高二英语上学期开学测试题分类之九 书面表达.doc

高二开学测汇编九 书面表达（一）假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；hi sharon,this is li xia. i learned from your post that you want to improve your mandarm_【参考答案】hi sharon,this is li xia. i learned from your post that you want to improve your mandarin. i am quite interested in it . i think im fit for it. as a student, i have been learning mandarin for many years. in addition ,i am chinese, which means mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. so im quite confident that i can help you learn mandarin.learning mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing mandarin everyday. as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. besides, you can also read some books in chinese、see some chinese films and listen to some chinese radio programmes. speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.in your post, you say you can teach english as a reward. it is just what i want. im eager to improve my english. so, if you allow me to help you learn mandarin, you can also help me improve my english. we can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in english and half an hour in chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. hope for you early reply!yours sincerely li xia【解析】试题分析：考查提纲类作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。本篇文章的要点具体，可分成三段写，第一段写要点1、2；第二段写要点3；第三段写要点4，以及希望得到对方的回信。【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：i am chinese, which means mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句：it is just what i want.等。还使用了大量短语等。【难度】一般（二）电脑在我们生活中越来越重要,一些学生认为电脑有很多好处,而一些学生认为电脑有很多弊端.请结合下表内容,写篇文章并发表自己的看法。注意: 1.词数100左右, 开头已为你写好(不仅计入总次数)2. 应适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。agreementdisagreement1. help us to study2. watch tv and listen to music, make our school life colorful3. make more friends1. bad for our eyes2. waste us too much time and money3. visit some unhealthy websitesnowadays, computers play an important part in our lives, and they are very popular with students. some students think_【答案】 nowadays, computers play an important part in our lives, and they are very popular with students. some students think computers are very useful, first, we can use computers to get some information to help us study. second, in our free time, we can watch tv and listen to music on the internet to make our school life colorful. third, we can make more friends through computers.but some students have different opinions, they think if we use a computer for a long time, it is bad for our eyes. some students spend too much time and money on playing computer games. as a result, it wastes us a lot of time and money. some students even visit unhealthy websites, which is not good for their growth.in my opinion, every coin has two sides. if we use computers properly, they can bring a lot of benefits to us. we had better not spend too much time on computers, otherwise, it would be bad for our study.【解析】 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语are very popular with受欢迎；be bad for 对有坏处；spend time on sth 花费时间做某事；as a result结果；some students even visit unhealthy websites, which is not good for their growth这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；we had better not spend too much time on computers, otherwise, it would be bad for our study这个句子otherwise连接两个句子；【难度】一般（三）假如你是李华，现任你们学校的学生会主席。你将代表学生会起草一份倡议书，号召全校同学行动起来，为环保运动做出自己的努力。同时下周六学校将组织同学在全市进行环保宣传活动，征召志愿者到校学生会报名。注意：(1)短文应该包括以上所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥;(2)词数：100左右;(3)倡议书格式以提供，不计入总词数;(4)参考词汇：征召(新人) recruit v10 may, 2014dear brothers and sisters,_yours sincerely,li huauniversity students union【答案】10 may, 2014dear brothers and sisters,on behalf of the university students union, i, the chairman of the union , am earnestly calling for your active participation in our environmental protection campaign. it is the duty of every global villager; man just can not sustain his glorious civilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.do you cherish precious opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth; right next saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental protection across the city. the university students union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers. lets join our hands and take action immediately.yours sincerely,li hua【解析】试题分析：这是一篇倡议书，话题为学生熟知，与高中生的生活实际贴近，而且具有一定的开放性，使得每个学生都能够有话可说，符合新课标理念下的命题方向。首先简要介绍环保问题之重要，号召同学们行动起来，共同参与环保活动;其次就环保发出倡议，并征召志愿者。这样既把考生限定在一定范围之内，又给予了考生相当的发挥的自由，有助于考生的作文脱颖而出。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：first，second， besides, whats more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。（四）假如你是李华，你的笔友tom发来电子邮件询问你的音乐喜好和你在新年晚会上的表现。