高考英语二轮专题复习书面表达极限突破测试卷(9).doc

2014届高考英语二轮专题复习书面表达极限突破测试卷 (9)基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)明天的英语课轮到你进行课前英语小演讲。请根据以下信息，以“健康早餐”为主题写一份演讲稿。写作内容1. 现象：有些同学不吃早餐；有些同学吃早餐，但营养不均衡。2. 后果：严重影响身体健康；影响学习效率。3. 建议（1）早起，吃营养均衡的早餐。（2）营养均衡的早餐包括：含有碳水化合物的谷类，以提供每天所需的能量；鸡蛋、牛奶等提供蛋白质；蔬菜、水果等帮助消化。谷类：graun；碳水化合物：carbohydrates；蛋白质：protein； 消化：digestion 写作要求1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。2.演讲的首句已给出，不计入句子数量的总数。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作：（说明：由于我们工作的疏漏，试题中本题所给的参考词汇有一处拼写错误，“谷类”应是grain。考生如果写成了graun，在本次评卷中不扣分。） im very much honored to give you a speech on healthy breakfast. some students in our class often go to school without breakfast while others do have breakfast but not a well-balanced one. consequently, their health and study efficiency are negatively affected. a healthy and well-balanced breakfast should consist of whole grains, eggs and milk, fruits and vegetables. the grain which contains carbohydrates can provide the energy we need every day. eggs and milk supply protein and fruits and vegetables are good for healthy digestion. therefore, i strongly suggest that we should get up early and have a well-balanced breakfast before going to school.【基础写作评分说明：】 基础写作主要考查学生的语言结构的应用能力，能够应用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题要求学生根据所提供的信息，使用五个句子表达写作内容中所提供的全部内容。命题思想是要求考生在表达这些内容时能够：关注写作对象（读者），正确使用英语演讲的写作手法。正确使用连接手段、分词、介词短语等来整合信息。正确使用复合句，如定语从句：the grain which contains carbohydrates can provide the energy we need every day. 宾语从句：i strongly suggest that 等。正确使用表示原因、结果、目的等的表达方式等。在评分时，应注意以下几个方面：1 按照评分标准，实行分析法评分：按语言、内容和连贯三项标准分别给分；2 在语言方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范；学生是否使用了合适的句型结构。3 在内容方面，重点评判学生是否表达全部规定的内容；如果学生在表达完整的内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分；4 在连贯方面，重点评判五个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文，逻辑是否合理。（具体内容见评分标准）基础写作【评分标准】评分说明 基础写作的评分建议采用分析法，即按照语言、内容和连贯三项指标分别给分，最后累计作为该题的总得分。项目赋分评分标准语言7-8具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。1-2语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。0语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。备注每多或少写一个句子，扣1分。内 容5包括了所有信息内容。4包括了大部分信息内容。3包括了基本信息内容。2包括了小部分信息内容。1包括了少许信息内容。0没有包括所提供的信息内容。连 贯2内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。1.5内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。1内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。0内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。备注文不对题，给0分。【2012届南充高中高三第六次月考】书面表达（满分35分） 下面是对中学生对志愿工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给的信息写一篇英语小短文。70%的学生赞成参加志愿工作为社会作贡献，帮助别人是一件很有意义的工作，带来很多个人利益，为日后的工作获得宝贵的技能和经验，为自己创造机遇，增强信心、自觉意识、良好的交际能力和领导才能25%的学生不愿意从事志愿工作无报酬，浪费时间，耽误学习 5%的学生无明确态度漠不关心要求：1、词数：100左右。2、开头部分已给出，不计入总字数。different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work._【参考范文】different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work. 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. they consider that it can make a contribution to society and it is a worthwhile job to help others. it can also bring personal benefits and will contribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career. voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them, build confidence, self-awareness, good communication skills and leadership ability. 25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. they think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time. the rest of the students dont have clear attitude to it , nor do they care about it. i think each of us should make a contribution to society. no matter how small it is, it will help make a difference.（a）（20分钟）目前，不少人在写作文或交流时喜欢使用网络语言。就此现象，你班最近举行了一场讨论。请根据下表的提示，客观地介绍讨论的情况及你的观点。40%的同学认为60%的同学认为你的观点1. 有点荒诞，有时让人无法理解2. 违背了汉语的语法规则，对学习毫无帮助1. 幽默，使语言更生动2. 有助于表达思想 1 2. 荒诞ridiculous注意：1. 对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。2. 词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。nowadays, with the development of the internet, there came a kind of language called web language._nowadays, with the development of the internet, there came a kind of language called web language. recently, our class has held a discussion on whether its good for students to use web language in writing compositions or communication.40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using web language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. worse still, its hard for them to make themselves understood. in their opinion, it is against chinese grammar, and its not beneficial to students studies.however, the rest of the students are fond of it. they think what they say will sound homorous, which makes the language more lively. moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.in my opinion, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. i dont think it good to use web language. it may be fashionable as some think, but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.（b）（20分钟）你们学校在征集改善道路交通状况的文章，请你根据题目要求及下面图画的内容提示，为学校的壁报写一篇稿件，谈谈你对交通状况的思考。注意：1.词数150左右；2应包括图画中的全部内容：3标题与开头已为你写好；4参考词汇：行人 pedestrian；人行横道 zebra crossing；隔离护栏 divider。whats wrong with them?take a look at the road conditions of today. something must be wrong with todays people._【参考答案】whats wrong with them?take a look at the road conditions of today. something must be wrong with todays people. quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all. they cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away. some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads. when there is a red light，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop. they all forget where they are.，even worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.why do such things happen? in my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the li