江苏专用2020版高考英语新增分大一轮复习渐进写作全辑StepThree第12讲读写类作文课件牛津译林版.ppt

Reading,StepThree分类训练，赢得高分,第12讲读写类作文,解题指导1.审题，明确题目要求。通过审题明确文章主题、写作内容、主要时态和主体人称等问题。其中主体人称，就是要确定以第几人称进行写作。2.阅读，抓住内容要点。阅读短文，找出文章的内容要点。(1)议论文：找出论点、论据和结论。其关键是找出主题句或结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点，两种观点都要概括，不要漏掉其中一方的观点。(2)记叙文：找出时间(when)，地点(where)，什么人(who)，做了什么事(what)，结果怎么样(how)等五要素。其中，最重要的要点是某人(who)做了何事(what)。若是夹叙夹议类的文章，还要加上作者的看法、观点、经验或感悟。,(3)说明文和新闻报道：通常会有中心句(多在首段)，写作时要注意要找出中心句，抓住关键词。对现象分析型说明文，要找出“现象”“造成这种现象的原因”“解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议”。(4)发言稿：通常会很明确地表明观点或态度，写概要时要从发言者的言语中明确作者的态度，把握作者的写作目的。或先概括每段大意，进而归纳全文主旨。3.概括，转述作者的观点。在找出文章的内容要点后，就要用自己的话转述原文内容要点。要注意在用词或句式上做到同义替换，避免抄袭之嫌。4.过渡，引出自己的观点。写了摘要后，用句过渡的话，再引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的故事。,5.例证，论证自己的观点。议论文在提出自己的观点后，就用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。记叙文编写与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事(亲身经历或虚构)。6.结论，注意前后呼应。7.润色，使其锦上添花。一查人称是否符合要求；二查语法方面的问题，包括用词、时态等方面的错误等，确保“语言规范”；三查逻辑关系，看前后观点是否一致；四查是否使用一些较为高级的句型，如非谓语动词结构、with复合结构、定语从句、倒装句型等。,实战演练(一)(2018江苏)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。,写作内容1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,参考范文,参考范文1Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation，theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly，thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly，thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct，orbetterservice.Basedontheratings，Iboughtmybelovedbackpack，sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly，ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample，therearehugenumbersofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase，itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.,Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependpletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.,参考范文2Nowadays，mostmoditiesorservicesareratedthroughcertainchannels.Theseratings，easytoaccess，areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleincustomerspurchasedecision.However，resultsaresometimesunsatisfactory.Thereisnodenyingthatsuchratingsmightbringconveniencetoconsumers，buttheyareoftenmisleadingandunreliable.Asweallknow，mostoftheratingsarebasedonothersjudgmentontheproductorserviceconcerned.Everyjudgmentesfromaspecificneedorauniquepsychologicalstate.Apparently，blindlyfollowingothersadvicewillaffectourownjudgment.,Anotherfactshouldnotbeneglectedthatsomeoftheratingsaretheouteofacarefulmanipulationofpaniesorsellers.Ithasbeeamonpracticeforsometopayforgoodratingsontheirproductsorservicessoastoincreasetheirsales.Therefore，weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.,(二)请阅读下面短文，并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Anationalvisionreportsaidaround500millionChinesenearlyhalfthepopulationabovefiveyearsoldsufferedvisualimpairment(损伤)，450millionwerenearsighted，andrateswererising.Anothersurveyshowedthatabout45percentofthestudentsfreetimewasoccupiedwithhomeworkandvideogames.Readingforlongperiodsandstaringatputerscreenswithoutrestaregenerallythoughttoharmtheeyes.,“IbegantowearglasseswhenIwas11yearsold.Ispendalmostallmytimetakinglessons，doinghomeworkandplayingonlinegames.AndlastFridaymyparentswenttovisitmygrandmotheranddidntebackhomethatnight，soIplayedgamesuntildawn，”saidChengQi，ajuniorschoolstudent.Asaresponsetorisinglevelsofnearsightednessamongchildren，theChinesegovernmentrecentlyhasannouncedplanstocontrolvideogaming.Regulatorsaredirectedtolimitthenumberofnewonlinegames，restrictplayingtimeanddevelopanage-restrictionsystemintheindustry，accordingtoastatementpostedontheMinistryofEducationwebsitelateonThursday.,写作内容1.用约30个单词概括上述材料的主要内容；2.用约120个单词谈谈你对“青少年近视”的看法，内容包括：(1)造成青少年近视的原因(至少两条)；(2)简要说明青少年应该如何保护眼睛。