请你给他写封电子邮件，回答他的所有问题。dear li hua,from your last e-mail, i am glad to know you like music and performed at the new year party.i am eager to know what kind of music you like and dislike best and why. and since you are so busy with your studies, i want to know when and how you listen to music.besides, at the new year party, did you sing or play a musical instrument? is it a success?looking forward to your reply.yours,tom注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3信的抬头与结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。hi, tom，as you know, im music mad. _by the way, do you love music as well?【答案】 hi, tomas you know, im music mad. of all kinds of music, pop is my favorite. i am crazy about it. i think its lyrics are really catchy and meaningful and i can learn to sing easily. pop makes my life delightful and alive. i cant stand rock music. its too loud and noisy. although i dont have enough spare time to enjoy music, i often listen to it on mp3 on my way to school. at home if i dont study, the music will be on all the time. at the new year party, i played the violin in the school orchestra. i think we played pretty well. the audience gave us a big clap.by the way, do you love music as well?【解析】 试题分析：考查半开放性作文。半开放型作文是指试题给出部分要点，考生再增加一些要点。需要注意的是在写给出材料时不要遗漏要点，更不能曲解试题的意思。而在写自己增加部分时，也不是随意发挥，要吃透命题人的意思。本篇习作需要注意的是，命题人在给出要点时，是在材料文章中给出的，故要求考生仔细阅读材料，找出要回答的问题。然后在此基础上再发挥。本篇习作的给出要点就是几个问题：what kind of music you like and dislike best and why、when and how you listen to music以及did you sing or play a musical instrument? is it a success?。【亮点说明】本篇习作回答了来信中的几个问题，要点齐全，结构清晰。使用了一些高级词汇如：am crazy about、catchy and meaningful、delightful and alive、on my way to school、gave us a big clap。还使用了状语从句although i dont have enough spare time to enjoy music, i often。【难度】一般（五）假设你是某国际中学高二学生李华，校长mr.white 打算请一位著名科学家到你校演讲，请你根据以下内容给他写一封信，建议邀请马丁.卡普拉斯(martin karplus)教授：马丁.卡普拉斯简介美国理论化学家1930年3月15日出生于奥地利，现在是哈佛大学(harvard university) 的一名化学教授。推荐理由1 卡普拉斯方程（karplus equation)就是以他的名字命名的他和其他两位同事共同获得2013年诺贝尔化学奖参考词汇： theoretical 理论的 colleague 同事注意：1 词数100左右2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3 信得开头结尾已经给出，且不计入总词汇dear mr. white,i heard that you are planning to yours sincerely,li hua【答案】 dear mr. white,i heard that you are planning to invite a famous scientist to give us a speech, so im writing to ask whether we can have a speech given by professor martin karplus.born on march15, 1930, professor martin karplus is an austrian-born american theoretical chemist. he works as a professor of chemistry at harvard university.i have two reasons for asking for him to give us a speech. one is that the karplus equation is named after him, and the other is that he received the 2013 nobel prize in chemistry, together with two other colleagues.thank you for reading my letter. i hope you can consider my suggestion seriously.yours sincerely,li hua【解析】 试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语give sb sth 给某人某物；be named after .以名字命名；take sth seriously 认真考虑某事；born on march15, 1930, professor martin karplus is an austrian-born american theoretical chemist.这个句子born做伴随状语。one is that the karplus equation is named after him这个句子that引导表语从句；【难度】一般（六）假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括： 1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）； 2. 说明你打算参加的原因； 3. 询问对方的意向。 注意： 1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。 提示词：龙舟训练营 dragon boat training campdear jim,_yours,li hua【答案】dear jim,im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. i want to join a dragon boat training camp. i wonder if youd like to go with me.this camp will open on july 20th, it offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about chinese culture. if you are interested in it, let me know and ill send you more information.hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. 【解析】试题分析：本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友jim参加龙舟训练营，属于典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请 介绍活动(时间，地点，内容，参加原因)期待和感谢。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；i wonder if youd like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。【难度】一般（七）中国人出国旅游的不文明行为越来越受到广泛关注。请以表格中所列举的事实为依据，写一则英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。不文明行为你的看法在公共场所：随地吐痰乱丢垃圾大声喧哗 注意言谈举止爱护环境维护中国人的形象 注意：1. 文章必须包括表格中的提示内容，可以增加细节使行文连贯；2. 词数100左右；3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；4. 