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2016届高考英语二轮书面表达提高 升格及分类训练 一 快速升格你的作文 使用高级表达what smore inthesameway 同样地 however becauseof Inaddition furthermore similarly equally incomparison incontrast ontheotherhand onthecontrary dueto owingto onaccountof thanksto asaresultof because inthat forthereasonthat thereasonforwhichliesinthefactthat though although inaword inshort allinall today now should despite inspiteofthefactthat while inbrief insummary tosumup tosummarize toconclude inconclusion nowadays currently atpresent besupposedto beexpectedto sometimes verygood mostof if occasionally fromtimetotime attimes fantastic awesome amazing wonderful excellent themajorityof onconditionthat as solongas suppose providedthat onlyif 句首倒装 asweknow sth isveryimportant Ithink Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat Itisgenerallyacceptedthat sth shouldbeputinthefirstplace sth shouldbeattachedgreatsignificanceto Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofsth toomuch Personally Frommypointofview AsfarasIamconcerned Inmyopinion Ifyoustudyhard youcanmakeprogress 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Sokindishethathecandomeafavor 高级 3 使用过去分词Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher 一般 Itissuggestedthattheenvironmentbeprotected 高级 Heissokindastohelpme 高级 Followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab Shewalkedoutofthelabwithmanystudentsfollowingher 高级 使用复杂结构4 使用V ing形式Whenyouarrive pleasegivemeane mail 一般 5 使用名词性从句Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn tturnup 一般 6 使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof Hercompositionwaswellwritten 一般 Onarriving yourarrival pleasegivemeane mail Thefactthathedidn tturnupdisappointedeverybody 高级 Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof 高级 7 使用强调句 倒装句 感叹句 Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920 一般 Notuntil1920didregularradiobroadcastsbegin 高级 ThoughI mweak Iwillmaketheeffort 一般 Iamgladtoseethesmileonmyteacher face 一般 Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradiobroadcastsbegan 高级 Weakas thoughIam I llmaketheeffort 高级 HowgladIamtoseethesmileonmyteacher face 高级 8 Everyday theyhavemuchhomework Theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters 状语从句 独立主格结构 Everyday theyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyfailtorememberthecharacters 状语从句 Withsomuchhomeworktodoeveryday theyhavetroubleinrememberingthecharacters 独立主格结构 Everyday somuchhomeworkdotheyhavethattheyfailtorememberthecharacters 倒装 9 Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell Itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue 高级词汇 Itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents Chineselearning 高级词汇 Itwillnotonlyraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue butalsohaveapositiveeffectonstudents Chineselearning 合并 二 单句练习 翻译下列句子1 不用说早睡早起是值得的 2 我深信预防胜于治疗 3 在各种运动中 我尤其喜欢慢跑 4 时间最珍贵 这是很容易证明的 5 就我所知 下列方法对我帮助很大 Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure Amongvariouskindsofsports Iamfondofjogginginparticular Itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnothingismorepreciousthantime Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned thefollowingwaysareofgreathelptome 6 毫无疑问 近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题 7 根据我个人经验 微笑已带给我许多好处 8 在我的求学过程中 我忘不了学习英文所遇到的大困难 9 随着经济的快速发展 许多社会问题产生了 Thereisnodoubtthatnear sightednessisaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry Accordingtomypersonalexperience smilehasdonemealotofgood Inthecourseofmyschooling IwillneverforgetthegreatdifficultyIencounteredinlearningEnglish Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy