高三英语二轮写作专项.ppt

Welcome,Writing,大纲要求,考生根据提示进行书面表达 （1）准确使用语法和词汇（准确程度是评分标准中的一项重要内容）。 （2）围绕一主题，使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。,考试形式,要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇短文。情景包括：目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有：图画、图表、提纲等。 满分：30分 词数：120-150 参考时间：25分钟,命题趋势,开放性加强 （07年书面表达要求考生对是否愿意成为一名免费师范生表明观点并陈述理由。题目并没有提示什么理由，学生可以自由发挥，因此开放性加大。） 贴近学生生活 （08年的写作题形式比较老套，是写信，但内容贴近考生，使每个考生均有内容可写，充分发挥自己的水平。） 09年写作 ：要求写一封书信，命题具有真实性和交际性；题目既有明确的写作内容上的限制，又具有一定的开放性，给优秀考生提供了更多的写作空间，便于发挥。 10年写作：,书面表达不同题材分类：,支持与反对观点陈述类 B. 数据式图表类 C. 看图说话类 D. 应聘类 E. 提示议论文类 F应用文类 G表示今昔对比类写作套语类 H 地图/路线图 类 I. 介绍某人，某物，某地，某计划，某项目类,Six steps of writing (书面表达的六个步骤),Read the directions carefully, look through all the words or pictures given to you and find the main subject(仔细审题，找出主题).,2. List the key points and find out the key words for each point (列出要点，找出 中心词)。,3. Arrange paragraphs (分段）。,4. Extend each key point to sentences (把要点扩展成句子) .,5. Arrange these sentences into a passage, using some linking words or sentences where necessary (把以上句子编排成段落， 在必要的地方加入一些连接词或句子).,6. Read through the whole passage to make sure that no mistakes are made (通读全文， 仔细检查).,Lets Practice! 现在越来越多的中学生在使用网络，不同的人对此有不同的看法，请谈谈你的观点。,Step 1: Find the main subject.,Step 2: List the key points.,Your own opinion about students using the Internet.,1.entertain ourselves 2. gain knowledge 3. do shopping,be addicted to 2. visit unhealthy website,Step 3 Arrange paragraphs.,Fact,Advantages,Disadvantages,Ending,Step 4 Extend each key point to sentences.,enjoy music / see movies / play computer games / send emails,1.By using the Internet, we can enjoy music, watch movies, send emails and play computer games.,1) entertain ourselves,2. By using the Internet, we can send emails to our families, relatives and friends, enjoy all kinds of music, see movies and play computer games.,3. Using the Internet, we can keep in touch with others by sending emails and relax ourselves by appreciating music, seeing movies, playing computer games and so on.,2) gain knowledge,learn English / read news / gain other knowledge,1.We can not only read news at home and abroad but also learn English through the Internet.,2. With the help of the Internet, we can not only learn the latest news at home and abroad but also have access to learning English by ourselves.,3. The Internet not only keeps us students well informed of whats going on at home and abroad but also provides us a channel to learn English by ourselves.,3) do shopping convenient / without leaving homes,Disadvantages:,1) be addicted to / be hooked on be glued to / be lost in ,2) affect / have a negative influence on / do harm to / be harmful to / be bad for; physically and mentally,Para.1 Fact Para.2 Advantages Para.3 Disadvantages Para.4 Closing Advantages 1) entertain ourselves enjoy music / see movies / play computer games / send emails 2) gain knowledge learn English / read news 3) do shopping convenient / without leaving homes Disadvantages: 1) be addicted to / be hooked on be glued to / be lost in 2) affect / have a negative influence on / do harm to / be harmful to / be bad for physically and mentally,Step 5 Arrange your sentences into a passage.,Step 6 Read through the whole passage to make sure that no mistakes are made . 1）要点是否齐全； 2）是否有语法错误，如句子结构错误、动词形式错误等； 3）格式、人称是否正确； 4）字数是否符合要求； 5）大小写、标点是否正确。,Possible version Nowadays, with the popularity of computers, more and more middle school students are using the Internet. Different people have different opinions about this. As far as Im concerned, Im not opposed to it. As we all know, the Internet is playing an increasingly important part in our daily life. There is no doubt that it brings us a lot of benefits. To begin with, with the help of the Internet we can not only learn the latest news at home and abroad but also have access to learning English by ourselves. Besides, by using the Internet, we can keep in touch with others by sending emails and relax ourselves by enjoying music, seeing movies, playing computer games and so on. Whats more, we can do online shopping without leaving homes, which is very convenient. However, the disadvantages of the Internet can not be neglected. Some students spend too much time playing computer games on line; some even are addicted to it, which wastes a lot of valuable time and seriously affects their studies. To make things worse, some even visit unhealthy websites, which has very bad effect on them. All these, undoubtedly, are harmful to their health physically and mentally. In conclusion, I think, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its advantages and disadvantages. But if we use it properly, it will surely benefit us a lot! Only in this way can we make full use of the Internet.,书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档（25-30分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致；具备较强的语言应用能力 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档（19-24分） 完成了试题规定的任务。 