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,参考范文,参考范文Theincreasinglyseriousproblemthatmoreandmoreteenagersarebeingnearsightedhasarousedtheauthoritiesattentionandmadethemadopteffectivemeasurestoprotectthemagainstbeingvisuallyimpaired.Ithinkthereasonsbehindteenagersnearsightednessarevarious.Teenagersareunderaheavystudyload，whichforcesthemtooverusetheireyesandhavelittletimetotakeoutdooractivitiesandexercise.Besides，thespreadofmobilephonesandotherelectronicdevicesplaysanimportantrole.Mostteenagersspendtoomuchtimeplayingvideogames，andtheirstaringatthescreenforhoursposesagreatthreattotheirvision.,Therefore，itsurgentforusteenagerstoprotectoureyes.Firstofall，weshouldkeepoureyesrelaxedduringorafterthestudyactivitieslikefinishingourhomeworkorreadingbooksforsometime.Besides，weshouldinsistondoingeyeexerciseseveryday.Furthermore，weshouldspendlessandlesstimeonvideogames.Onlybydoingsocanwehavegoodvision.,(三)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。HeReallyLovedHisJobZhangChaojoinedthePLANavyin2004aftergraduatingfromamiddleschoolinYueyang，HunanProvince.Hetrainedasafighterjetpilotforfiveyearsandin2009hejoinedanavalaviationsquadron(海军航空兵)，becauseflyingaJ-15abovethecarrierwasZhangChaosbiggestwish.InMarchlastyear，Zhangpassedthestrictselectionproceduresandbecameapilotinthecarrier-based(舰载的)aviationforce.Unfortunately，however，whenlandingafteraroutinetrainingonhisJ-15ontheafternoonofApril27，hegavehislifebecauseofasuddenmalfunction(故障)intheflight-controlsystem.,Asisknowntoall，itisfullofriskstobeafighterjetpilot，especiallytobeapilotinthecarrier-basedaviationforce.ButZhangChaowasbraveenoughtofacethechallenge.HeoncesaidChinamustdevelopanaircraftcarrierforcetosafeguardthenationandourinterestsoverseas，andthathelongedtoserveonacarrier，nomatterhowriskythatwouldbe.Ashiswifeputit，hereallylovedhisjob.,写作内容1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述：(1)你对张超的英勇事迹的认识；(2)张超的英勇事迹对你的影响。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,参考范文,参考范文ZhangChao，anexcellentJ-15fighterpilot，diedfromasuddenmalfunctionwhenhewaslanding.Hisloveofhisworkinspiteofitsriskswillinspireusforever.ZhangChaohassetusagoodexample.Thegreatdangerandalotofrisksofflyingajetdidnotpreventhimfromperforminghisduties.So，thereisnoreasonforusnottoworkhard.“Hereallylovedhisjob”demonstratesnotonlyhisdevotiontohisdutiesandhiscouragetoovereallkindsofdifficulties，buthisloyaltytoourcountryaswell.ZhangChaosheroicdeedsimpressusdeeply.Asastudent，weshoulddoashedid.Thatistosay，wemustdedicateourselvestoourstudies，anddoourbesttoacquirenecessaryknowledgeandskills.Onlybydoingso，willwebeabletoserveourcountrywellinthefuture.,(四)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Towinanationalawardforhandwriting，especiallyinthisdigitalage，isanachievementinitself.ButwhatmakesAnayaEllickextraspecialisthattheseven-year-oldmadetheachievementdespitehavingnohands.Evenmoreamazing？Thefirst-graderfromChesapeake，Virginia，doesnotuseprosthetics(假肢).Theyounggirlwhopetedinthecategoryforstudentswithspecialneedshadtobeat50petitorstowintheaward.ContestdirectorKathleenWrightsaidthejudges，manyofwhomareoccupationaldoctors，were“justamazed”bythequalityofAnayasprinting.Wrightsays，“Herwritingsamplewasparabletosomeonewhohadhands.”,Anayasproudparents，BiancaMiddletonandGaryEllicksaytheyounggirlsdeterminationanddesiretobeindependentbecameobviouswhenshewasjustababy.Unabletoholdontoherpacifier(安抚奶嘴)withherhands，shefiguredouthowtodoitbycuppingherarms.Asayoungchild，shelearnedtoeatwithaforkandbuildwithblocks.At5，shemanagedtoholdacrayonormarkerbetweenherhandsanddraw.ThoughAnayawasfittedwithprostheticarmsforashorttime，theyounggirldecidedshewasbetteroffwithhernaturalonesandthrewthemaway.,写作内容1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.用约120个单词发