2019年高中英语Module3AdventureinliteratureandthecinemaSectionⅤWriting—影评教案外研版.docx

Section Writing 影评一般来说，影评属于夹叙夹议的议论文。这种文体主要以一般现在时态介绍剧情内容及发表自己的看法。人称通常采用第一、第三人称。一、基本结构影视评论适宜用“三段式”写法。第一段：背景简介(setting)。对电影的名称、特点、导演等作简单介绍。第二段：情节概述(main plot of the film)。包括主要演员及故事梗概。电影情节介绍不宜太长，只需把自己要评论的内容突出即可。第三段：观后评论(making comments/reviews in some way)。可以选择性地从不同角度对电影的主题、情节、人物形象的塑造、语言风格、演员的演技、画面特点及拍摄理念等方面有针对性地发表个人看法，但不要面面俱到。最后对电影进行总体评价。二、增分佳句(一)背景及内容介绍1The film was directed by .2The film tells us a real story.3The film .directed by .is a story about .4The film .is set in .5The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.(二)进行评论1对影片的积极评价This is a very touching film, a mustsee. .give an amazing performance in the film.My favorite part of the film is .2对影片的消极评价However, many people have complained that the film is too .Another common complaint is that the film .Im disappointed with the film because .3总结性评价或感想I think it is well worth watching.It is a wonderful/successful/moving/touching film.From the simple but moving story, Ive got a lot.题目要求好莱坞电影阿凡达(Avatar)于2010年在中国大陆上映。请根据下面内容写一篇短文，介绍该电影的有关情况及你的感想。短文必须包括以下信息：1阿凡达在中国大陆上映时，超过了泰坦尼克号(Titanic)，创票房(boxoffice)新纪录。2电影的拍摄历时五年多，是最昂贵的电影之一。赢得了金球奖(Golden Globe)，获得了九项奥斯卡提名(an Oscar nomination)。3该电影以2154年为背景，讲述了一个残疾(disabled)军人被派往潘多拉星球(Pandora)去说服那里的人们让地球人在他们的祖国开采自然资源的故事。4你的感想注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为影视评论，属于议论文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：写影评通常用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，上映时的情况。第二部分，拍摄及获奖情况和电影简介。第三部分，自己的感受。第二步：核心词汇想周全1at_that_time在当时2more_than 多于；不仅仅3evident/obvious 明显的4accompany_with 与同时发生5be_set_in 以为背景6try_to_persuade 试图说服7live_in_harmony_ 和睦相处8instead_of 而不是第三步：由词扩句雏形现1阿凡达于2010年在大陆上映。(被动语态)Avatar was shown on the Chinese mainland in 2010.2它超过了泰坦尼克号，创造了当时的票房新纪录。(that定语从句；现在分词作结果状语)It_broke_the_record_that_was_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.3该电影拍摄历时五年多，很显然是最昂贵的电影之一。(more than; it作形式主语)It_took_more_than_five_years_to_make_the_film_and_it_is_evident_that_its_one_of_the_most_expensive_films.4它赢得了金球奖，并获得了九项奥斯卡提名。(accompany)It_won_a_Golden_Globe_accompanied_with_nine_Oscar_nominations.5该电影以2154年为背景。The_film_is_set_in_2154.6该电影讲述了一个残疾军人被派往潘多拉星球的故事。(who引导定语从句)The_film_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora.7他试图说服那里的人们让地球人在他们的祖国开采自然资源。He_tried_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural_resources.8在我看来，这是最成功的电影之一。In_my_opinion,_this_is_one_of_the_most_successful_films.9从这部电影中，我了解到不同种族的人们应该互相尊重、和谐相处而不是兵戎相见。(that引导的宾语从句)From_it,_I_learn_that_different_races_should_respect_each_other_and_live_in_harmony_instead_of_being_at_war.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用定语从句及现在分词短语作状语改写句1和句2Avatar,_which_was_shown_on_the_Chinese_mainland_in_2010,_broke_the_record_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.2用不定式作目的状语连接句6和句7The_film_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora_to_try_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural_resources.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇A_Hollywood_film,_Avatar,_which_was_shown_on_the_Chinese_mainland_in_2010,_broke_the_record_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.It_took_more_than_five_years_to_make_the_film_and_it_is_evident_that_its_one_of_the_most_expensive_films._It_won_a_Golden_Globe_accompanied_with_nine_Oscar_nominations._The_film_is_set_in_2154_and_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora_to_try_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural