2010年12月英语网络统考复习资料2-作文范文汇总.doc

大学英语（B）机考作文题及范文【写作】 考生应能在30分钟内写出长度不少于80词的常见应用文及一般的叙述文、说明文和议论文。考生应能：1用较正确的语法、词汇、拼写、标点进行表达；2基本做到内容切题，结构严谨，条理清楚；3根据不同的写作目的进行有针对性的写作。作文评分标准大学英语B的作文考试评卷原则是在整体评阅的基础上给出印象分，此印象分以奖励给分，不是按错扣分。评分按档次进行，即1-3分，4-6分，7-9分，10-12分，13-15分五个档次。各个档次的具体描述如下：13-15分：扣题，语言流畅，用词丰富，篇章结构感强，语法正确，只有个别小错。10-12分：扣题，语言通顺，用词较丰富，段与段之间有较好的过渡，语法基本正确，有些语病；7-9分： 基本扣题，语言基本正确，用词有一定变化，文中错误较多，有个别为严重错误；4-6分： 语言基本功差，文章中中国式英语表达居多，用词贫乏，语法错误相当多，有多处严重错误。1-3分： 语言支离破碎，绝大部分句子无法理解，语言错误很多。 写作过渡妙词整理一、 过渡词或句： 递进：1. Furthermore 2. besides 3. moreover 4. whats more 5. in addition 转折：1. however 2. but 3. although 4. on the other hand 5. nonetheless 6. nevertheless 7. yet 8. by contrast 9. afterall 其他：no doubt, in fact, as a matter of fact, no wonder, to be true, as a result, frankly speaking, to tell the truth 二、举例说法： 1. for example, for instance, 2. can be given a concrete example that,3. history presented many examples of AAA., 4. perhaps the most important example of AAA. is that, 5. a good example of this is that, 6. in order to see this point clearly, let us see an example., 7. an example can give the details of this argument, 8. to illustrate this, there is an example that is very persuasive, 三、引出自己观点的说法： 1，In my point of view, 2，As far as I am concerned, 3，According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer A rather than B, 4，In my opinion, 5，On a personal level, 6，For me, 7，Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and educational background. 四、结尾句： 1，From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that -, 2，In a word, Generally speaking, In a short, As a result, 3，So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that -, 4，Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that-, 5，In conclusion ,everybody want to choose the one that fits hi, 6，So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to choose A, 7，Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that-, 8，Nevertheless I must admit that people can do well without A, but no one can ignore the additional convenience and satisfaction offered by A. Suchexperience will definitely be helpful in ones later life. 五、引出论据的过渡句： 1，My argument for this view goes as follows, 2，There are numerous reasons and I shall here explore a few primary ones, 3，Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons for choosing A, 4，My arguments for this point are listed as follows. 六、各论据段首句： 1、 第一个原因 Above all, First of all, In the first place, To begin with, The main reason for my propensity for AAA is that, the most obvious reason is that, 2、 第二个原因 Another reason is that, Another positive role of AAA lies in, The further reason why I advocate AAA is that, 3、 其他 Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments on both sides, All the above evidence supports the undeniable importance of AAA Maybe there are some other reasons to show that AAA, but it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly acceptable.作文题目及范文第一类：关于节日计划：1. The Chinese New Year 元旦计划“New Year” is a time for good cheer. In China men and women, boys and girls, all look forward to a happy year. It is time for rest and refreshment. Business is suspended for a time. Young fellows lay aside their school work and give themselves up to merriment and joy. Each family has its members together for reunion. Friends call on one another. Public places are filled with all kinds of cheerful people. Children with lucky money in their new clothes have a delightful time playing games. The Chinese New Year lasts about a fortnight. It gives sufficient recreation to people.2. My Plan for the Spring Festival 春节计划Spring festival is the most important festival for Chinese people. Many people will prepare many things for the spring festival. Now this is my plan for the spring festival. Firstly, I will visit my friends and my relatives. Secondly, I will make a big snow man with my daughter and my wife. Thirdly, I will stay with my parents, because I have no more time to stay with them at peacetime. This is my plan for the spring festival. I hope all of you have a good time in the spring festival.3. My Plan for the National Day Holiday 国庆节计划The National Day is coming and it is a very important holiday in China. There are all together seven days this year, therefore I need to make a better plan in advance. Firstly, I want to take a good rest during the holiday since I am always busy working. Secondly, I want to spend some time with my parents because I have little time together with them due to work. Thirdly, Id like to take a trip to Hainan, which is really beautiful. This is my plan for the approaching National Holiday.4. My Travel Plan 旅游计划There are many ways of traveling such as by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. And people can choose any of ways if they like. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot. My preference depends on the purpose of the travel. On a summer vacation I travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. When I use my feet and walk on a grass-covered path along a river or among the hills I feel detached from the noise of the city and closer to the nature. And when I travel on foot I get more freedom. I can plan my own schedule and choose my own route. When faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, I still favor using my own feet. I get much pleasure from it. 5. My Plan for Summer Vacation 暑假计划The longing summer vacation is approaching, which is the best part of the school year for me. I cannot let the holidays elapse meaninglessly, and my vacation should be a phase of harvest. The following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. In the first few days I want to climb Mount Hua with several friends to refresh ourselves. Then I tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates. Besides, in order to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, I will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.This above is my plan for the coming summer vocation.