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l 2011年六级写作范文：考证热Certificate Craze On Campus1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”2)产生这一现象的原因3)你的看法【范文】Certificate Craze On CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing; quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.l Private Tutoring1.为孩子聘请家教目前非常普遍2.家教的利与弊3.我的看法【范文】Private tutoring is “in”.A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors，Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents, for various reasons，missed the chance of obtaining a good education. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless, private tutoring is the only solution. As private tutoring is usually one-to-one, the teacher knows the strong points as we11 as the weak points of the pupil, clearly.However, private tutoring has its own disadvantages; for one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment, which are essential for their physical and mental health. For another, some teachers, busy“shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. Whats more， some teachers are eager to help pupils do well in the test, offering the so-ca11ed tips for testGenerally speaking, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages. Greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils potentials. Only in this way can we generation be healthily brought up.l Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Unhealthy Habits of College Students. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1部分大学生有不健康的生活习惯，例如：晚睡、过度消费、沉溺游戏。 2这种不健康生活习惯的危害 3如何纠正 写作思路依然是上课反复强调的功能段落的写作思路：首段为负面现象描述（即提出问题），二段为问题分析（危害），尾段为建议措施。 It can be noticed that there are some unhealthy living habits among young people, especially college students. Typical examples include staying up late, being addicted to games, consuming in an inappropriate way. Thus, due attention should be paid to students daily habits. Apparently, these bad habits may generate negative impacts. To begin with, they may impair students physical health and psychological fitness. In addition, what worries many teachers is that they may also exert negative influences on students academic performance. To conclude, never can we turn a blind eye to these phenomena. In view of the seriousness of this issue, it is time that we took effective measure. Firstly, it is suggested that universities or colleges should cultivate students awareness of healthy living. Secondly, students themselves are well-advised to learn to regulate and control their own life appropriately. Only by doing so, can we hope to see the ideal scenes in which students enjoy their colorful and healthy life in Ivory Tower. （162 words）lDirections： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion？ You should write at least 120 words， and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below： 1）有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行 2）两种旅行方式的好处 3）你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么？ Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion？ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。 高分范文 travel Alone or Travel with a Companion？ 1When it comes to traveling way， different people will offer different opinions. 2Some people like to travel alone， 2while others prefer to travel with a companion. 3Of course， everyone has his consideration for his preference. 4Traveling alone， one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring others. 3Moreover， traveling alone 5tend to bring the traveler 6unexpected surprise， 7such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. 8Compared with traveling alone， traveling with a companion has also its advantages. 3For one thing， the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. 3For another， 4traveling with others who have same interest with， youu can share costs and experiences with them. 9As to me， I prefer to travel with a companion. 3Firstly， we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. 3Secondly， I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. 3In sum， 10both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions， and you can find the pleasure from either one. 亮点点评 1“当涉及到或谈到时”。 2用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。 3过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 4现在分词短语作伴随状语。 5“倾向，趋于”。 6“意外的惊喜”。 7表示列举。 8“和相比”。 9用于引出自己的观点或选择。 10“或者，或者”。 英语三级、公共英语、商务英语考试佳句临摩 1.佳句：When it comes to traveling way， different people will offer different opinions. 临摩：当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时，人们的看法各不相同。 _. 2.佳句：Compared with traveling alone， traveling with a companion has also its advantages. 临摩：和城市相比，乡村的经济相对落后。 3_. 3.佳句：Both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions， and you can find the pleasure from either one. 临摩：网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点，因此，我们应该将二者相结合。 _. KEY： 1. When it comes to whether we should cancel the “golden week” holiday， different people will offer different opinions. 2. Compared with the cities， the countryside is relatively backward in economy. 3. Both network teachingand traditional school teaching have their advantages. Therefore， we should combine these two teaching ways.l Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags Disposable plastic bags were once widely used in China. When we went shopping at supermarkets and departments stores， shopping assistants often provided free plastic bags for our convenience. For a while， life without them seemed However， disposable plastic bags do bring severe damage to our environment. Costumers usually threw them away after use， and because they are thin and hard to decompose， these plastic products will exist for a long time. This is an immediate threat to our earth and water. Nowadays， the government has passed relevant regulations for limiting the use of disposable plastic bags： they are not free any more. In some shopping places， in order to invoke the public awareness of environmental protection， plastic bags are offered in a much higher price. As a result， people are changing their behavior： paper and clothing bags that vanished for a long time come back to our daily life. It is true that by limiting its usage， everyone in this society contributes some effort to the improvement of the environment.l预测话题：大学生就业难大学生就业难日益成为各级政府及社会各方面关注的焦点。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students Job Hunting. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1. 近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象。2. 产生这种现象的原因（如大学生追求的目标过高，专业不对口等）。3. 如何解决这一问题（改变就业观念，大学生再培训等）。 College Students Job Hunting In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon? There are several reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, and high social status among others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs. Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students. The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains. They should be down-toearth in building up their career. Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.l预测话题一：教育国际化 教育走向国际化成为关注的热点，本话题为热议校园生活话题，与2004年旅游景点介绍2006年考查的名校校园开放有一致性。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Brief Introduction to the University. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:假设你是一名学生志愿者，要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史、规模、教学现状以及未来目标等。A Brief Introduction to the UniversityDistinguished guests,Welcome to our university. Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account of the school. Founded in 1927, our university is one of this citys earliest universities of liberal arts. It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students. In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life. Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an overall healthy development. Not only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to expose them to the up-to-date knowledge. Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent.Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the direction of a first-rate university. Thank you.l011年6月四六级考试预测主题之六 蜗居、蚁族现象(2011-06-15 16:37:22)转载标签： 四六级考试蜗居预测现象杂谈 分类： 名师指导 College Students Living ConditionRecently, the living condition of some college students is frequently referred to as “dwelling-narrowness”. In fact, this embarrassing situation is very serious that few of us can fail to meditate on the causes of it.In the first place, its difficult for graduates to bear the high cost of life in big cities. Poor payment thus gives rise to bad living conditions. Next, college students are more ambitious. Many of them are eager to compete in big cities like Shanghai and Beijing, where talents are abundant and positions are limited. Refusing to go back hometown let them suffer in big cities, which indirectly make their situation worse.Generally speaking, college students should be more qualified to better themselves and adjust their goals according to the reality. l The popularity of Micro-blogging Micro-blogging is no longer a strange word. More precisely, it has become part of our life. As for me, many factors contribute to the widespread of Micro-blogging. First, it is very convenient for people to express their instant feelings at any time. Second, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By revealing their heartfelt emotions on the Micro-blogging, their friends may also know about their conditions and can offer in-time comfort.However, Micro-blogging can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away peoples privacy and other significant information. All in all, Micro-blogging provides us comfort and also inevitably some concerns. We should be careful while using it. 可风建议2：就算不会写，也不要空着，只要写了，就有可能得分。因为翻译的参考答案不是唯一的，只有你写的有点沾边，都有可能得分。各位童鞋们，千万别空着。举个例子，2009年6月考到82. With the oil prices ever rising, she tried to talk _ (说服他不买车)。阅卷评分时给出的满分答案有四种：1him out of buying cars2to him an persuade him not to buy the car3to him in order to persuade him not to buy a car4him into giving up buying a car所以各位童鞋们，千万别把翻译空着，只要写了，说不准就有可能得分。 可风建议3：对于考场上翻译的步骤，文都徐可风建议按照以下步骤来做第一步、理解句子考生应通读并透彻理解原文含义，包括理解出题人想考察的语法或搭配。语法如虚拟语气、倒装、不定式、分词、情态动词、各种从句等等；搭配如动宾搭配、介宾搭配等等。第二步、翻译成英文确定译文句子的时态、句型、结构和用词。第三步、检查，特别是动词形式方面的检查首先检查译文是否正确地转述了原文内容，是否有错译和漏译；其次，检查是否有语言上的明显错误，如时态、语态、单复数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等。发现错误，及时改正。l文都名师2011年6月四级考试考前3天作文预测（一）Shopping on the internet1. 现在流行网上购物2. 网上购物的利弊3. 我的看法 Nowadays with the ever rapid development and increasing popularity of the information technology , shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example , shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries .On the other hand , lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What s more the delivery will increase the risk of items damage. In my opinion, shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.lBig City or Small Town 1. 很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作;2. 也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯;3. 结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。范文：Want to be a small fish in a big pond or the other way round? Every graduate faces this question when he starts his career. A large number of college graduates prefer to stay in the big cities. To them, big cities mean more experiences, more opportunities to see the big world and more space for career development. At the same time, higher salary is another temptation.But some other graduates want to start in small towns. Even though there may not be many big companies, they can have a quieter and less competitive life. Another reason is that they can be a big fish in a small pond. They can easily get the managements attention and may win promotion earlier.As far as I am concerned, I prefer to start in a metropolis like Shanghai. A good begin is half the battle, and in Shanghai I can find a job in a big company where I can meet people from different places and cultures. I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks. lCraze for Civil Service Examinations 1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员2. 引起此现象的原因3. 你的看法范文：Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that cant be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as its also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors ambitions and comforts. On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a as well stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as other comforts of life, its quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.College Students Job Hunting lCollege Students Job-Hunting1. 近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象2. 产生这种现象的原因3. 如何解决这一问题 范文：In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?There are several reasons for this. To begin w