短文改错专题讲座.docx

短文改错一. 短文改错命题三个角度：_法，_法和行文_.二命题点具体集中在8个方面：1._词 2._词 3._词 4._词 5._词 6._词 7._词 8.行文_.三Try and practice:Try 1-11. She liked it very much and reads it to the class.2. Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.3. You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out.Practice 1-11. She rushed at the shadow and shouts to it loudly until it disappeared.2. By the time Mrs. Black returned home from America , her daughter graduated from college.3. Having been lost in a storm, a member o f the navy team rescued.Try 1-21. This accident make us to realize the seriousness of the safety problem.2. Raise your voice and make you hear by everyone here.3. Play football not only gets us relaxed but also makes us grow up tall and strong.Practice 1-2 1. The pupils will get confused if they are made learn too much.2. Translating into English, the sentence was found to have an entirely different word order.3. I was accustomed to be the only child at a table full of adults.Try-21. We can find a lot of informations on the Internet.2. Different people speak different language.3. I first met him at a friend birthday party five years ago.Practice 21. The head office of the company is in Shanghai, but it has five branch at home and abroad.2. As I have troubles in English grammar, I attend an English class to study grammar.Try 31. I passed the driving test, so I felt very proudly o f myself.2. We can hear birds singing happy all around.3. The Yellow River is the second longer river in China.Practice31. I strong suggest that the whole society pay much attention to the food safety.2. Ill share you a truly story with you that happened a couple of days ago.3. He worked hardly everyday and finally he succeeded.4. The children loved their three-day trip, and they enjoyed the horse ride more.Try 41. Could you share your experience for me?2. I am writing to thank you with your kind help.3. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year.4. We must keep it mind that we play for the team.Practice 41. She was glad to see her children well taken care for in the nursery.2. He froze while waiting the bus during the snowstorm.3. The boy wanted to join in the army but was turned down because he was under age.Try 51. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.2. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy them.3. I suddenly saw a wallet on the bench. I picked up and checked the contents.4. With thumb up, he expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly. Seeing the simile on her face, I felt happy that I could help.Practice 51. Whats more, you have to be friendly with your pupils and take good care of him.2. Anyone from students to old people can become ours member.3. Though born into an ordinary family, Pitt showed her interest in filming at an early age. After he left high school.Try 61. Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to an European family.2. We may be one family and live under a same roof.3. Although we have been members for a short period of time, we have made a great progress.4. All of sudden, he hit me on the back.Practice 61. Now, its not a eight-hour workday any more; everyone seems to work longer hours.2. She is such pretty girl that when people meet her, they always say “Oh, how lovely”.3. This morning I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench.Try 71. He said that I could take away everything which belonged to him.2. We would return at night to hear that he had done and saw in the wild.3. Work hard, you will make much progress and realize your dream.Practice 71. Ill never forget the day which I first went to school.2. But it didnt matter that I would win or not.3. I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasnt very tasty.Try 81. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine.2. A few roommates were invited to enjoy the snacks. Luckily all of them got poisoned.Practice 81. I returned home safe and sound. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay here pleasant.2. Inside the wallet, I found some money or a card with a phone number.短文改错归纳总结： 动词_态_态和_谓，有谓用_谓，doing_动 done_动, to的作用细体会 ;名词_数_数和所有; 冠词_元_辅_最高; 形作_, 副作_，than的前面用_较 ; 代词_、_、_、_要分清; 连词逻辑需细辨; 介词搭配要积累 考场实录（15年全国1卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there . Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it. A（15年全国卷）One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found when his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later ,Tony saw parents. Mom said.”How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again. B（14年全国卷）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We didnt need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day . My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teach