基础写作公开课VIP

1、welcome to our class,welcome to our english class,高考英语基础写作指导,以下是某售票网站上的信息:,写作内容： 请根据以上信息写一篇短文， 包括以下内容： 电影的基本信息 放映影院和时间 影票的折扣及送票服务,everyones hero, an american cartoon as well as a comedy, from june 22 to june 27. it was in zhengda cinema that it will showing. this film, features sports and adventure,

2、 last 87 minutes. what more exciting is that a 20% discount offered. in addition, we not charge for delivery if you booking online two days in advance.,everyones hero, an american cartoon as well as a comedy, from june 22 to june 27. it was in zhengda cinema that it will showing. this film, features

3、 sports and adventure, last 87 minutes. what more exciting is that a 20% discount offered. in addition, we not charge for delivery if you booking online two days in advance.,如何提升基础写作？ 准确运用非谓语动词、复合句及固定句型整合写作内容中的基本信息点，通篇提升。,lets improve a composition!,2008广东高考基础写作 你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介

4、绍。 写作内容 请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍： 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 1896：第一次成为奥运项目; 1904：中断; 1928：中断; 1932：重回奥运会； 1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛； 现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。,shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. the sport first appeared in 1896

5、, but it was suspended during the 1904 and 1928 games. the sport returned to the olympics in 1932. women were first allowed to compete in the olympic shooting in 1968. the sport has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 olympic games to 17 today.,shooting was originated as a means o

6、f survival. it developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. only in the late 19th century did shooting, first as a means of survival, develop into a sport.,the sport first appeared in 1896. it

7、 was suspended during the 1904 and 1928 games.,the sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 games.,the sport, first appearing in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 games.,the sport first appeared in 1896, but it was suspended during the 1904 an

8、d 1928 games.,the sport returned to the olympics in 1932. it was in 1932 that the sport returned to the olympics. not until 1932 did the sport return to the olympics. it was not until 1932 that the sport returned to the olympics. it was only four years before the sport returned to the olympics.,wome

9、n were first allowed to compete in the olympic shooting in 1968.,not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the olympic shooting,it was not until 1968 that women were first allowed to compete in the olympic games.,the sport has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 olympi

10、c games to 17 today.,12,with the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 olympic games to 17 today.,shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. the sport , which first appeared in 1896,

11、 was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 games. it was only four years before the sport returned to the olympic. however, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the olympic shooting. with the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events a

12、t the 1896 olympic games to 17 today.,lets summarize how to create a wonderful composition!,解题技巧指导 如何写好基础写作？ 1、明确写作要点，确定时态语态，正确运用谓语和非谓语。 2、提升作文。 准确运用非谓语动词、复合句及固定句型整合写作内容中的基本信息点，通篇提升。,writing time!,2006年10月,我国著名歌唱家宋祖英在美国肯尼迪艺术中心举办了名为好一朵美丽的茉莉花的个人独唱音乐会。在音乐会上，她演唱了辣妹子、好日子等16首经典曲目，三次谢幕之后，她用英语演唱了美国人民非常熟悉的美丽

13、的美国，使许多观众感动得流下了眼泪，因为她的精彩表演，肯尼迪艺术中心授予她艺术金奖。这场音乐会加深了中美的相互了解。,个人独唱音乐会: a solo concert 肯尼迪艺术中心: john f. kennedy center 好一朵美丽的茉莉花: “what a beautiful jasmine” 辣妹子、好日子、美丽的美国 “spicy sister” “happy life” “america the beautiful” 三次谢幕: three curtain calls 艺术金奖: gold art award,pair work,exchange your compositio

14、n with your desk mate and help each other to improve your writing.,lets share beautiful writings,in october, 2006, song zuying, a famous chinese singer, staged a solo concert entitled “what a beautiful jasmine” at the john f. kennedy center. at the concert, she sang 16 classical songs altogether, in

15、cluding “spicy sister” and “happy life”. after three curtain calls, she finally sang “america the beautiful” in english, an american song familiar to all americans, which moved many people to tears. for her wonderful performances, she received gold art award from the john f. kennedy center. there is

16、 no doubt that the concert helps to deepen the understanding between china and america.,dont forget your homework:,improve your writing in your composition book.,thank you for attending!,song zuying is a famous chinese singer. in october, 2006 she staged a solo concert at the john f. kennedy center.

17、 the concert was entitled “what a beautiful jasmine”. in october, 2006 song zuying, a famous chinese singer, staged a solo concert entitled “what a beautiful jasmine” at the john f. kennedy center.,she sang 16 classical songs altogether at the concert. the songs included “spicy sister” and “happy li

18、fe”. at the concert, she sang 16 classical songs altogether, including “spicy sister” and “happy life”.,after three curtain calls, she finally sang “america the beautiful” in english. it is an american song familiar to all americans. it moved many people to tears. after three curtain calls, she finally sang “america the beautiful” in english, an a