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2015届高考高三英语二轮专题训练：短文改错（3）【英语卷（解析）2015届广西桂林十八中高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） （注：本题为新课改内容） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。in the first day when i went to work in a very famous restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few people coming for dinner. so i am “invited” to have a meal in the restaurant. after ordered two french dishes and some food, i began to look frequently at their watch timing the serving of the meal. meanwhile, i looked around to see that there was anything else wrong there. i wrote something improper down secret. my meal was not serving yet. i looked at my watch 32 minutes passed! i realized that wait too long for service was the main reason why the business was poor. then i wrote a report about my findings and presented it the boss.【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】71. 第一句 第一个in改为on。 在具体的某一天用介词on。72. a few 改为few。 老板抱怨没几个人来餐馆吃晚饭。73. 第二句 am改为was。讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时。74. 第三句 ordered改为 ordering。order的逻辑主语是主句的主语i, i和order是逻辑上的主谓关系，所以用ordering。75. their改为my。 本句的主语是i ,它的形容词性物主代词是my。76. 第四句that改为whether。我环顾四周看看是否还有别的不对的地方。77. 第五句 secret改为secretly 修饰动词短语write down,要用副词。 78. 第六句 serving改为served。meal 和serve是被动关系，饭还没有被端上来。79. 第八句 wait改为waiting。 动名词短语作主语。 80. 第九句 the boss前加to。present sth to sb 将某物呈献给某人【英语卷（解析）2014届西藏自治区高三最后一次模拟统一考试（201405）】e1 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：1.在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. i want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. in my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as i have been keeping one at home for some time. with such pen pal, i hope i can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. i believed i will improve my english by doing so and learning more about her country. i am looking forward to hearing from you soon.【答案】1.把for去掉ask for意为“请求”。这里是“问询”之意，故去掉for2.the改为herin ones twenties在某人二十几岁的时候3.similarly改为similarsimilar to是后置定语修饰interests。要用形容词形式。4.he改为she这里指代的是a girl，所以要用eresting改为interestedbe interested in对感兴趣。这里同第3题，interested作后置定语。6.beside改为besidesbeside adv.旁边地。besides adv.除此之外。这两个为易混词，应特别注意。7.such后加asuch a pen pal这样一个笔友。such a如此一个。8.whichever改为whateverwhatever 无论什么，强调不明什么对象。whichever 无论哪个，强调在明确的对象中不知要选哪个。9.believed改为believe根据后面的从句的时态可知这里是一般现在时。10.learning改为learnlearn是will的宾语所以用原形。(2013宝鸡市三模)jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.the other day, jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.at the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.without hesitation, jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.a few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.答案：jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.the other day, jack was going home by bike as usual he heard a woman screaming for help.then he was riding quickly the direction of the voice.at the corner, he saw a woman by a man with a knife in hand.without hesitation, jack made immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by him down against the ground.a few minutes later, three came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand, since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town. (2013长春市第四次调测)i still remember my middle school life in changchun. i was then in school for student from wenchuan. as we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. we had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. however, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. we enjoyed our happy life. at weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. we were living in a big family. we treat each other as brothers and sisters. it has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.答案：i still remember my middle school life in changchun. i was then in school for from wenchuan. as we all left home an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. we had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . however, we seldom felt lonely or . we enjoyed our happy life. at weekends, we play basketball on the playground, in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. we were living in a big family. we each other as brothers and sisters. it has been five years we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before. (2013甘肃省二诊)many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. according to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. no one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. on one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children to want things that they dont real need.答案：many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. according to studies, children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of and the ability to enjoy themselves. no one worries much about the radio young people listen to, although radios can be very .teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children want things that they dont need.(2013乌鲁木齐三诊)rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. in my mind，it is real positive in our life. on one hand，it is great exercise. it not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. on the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. for those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. for conclusion, it is a good to go c