九年级英语全册 Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark同步作文指导课件 新人教版.ppt

写作题目：HowIhavechanged!,Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.,Learningaim,Writeaboutchangesofyourself.,Watchandtelldifference.,SheisSunYanzi.Sheusedtowearglasses.,Watchandtelldifference.,Heisaboy.,HeisHanGeng.,Heusedtohaveshorthair.Heusedtobelikeagirl.,appearance（外貌）,personality(性格),hobby,habit,learning,lifestyle,shorthairlonghair,strongslim/thin,Thinkaboutyourchanges!,.usedto,now,.usedto,now,Thinkaboutyourchanges!,Discussingroupsandwritedownasmanyphrases/wordsaspossibleaboutthefollowingaspects:,changes,appearance,personality,hobbies,habit,learning,lifestyle,letsPK!,HowIhavechanged!,Ihavechangedalotinthelastfewyears.Mylifeisdifferent!WhenIwasyoung,Iusedtobeshy,butnowImoutgoingandIenjoytalkingwithothers.Inthepast,IusedtobeinterestedinChinese,however,nowIlikeEnglish.IthinkEnglishisusefulandimportant.AndIamanEnglishteachernow.Ioftenwentfishingwithmyfriends,nowImusedtogoingshoppinginfreetime.Whatsmore,Iusedtoridethebiketoschool,nowIwalkthereinstead.WhatgreatchangesIhave.,beginning,ending,Howmanychanges?,HowIhavechanged!,Ihavechangedalotinthelastfewyears.Mylifeisdifferent!WhenIwasyoung,Iusedtobeshy,butnowImoutgoingandIenjoytalkingwithothers.Inthepast,IusedtobeinterestedinChinese,however,nowIlikeEnglish.IthinkEnglishisusefulandimportant.AndIamanEnglishteachernow.Ioftenwentfishingwithmyfriends,nowImusedtogoingshoppinginfreetime.Whatsmore,Iusedtoridethebiketoschool,nowIwalkthereinstead.WhatgreatchangesIhave.,Somanychanges,youcandoitthisway:,HowIveChanged!Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Iusedto_.NowIm_.Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas_.Thisisthemostimportchangebecause_.,过去与现在的生活情况,Iusedto.,butnow.Inthepast,Ioften.Now.Inthepast,Iusedtobe.butnowIam.,总结观点,Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.,自我感受,Itseemsthat.Ireallymisstheolddays.,outline,Writing,现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了，你感觉自己和以前有变化吗？请根据自己的体会，多角度，多方面谈谈自己的变化。请以“HowIhavechanged!”为题写一篇文章。要求：1.至少谈3个方面的变化;2.语句通顺、连贯;3.词数约80左右。,自评标准：大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。,Task1,自我欣赏与修正,我欣赏，我快乐,欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求:人称,时态,2.要点齐全,3.结构:开头，正文，结尾,4.好词好句。,注意：（作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处：；去掉，语法错误G,人称错误P，时态错误T）,Task2,集体赏析，共同进步,Task3,Summary,Howt