比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容 应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的。,How to polish your passage?,Tip One,Use more advanced words or sentences (多使用高级词句）.,1.We all think he is a very good man. 2. As a result the plan was a failure. 3.He finally went back home, very tired. .,We all of him .,The plan to be a failure.,think highly,turned out,He finally struggled home, exhausted.,1. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 2. This village is a small one. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.（使用定语从句),by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Followed,This village is a small one which has nearly100 families and about 500 people.,Possible version Nowadays, more and more middle school students are using the Internet. Different people have different opinions about this. As far as Im concerned, Im not opposed to it. As we all know, the Internet is playing an increasingly important part in our daily life. There is no doubt that it brings us a lot of benefits. To begin with, with the help of the Internet we can not only learn the latest news at home and abroad but also have access to learning English by ourselves. Besides, by using the Internet, we can keep in touch with others by sending emails and relax ourselves by enjoying music, seeing movies, playing computer games and so on. Whats more, we can do online shopping without leaving homes, which is very convenient. However, the disadvantages of the Internet can not be neglected. Some students spend too much time playing computer games on line; some even are addicted to it, which wastes a lot of valuable time and seriously affects their studies. To make things worse, some even visit unhealthy websites, which has very bad effect on them. All these, undoubtedly, are harmful to their health physically and mentally. In conclusion, I think, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its advantages and disadvantages. But if we use it properly, it will surely benefit us a lot! Only in this way can we make full use of the Internet.,Tip Two,Use linking words to make your passage more fluent(运用关联词使文章更为流畅）。,Possible version Nowadays, more and more middle school students are using the Internet. Different people have different opinions about this. As far as Im concerned, Im not opposed to it. As we all know, the Internet is playing an increasingly important part in our daily life. There is no doubt that it brings us a lot of benefits. To begin with, with the help of the Internet we can not only learn the latest news at home and abroad but also have access to learning English by ourselves. Besides, by using the Internet, we can keep in touch with others by sending emails and relax ourselves by enjoying music, seeing movies, playing computer games and so on. Whats more, we can do online shopping without leaving homes, which is very convenient. However, the disadvantages of the Internet can not be neglected. Some students spend too much time playing computer games on line; some even are addicted to it, which wastes a lot of valuable time and seriously affects their studies. To make things worse, some even visit unhealthy websites, which has very bad effect on them. All these, undoubtedly, are harmful to their health physically and mentally. In conclusion, I think, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its advantages and disadvantages. But if we use it properly, it will surely benefit us a lot! Only in this way can we make full use of the Internet.,Tip Three,Do write neatly and clearly! (一定要书写工整，卷面整洁),山东省教育厅在全省中小学中推行素质教育，对此不同的人有不同的看法，请谈谈你自己的观点。,More practice:,Assignment,Please finish the composition after class.,Thank You,日前，针对学生的零用钱（pocket money）的消费方向，你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查得出数据如下表。现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，反映这一情况，并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。 注意： 1书信中不必一一列举具体数 字，只要抓住主要问 题和数据说明问题即可。 2字数：120-150。,More practice:,Dear editor, Recent