第二类：我的/ 我喜爱的 / 我最爱的：1. My Dream 我的梦想I have a dream from the first time when I sit in a carI want to drive. Firstly, driving is the most meaningful way to meet human beings desire of “faster”. Whats more, driving a car can take me to any place I want whether it rains, snows, blows or not. Lastly, a smooth ride in a good car is enjoyable. With rows of trees moving backward rapidly, music played, breeze blowing, my soul flies in the air. I love this feeling very much.I wish my dream will come true in the near future. 2. My Ideal job 我理想的工作My ideal job is to become a teacher after graduation. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, I love being with the children. To stay with them, I find myself more energetic and lively. Secondly, I want to contribute to the early education. Children education is the most important part because it can build up childrens personality and body. Lastly, teaching is a job which receives great respect from other people. In conclusion, Ill make great efforts to make my dream come true.3. The Job I Like 我喜爱的工作I like to be a teacher. Three reasons have led me to choose this occupation. First, teaching is learning. To make my lectures more constructive and stimulating, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world, which is the very thing I enjoy in my life. Second, teaching means freedom and independence. As a teacher, Im free to use my own ideas and make my own decisions. Finally, I like teaching because it offers certain peace of mind. All in all, the reasons above make me like teaching best.4. My Family 我的家庭There are seven people in my family. They are my grandfather, grandmother, father, mother, my two younger brothers and I. My father is a businessman. He is busy working everyday. My mother is a housewife. She cooks meals, washes clothes, and teaches us lessons everyday. One of my younger brothers is a junior high school student, and we go to the same school. My grandparents help my parents look after the youngest brother every day. We go to the movies every Sunday. I love my family very much.5. My Hometown 我的家乡My hometown is Haimen, which is not far from Shanghai. Haimen is a modern city. There are lots of high buildings in it. Most of us live in flats because we can be close to our friends. My hometown is a beautiful city. On either side of the roads, there are some big trees and nice flowers. The roads are also very clean, which makes people happy and comfortable. The weather here is very nice. I like autumn best, for its neither hot nor cold but very cool. I love Haimen. Welcome to my hometown.6. My Teacher 7. My Favorite Teacher 我的老师/我喜爱的老师I have many good teachers. Among them Miss Huang is my favorite teacher. She is a beautiful lady. There is always a smile on her face. Miss Huang likes singing. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is a good dancer, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favorite color is blue, because blue is the color of the sky and the sea. She is my favorite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.8. A Good Teacher to remember 难忘的老师A comment goes “Each teacher has his own attraction”. It is really true. I remember all my teachers for different reasons but there is one teacher that is always and will always be apart from the rest. She is Miss Wang my senior high school English teacher, who is truly a teacher among teachers. She came into my life at puberty and instilled in me the will to succeed and always do my best to learn all I possibly can about the world around me.Miss Wang was slim and beautiful, and always had a gracious smile on her face. So it was natural that the first impression she gave me was that she was kind and considerate. Ive learnt a lot from her and Ill always remember her. 9. My Classmates / 10. My Best Friend /11. My Close Friend 我的同学/我最好的朋友/我亲密的朋友Liu Kai is my classmate/ my best friend / my close friend. He is a good student and always ready to help others. One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road when a car nearly hit her. Just then Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When Liu Kai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done. 12. The one I love most 我最爱的人My father is the one I love most, which is a definite answer for me. I have thought he is the best man in the world. He loves me all the time whatever is happening. He is always telling me to be an honest person, which shapes my personality. Besides, he always encourages me to keep on trying instead of giving up when Im faced with difficulties and hardships. I am very grateful for what he has done for me. Ill always love my father and will do whatever I can to make a better life for him. 13. My Favorite Hobby 我喜爱的爱好I have many hobbies, such as singing, dancing, playing basketball. Among them, reading is my favorite. The reasons are as follows:Firstly, I can learn much knowledge and whats happening around the world through reading books, newspapers and magazines. Secondly, reading makes me wise. Through reading other peoples stories and past experience, I get to know how to get along with people. Lastly, I can also enjoy many places of interests and appreciate the beautiful sceneries of our motherland. In conclusion, reading is my favorite hobby.14. My Hobbies 我的爱好I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and keeping a diary. I like sports very much. I go running at five oclock in the morning. After classes in the afternoon, I play table-tennis with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy. At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I practice singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy. Of all my hobbies I like reading books best. In my bedroom there are nearly six hundred books. There are story books, textbooks, magazines, and others. All these books have enriched my knowledge.15. My Activities in Leisure Time / 16.My Leisure Activities / 17. How I Spend My Spare Time 我的业余生活The most important duties of college students are studying. But besides studying, we should also enjoy a good life in our leisure time. There are many ways of spending the spare time. My ways are as follows. First of all, I spend about half of my leisure time is listening to music. In this way, I can thoroughly relax myself both physically and mentally; thus, I am able to study well in the future. Secondly, I consume part of my spare time by doing some exercises. Basketball is my favorite sports game. Jogging will keep me fit. Finally, reading is necessary. A good book can take me to a mysterious place where I have never been to. These are the major ways I spend my spare time. Of course, I wont forget “Time is money”. I always start studying hard after a good relaxation. 18. The Sports Activities I Like Best / 19. My favorite Sport 我最爱的体育运动/我喜爱的运动Of all the sports, I like table-tennis best. I think it is not only a sport but also an art, because it is a game that needs strength and skill. Some people think that playing table-tennis needs little strength, but I dont think so. In playing table-tennis, we should judge the direction of the ball, and hit it back with great strength so that we can win the game. At the same time we need to pick up the ball which falls to the ground. So after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best. Though I cant play it very well, I still show great interest in it. I think playing table-tennis can build our bodies, keep us healthy and train our brains. Whats more, it can help us to learn to co-operate with each other. So I like it very much.20. My Favorite TV program 我喜爱的电视节目The News Report has always been my favorite TV program. The reasons are as follows.Firstly, the News Report contains a large amount of information ranging from the international political situation to the latest football game. Secondly, the most important character is its fast pace. Because of this fast pace, news programs can contain much information in a short time. Thirdly, the News Report is more than a TV program. It is a way of communication. From this program, people can know and understand world affairs. All in all, I especially appreciate this benefit of watching the news.21. My Favorite Food 我喜爱的食物I like many different kinds of foods. Among them, egg is my favorite. The reasons are as follows:Firstly, egg contains a lot of essential nutrients that are needed by the human body. Secondly, egg is the basic ingredient to many dishes, like tomato omelette, French toast and various kinds of soups. Thirdly, one can easily get eggs at any supermarket, and they are sold for a very cheap price too. In conclusion, egg is my favorite food.22. The Book I Like Best 我最爱的一本书My favorite book is Dream of the Red Chamber. The book tries to tell us that there are different kinds of love, only one kind which should be considered as True Love. In our life, we should marry the true love instead of wealth and good looks. From this book, we also get to know a part of the noble peoples life in Qing Dynasty and find some life philosophies from it. So this book is very instructive to people. We should learn more from this book as well as other books.23. My Favorite Means of Getting Information 我喜爱的获取信息方式1) 现代社会获取信息的方式很多. 2) 我最喜欢获取信息的方式.In modern society, there are many ways to get access to information. You can surf the internet, watching TV, listening to the radio, reading newspapers and so on to get information. But among these ways, my favorite means of getting information is surfing the internet. The reasons are as follows:For one thing, the internet is convenient, and I can search the information online just through a single line. For the other thing, the information online is very rich and I can get whatever kind of information you want.In conclusion, I like to get information by using the internet. 24. My Favorite Season 我喜爱的季节There are four seasons in a year: spring、summer、autumn and winter. I love them very much but the most favorite season is spring. People said, “The whole years work depends on a good start in spring.” Spring is a very wonderful season. Its warmer than winter, cooler than summer and more energetic than autumn. In spring, leaves turn green and flowers turn beautiful. They come out of the ground. In spring, we can play outside all day. The air is fresh and it makes us comfortable. I love spring because it gets warmer. Animals run out of their holes, it makes me pleasant. Spring is the time for planting. The ground becomes softer and warmer from the rain and the sun.25. My favorite subject我最喜欢的科目Of all the subjects I study I like math best. I think it is reasonable. You know math helps you to exercise your brains, and make you smarter and more intelligent. Math can be applied in all fields of science, and naturally it is .said that math is the mother of all subjects. However, math is not easy to master. It requires a high degree of intelligence. You can see some children who often fail to pass their math examination, but others deal with it very easily. This difference obviously comes from their levels of intelligence. But what is the m