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大学英语四级考试作文备考专题一 四级作文评分原则 2分档 条理不清 思想紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误 且多为严重语言错误 5分档 基本切题 表达思想不够清楚 连贯性差 有较多严重语言错误 8分档 基本贴题 表达思想比较清楚 文字尚连贯但语言错误较多 其中有少量的严重错误 11分档 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错误 14分档 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺 连贯性好 基本无语言错误 2008年12月作文及各分值段例文 Limitingtheuseofdisposableplasticbags一次性塑料袋曾广为使用由此带来的问题限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义 14分值段Disposableplasticbagswereoncewidelyused Astheywerecheapandconvenient wedependedonthemtocarrythingswhenshopping Theyhadbecomepartofoureverydaylife However disposableplasticbagshavebroughtlotsofproblems Firstly duetotheirchemicalstructure thebagsaredifficulttobreakdown Moreover somepoisonouschemicalsintheplasticswillsetofftothesoilanddamageourcrops Finally ourhealthmaybeharmedandtheenvironmentmaybebadlydamaged Canyouimagineourearthbeingcoveredbymillionsofplasticbags So itreallymakessensetolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags Byreducingtheuseofthem wecanprotectourenvironmentandourselves Maybeitwillbealittlemorecostlytouseotherbags butthebenefitswegetgreatlyoutweightheextramoneywepay Inaword itisnecessarytolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbagsandinthisway everyoneofuscanmakeourworldabetterenvironmenttolive 11分值段Asweallknow disposableplasticbagswerewidelyusedinthepast Wewouldusethemwheneverwewentshopping Thedisposableplasticbagbroughtuslotsofconveniences However theproblemtheplasticbagbringsisalsoserious Itmakesourenvironmentdirtyandmessedwhenflyingintheair Andthemostseriouspointisthatitcan tdisappearitselfsoon itwilllastforalongtime Somanypeoplecallthedisposableplasticbag thewhitepollution Thetimehascomewhenweshouldlimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags Theactionwillmakeourenvironmentcleanerandmorecomfortableforustolive Ontheotherhand whenwereplacedisposableplasticbags theactionwillsavealotofmoneyforsellersaswellasthebuyers Solet stakeactiontolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags Itwilldoalotofgoodtous 8分值段Weallhavesuchexperinenc afterwewenttothesupermarket wealwaysgetsomeplasticbags Eventhedisposableplasticbagspolluteourenvironment fewofuscanrefusetogetplasticbags becauseweareusedtouseit withtheflyingdevelopingofeconomic thedisposableplasticbagsaremorewideused Butourenvironmentcan tstandbytheheavypollution Thedisposableplasticbagswillexistmanyyears maybetheplasticbagswhichyoueverusedwouldstillbetherewhenyouhaveagrandson Soitnotonlyeffectourlifebutalsohurtourafterspring Sothegovernmentstartedtolimittheuseofplasticbags Thisactioniseffectivethatmanypeopleusepaperorclothingbagsinsteadofplasticbags Althoughtherearemanyplasticbagsareused Ithinkaftersomeyears wewillfeeltheadvantagethatlimitingtheuseofplasticbagsbringtous 5分值段Foreasy disposableplasticbagswereusedwidely Theyareverypopularforus Thoughmanydisposableplasticbagshavesomuchdifferentface theyusuallybeusedonce Thentheywouldbetakeoffeverywhere Withdisposableplasticbagswereusedmoreandmore theproblemsaregoingtotrouble Theycouldn tdiscoverandtheycouldn tforturn Theyhavebecomeagreatproblemforourenvironment Whenwearewalkinginthestreet wecanseethebagseverywhere Theywouldflywhenithavewind Thebadbehaviorinfluencedourcitycleanveryseriously Sowemustthinkoutsomeideastosolvetheproblem Theuseofdisposableplasticbagsmustbelimited Wecouldtakebasketorbagswhichcanreturn whenwegoshopping Iwishwecandoourbestforprotectingourenvironment 2分段值Todayariseanypulationquestion Thenmanypeoplehaveknowingthisquestionandwanttoworkout Fromthiswaywebringoutmanycircumstancesthing Forthatairbecomeunusually somequestionoffood manypeopletohaveillandsoon Fromnowandup manymanthinkingthatlimitingtheuseofdisposablebags Maybeitwasonebestwaytoputupour slive becausehavebestairandwecanhealthbody Useofplasticbags ontheworld sicehadbecomewaterandthenpulationturntowarm Fromuseofplasticbags risemanyairquestion Ifwehavenomeantomakeoutthatquestionwecouldnotthinktheworldwillbecome Nowwecanbelucklyforweknowthatquestion Thatwayoflimitingtheuseofdisposableplasticbags mayputupair Wewanttomanyofthingtobringupourair Andthenwecanlivemorethanhealth 奠基篇 句子基础知识 写出正确的句子 CorrectSentence 写出有效的句子 EffectiveSentence 五种基本句型 主 谓 S V 主 谓 宾 S V O 主 谓 宾 宾 S V O O 主 谓 宾 宾补 S V O C 主 系 表 S V C 主 谓 S