teamwork skills are also described,Q1：图文并茂的读写归纳要涉及图吗,审题 看图画或图表的作用 漫画通常可忽略 图表看作用，有时不可忽略,2015高考作文,Think：2015高考的这幅图在文字中体现了吗,Tip1,多个并列语段只要找出其共性 主题， 为某一段落服务的插图 可不涉及,Model 1: Topic + support,The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also

23、threaten peoples lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.(2015高考范文,观察一下图文的关系,苏州2016,2015高考作文的翻版,Cultural differences do exist in every corner of the world，where the same behavior often carries totally different meanings when we socialize with people. The three experiences of

24、 the author are typical examples,苏州2016,The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols

25、of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu. “It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University. The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from

26、the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart,读写读写先读后写,The panda is the most widely recognized symbol a

27、mong foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu,It is interesting

28、 to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University,The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart,Think：以上的三段文字和图之间是什么关系,图表中的内容在文章中体现了吗？要写吗,Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2,The box-