largequantitiesofsocialproblemshavecomeout 10 在这信息的年代 计算机扮演非常重要的角色 11 世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴的 12 我们保持公共场所清洁是应当的 13 每当我想到那个时刻 我就忍不住感到激动 Intheageofinformationandcommunication computerplaysanextremelyimportantrole Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchashavinghamburgersinfast foodrestaurants Itisproperthatwearesupposedtokeepthepublicplacesclean WheneverIthinkoftheverymoment Icannotbutfeelexcited 14 人们相信阅读增加我们的知识 扩大我们的心胸 15 青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日益败坏 16 俗话说得好 诚实为上策 17 人们学外语有三个理由 18 为了维护健康 我们每天至少可做三件事 Itisgenerallyconvinced that readingincreasesourknowledgeaswellasbroadensourmind Themainreasonwhytheteenagerscommitcrimesisthatsocialenvironmentisbecomingworse Asanoldsayinggoes Honestyisthebestpolicy Peoplelearnaforeignlanguageforthreemajorreasons Inordertokeephealthy thereareatleastthreethingswecandoeveryday 19 相反 多数学生似乎还是对课外活动感兴趣的 20 政府应严格执法 另一方面 大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯 21 换言之 我会尽最大的努力完成我的目标 22 从此之后 我已发现微笑是日常生活中避免冲突的最好办法 Onthecontrary amajorityofstudents itseems arestillkeenonafter classactivities Thegovernmentisexpectedtoenforcethelawstrictly Ontheotherhand thepublicalsoshoulddevelopthegoodhabitofreducingpollution Toputitdifferently Iwillsparenoefforttoattain achieve liveupto accoplish mygoal Eversincethen Ihavefoundsmileisthebestwaytoavoidanypossibleconflictsinourdailylives 23 更严重的是 我们不珍惜野生动物 24 做这些简单之事 我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家 25 唯有通力合作 我们才能期望情况不久有新的改观 Whatismoreseriousisthatwedonotcherishwildlife Bydoingthesesimplethings wesurely definitelycangooutofthedoorhappyandcomebackhomesafeeveryday Onlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectthesituationtotakeonanewlookinthenearfuture 26 最后但并非最不重要 教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因 27 总而言之 好公民应该遵守交通规则 28 因此我们可以得出结论 那就是世上自由最珍贵 Inconclusion agoodcitizenissupposedtoobserve obey followtrafficregulations Wecan therefore cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousasfreedomintheworld Lastbutnoleast thedeficiencyineducationisthecausecontributingtothecrimeoftheyoung 29 如果我们能做到如上所述 毫无疑问 我们就能精通英语 30 目前根据一项调查 中国学生半数以上患有近视 位居世界第一 31 中国在世界上人口最多 占到了20 其次是印度 占到17 Chinahasthelargestpopulationoftheworld whichaccountsforabout20 followedbyIndia makingupabout17 Currently accordingtoasurvey morethanhalfofChineseschoolchildrenareshort sighted rankingfirstintheworld Onconditionthatwecandoasmentionedabove therecanbenodoubtthatwecanacquireagoodknowledgeofEnglish 写作练习一假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流 主题是高中生对文 理科的选择 请你用英语写一篇发言稿 向他们介绍你所做的选择 并说明选择的理由 注意 1 开头和结尾已为你写好 不计入总词数 2 词数120左右 3 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息 参考词汇 文科 arts 理科 scienceGoodafternoon everyone Welcometoourschool Thanks 短文改错Goodafternoon everyone Welcometoourschool Ifeelextremehonoredhere onbehalfofallthestudentsinourschool toaddressyourguestsfromAmerica sharewithyoumyexperienceofchoosingthemainsubjectbetweenscienceandarts Atpresent highschoolstudentsfacedwithachoicebetweenartsandscience Intermsofme itwasnotaeasychoicetomake Aftercarefulconsideration though Idecidedonscienceasmymainsubjectofstudy Myreasonsareasfollow Tostart sciencegraduatesareingreatdemandthanartsonesinChina Additionally thesciencemajorcanhelpmeachievemychildhooddreamofbecomingascientist Furthermore myparentswishmetostudyscienceatcollegebecausetheybelieveIwillhaveabrighterfutureasasciencestudent Lastbutnotleast myphysicsteacherismyrolemodel hisinfluenceonmehadalotoftodowithmydecision Itisforthereas