参考词汇：乱丢 (垃圾) litter；吐痰 spit；形象 image；声誉 reputationas more and more chinese go traveling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in._【答案】 as more and more chinese go travelling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in. many overseas chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere. the poor behaviors of some chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. since china has become an important part of the global village, we really need to understand and respect foreign cultures, so as to get along well when travelling abroad. so before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there and mind our behaviors in public places, which aims to improve chinas image in foreigners eyes. whats more, wherever you go you need to protect the environment. only in this way, can we win respect for ourselves and our country.【解析】 试题分析：本文的主题是中国游客的不文明现象，本文与时政有关，关心时政的同学比较有话说。对于此类文章，要注意一下几点：1、文章的大致内容表格中已经给出了，同学们要根据表格中的信息进行润色，写出一篇完整的文章；2、注意要增加一些细节，以及自己的看法；3、注意单词、词组、句式的运用来给文章增色。【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类文章的写作，要善于使用不同的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换。文章使用了whats more,这样的词来连接文章。学生在写作时也要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，本文运用了embarrassed，poor behaviors，have done great harm to ，become an important part of ，get along well，improve chinas image等短语和词汇。本文也有很多句型值得学习，如so as to get along well when travelling abroad.状语从句，which aims to improve chinas image in foreigners eyes.定语从句，only in this way, can we win respect for ourselves and our country.倒装句，这样文章才能写出新意。【难度】一般（八）nick是一个25岁的澳大利亚青年, 出生时无手无脚, 曾被很多人当作怪物嘲笑。但他以“态度就是高度”为人生信条，永不言弃, 乐观自信。他不仅学会了游泳、冲浪、钓鱼，还完成了大学教育并获得了双学位, 现在是两个公司的ceo。他的成功之路被认为是奇迹。请以“attitude is altitude”为题目, 根据以上信息概述nick的人生经历，并谈谈他对你的启发, 写一篇120词左右的短文。首句已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇: 四肢limbsattitude is altitudenick is a 25-year-old australian man, whose life is full of hardships. 【答案】 attitude is altitudenick is a 25-year-old australian man, whose life is full of hardships. he was born without limbs and thus was used to be made fun of for looking like a monster. everything seemed impossible to him. however, nick never gave up. after many failures, he finally learned to swim, fish and even surf. what surprised us is that he completed a university education and got two degrees. and now he is the ceo of two companies.when he was asked about the secret of his success, nicks answer is: attitude is altitude. in his eyes, nothing is impossible if he is determined to overcome any difficulties. he thinks a positive attitude is the key to success.after reading nicks story, i have been feeling inspired by his spirit. compared with him, we are healthy enough to enjoy life. somehow, we are always frustrated facing difficulties. i think nick has set a good example to us. try to appreciate what we have and be more persevering and we will achieve success in the end.【解析】 试题分析：nick是一个25岁的澳大利亚青年, 出生时无手无脚, 曾被很多人当作怪物嘲笑。但他以“态度就是高度”为人生信条，永不言弃, 乐观自信。他不仅学会了游泳、冲浪、钓鱼，还完成了大学教育并获得了双学位, 现在是两个公司的ceo。他的成功之路被认为是奇迹。请以“attitude is altitude”为题目, 根据以上信息概述nick的人生经历，并谈谈他对你的启发, 写一篇120词左右的短文。要求我们把内容翻译成完整通顺的句子，概述nick的人生经历，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实，一定要谈到他对你的启发。写作时注意准确运用时态、语态，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇、短语和高级句型为文章润色，避免全写成简单句。注意要求的字数在120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。首句已给出，不计入总词数。【亮点说明】nick is a 25-year-old australian man, whose life is full of hardships.此句中含有一个whose引导的非限制性定语从句；he was born without limbs and thus was used to be made fun of for looking like a monster.此句中含有多个高级词汇和短语without、thus、was used to be made fun of for looking lik；what surprised us is that he completed a university education and got two degrees.此句非常经典包含了一个what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句；when he was asked about the secret of his success, nicks answer is: attitude is altitude.此句中运用了when引导的时间状语从句；after reading nicks story, i have been feeling inspired by his spirit.句中运用了现在完成进行时态；compared with him, we are healthy enough to enjoy life.句中运用了高级词组compared with him。【难度】一般（九）过生日互赠礼物在中学生中似乎成为一种时尚，甚至有的学生还去饭店搞生日聚会。对此同学们有不同的看法。假设你是王平，请你根据下表提示，给某英语报社的编辑写一封信，并谈谈自己的观点。赞成为同学们提供交际机会；利于增进同学之间的友谊；学习之余可以放松心情。反对容易造成对时间和金钱的浪费；导致攀比；对青少年学习和成长造成不利影响。你的观点.注意：1. 词数：100左右（信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。）2. 短文须包括表中的全部内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇：攀比：keep up with the jonesesdear editor,im a middle school student named wang ping. recently, we often have to buypresents for our_【答案】 dear editor,im a middle school student named wang ping. recently, we often have to buy presents for our classmates birthdays, and sometimes, we are invited to their birthday parties in expensive hotels, which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays.about this there are two different views. some students think it provides us with a good chance to communicate with each other and develop our friendship, and besides, we can relax after hard work at school. however, some othe