V 1 在过去的二十年里中国发生了巨大的变化 Overthepasttwentyyears dramaticchangeshavehappened takenplace inChina 主 谓 宾 S V O 1 在过去的二十年里中国发生了巨大的变化 ThepasttwentyyearshavewitnessedthedramaticchangeinChina 主 谓 宾 宾 S V O O 1 Youcannotteacholddogsnewtricks 老狗学不了新把戏 Youcannotteacholddogsnewtricks 主谓间接宾语直接宾语主 谓 宾 宾补 S V O C 1 Iwillnotletyoudown 我不会让你失望 主 系 表 S V C 1 系动词包括be动词 感官动词和表示状态变化的词 be seem stay remain smell 2 therebe句型 1 如今 小孩子上学越来越早 呈逐年增加趋势 Nowadays thereisagrowingtendencyforchildrentoattendschoolearlier 3 Therebe本身就是谓语 所以后面的主语后不能使用谓语动词了 Nowadays thereisalargenumberofchildrenstudyabroad Nowadays therearealargenumberofchildrenstudyingabroad 1 根据这张图表 1962到1965年间老师的数量急剧下降 Accordingtothisfigure therewasasharpdecreaseinthenumberofteachersfrom1962to1965 1 记叙文题型 要求考生写一篇记叙文 描述事件发生的时间 地点 原因 人物及结果 最后对事件进行简单分析 如 2003年6月四级作文 2003年9月四级作文 2004年6月六级作文 历年四级作文分类 2003年6月四级作文 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸 就此写一份见证书 见证书须包括以下几点 1 车祸发生的时间及地点2 你所见到的车祸情况3 你对车祸原因的分析 范文 AnEye WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccidentIwitnessedatrafficaccidentonthestreetatabout5p m yesterday Hereismyaccountofit Ithappenedat5p m yesterdayatXiaoZhaiintersectionwhenIwasonmywaybacktoschool AtaxiranintoacyclingboyridingacrossChangAnRoadnearthecrossroad Whenthetaxipulledupabruptlyafterthedriverrealizedwhathadhappened theboywasalreadylyingontheground bleedingandcryingaloud In5minutes anambulancecameandtookawaythewoundedboy Thereisnoknowinghowitcameabout ButIsupposeitwasbecausetheboyrantheredlightandthetaxidrivertookitforgrantedthattherewouldbenopedestrianorcyclistwouldcrosstheroadatthatmoment Thisaccidentwarnsusofthedangerofignoringtrafficregulations 2 阐述主题或现象解释型 要求从一个主题出发 按照提纲的要求进行写作 如 2005年12月四级作文 2005年6月四六级作文 2003年1月四级作文 2003年1月作文 Directions Forthispart youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicItPaystoBeHonest Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese 1 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象2 诚实利人利已 做人应该诚实 ItPaystoBeHonestAlthoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue therearestilldishonestpeopleinoursociety Forexample somebusinessmensellfakeproducttotheirconsumers somestudentscheatintheexams Dishonestpeopleareshort sighted Thosewhosellfakeproductsmaymakemoneyatfirst butconsumerswon tbuytheirproductsanymore Asaresult theywilllosetheirfortuneorevenbesenttoprison Bycontrast honestpeoplegainalot Thosewhoalwaystelltruthorkeeptotheirpromisenotonlyletotherstrustthembutgainrespectfromotherpeopleaswell Suchpersonsaresuretohavealotofgoodfriends Becausetheyaretrustableand respectable everyoneiseagertomakefriendswiththem Besides itiseasierforapersonwithagoodrecordtogetagoodjob Generallyspeaking everyemployerwantshisemployeestobehonest Sowecansaythatanyonewhoishonestwillbepaidbacklater Inaword honestywinstrust respectandhonor Soitisimportantthatweshouldbehonest 2005年12月作文 Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow 1 名校校园正成为旅游新热点2 校园是否应对游客开放 人们看法不同3 我认为 Nowadays manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsvisitTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversitiesinChina Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampustotourists Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions Ononehand somepeoplearguedthat Ontheotherhand somepeopleholdanegativeviewthat TopicSentence TopicSentence Inmyopinion thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing Thecampusismainlyaplaceforstudy Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield TopicSentence 2007年12月四级作文范文 Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofElectivecoursestochoose Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow 1 各大学开设了多种多样的选修课2 学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3 以你自己为例 WiththereformofChinesehighereducation moreandmorecollegeshaveavarietyofelectivecoursesforstudentstochoose Forexample Certainly studentshavedifferentreasonstochoosetheirownelectives Forsome Ontheotherhand othersmayholdtheideathat Takemeasanexample 2008年6月作文 1 娱乐方式多种多样 2 有的有利 有的有害3 我的看法 3 正反观点题型 要求考生从正反两个方面来论证某一观点 如2000年6月四级作文 2005年12月四级作文 1996年6月四六级作文 1996年1月英语四六级作文 1995年1月 年 报月四级作文 Amongvariousrecipesoneenjoysinhisorhercollegelife recreationalactivitiescanbynomeansbeignored Itisnumerousactivities suchasspokenEnglishcompetitions sportsevents andclubsandsocietiesofdifferentinterests thathelpto