英语写作专题--使用复杂句式.ppt

How to write a good composition (III) -Using complex sentences,书面表达高分卷特点,外在美 结构美 词汇美 句式美 衔接美,巧用复杂句式，提高文章品味,火眼金睛,Which one is better? Why?,She always sings while doing her work. She always sings when she does her work.,After everything was finished, they began to chat with the elderly people. With everything finished, they began to chat with the elderly people.,If you study hard, you will make remarkable progress. Study hard, and you will make remarkable progress.,（状从省略）,(with复合结构),(祈使句+ and),1.,2.,3.,(A),(B),(A),(A),(B),(B),To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things. What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things.,I passed the English exam because of your help. I would not have passed the English exam but for your help.,(名词性从句）,（虚拟语气）,4.,5.,(A),(A),(B),(B),Brain Storm,What advanced structures can we use when writing compositions?,非谓语动词 ：-ing, -ed, -to do 三种从句 ：名词性从句， 定语从句， 状语从句 各种句式：倒装句， 强调句，祈使句，感叹句， 省略句，虚拟语气， 被动语态等,Practice makes perfect,通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的. 2.我们需要冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。 3.他很聪明，但他从不努力。 4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。 5.坐在一盘子粽子前，这个男孩不知道如何打开 （unwrap) 它们。 6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中(in the dark)的一盏灯。 7. 他建议孩子们要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。 8.当他爬到更高的地方时，他感到呼吸更困难了.,Translate the sentences,1. 通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的。,It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using the Internet.,2.我们需要冷静下来,反思(reflect)我们的学习方法。,What we need to do is calm down and reflect our learning method.,3. 他很聪明，但他从来不努力。,Clever as he is, he never works hard.,Practice makes perfect,4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。,It is our attitude to ourselves that matters/ counts.,5.坐在一盘(plate)粽子(zongzi)前，这个男孩不 知道如何打开（unwrap)它们。,Sitting before a plate of zongzi, the boy didnt know how to unwrap them.,6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中的一盏灯。,As is shown in the picture, love is like a lamp in the dark.,7. 他建议学校里的孩子要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。,He suggests that school children avoid overusing their eyes and do more outdoor activities.,8.当他爬到更高的地方时，他感到呼吸更困难了.,The higher he climbed, the more breathless he felt.,点石成金,目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟 对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”. 请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。 内容要点如下： 主要原因 考试偏多、偏难 不用功、懒惰 取悦父母、老师 个人看法 作弊不对，违反校规 要诚实，努力学习 (其他看法） 注意：1短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥； 2短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 3词数：100左右。 4参考词汇：作弊 cheat（v.）,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations,At present, there are a lot of students cheating in the examinations. The reasons can be listed as followed. First, there are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us. Second, some students pay little attention to their study. They are lazy and dont work hard. Besides, they do it because they want to make their parents and teachers happy. As far as Im concerned, its wrong to cheat in the exams. It breaks the schools rules. We should treat the exams in a right way. We should be honest and work hard. Only in this way can we get good marks.,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations,At present, there are a lot of students cheating in the examinations. The reasons can be listed as follows. First, there are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us. Second, some students pay little attention to their study. They are lazy and dont work hard. Besides, they do it because they want to make their parents and teachers happy. As far as Im concerned, its wrong to cheat in the exams. It breaks the schools rules. We should treat the exams in a right way. We should be honest and work hard. Only in this way can we get good marks.,the Important Points,考试偏多、偏难 There are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us. 不用功、懒惰 Some students are lazy and dont work hard .,better: Sometimes we have too many examinations, which are too difficult for us.,better: Not only are some students lazy but they also dont work hard at their lessons.,取悦父母、老师 They do it because they want to make their parents and teachers happy. 作弊不对、违反校规 要诚实，努力学习,Better: In order to please their parents and teachers, they sometimes cheat when taking examinations.,Cheating in examinations is wrong. It breaks the rules of schools.,Better : It is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.,We students should be honest and study hard.,Better: What we students should do is to be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations.,我们要改进学习方法 We should improve our study methods. 我们要为考试作好充分准备，取得好的成绩. We should get well prepared for examinations to get better results.,Better: Our study methods should be improved.,Better: Only when we get well prepared for examinations can we get better results.,My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, not only are some students lazy but they also dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.,In my opinion, its wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. What we students should do is be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. Whats more, our study methods should be improved and only when we get well prepared for examinations can we get better results.,佳句共赏,Nowadays there is a phenomenon that some students often cheat in their examinations. 2. There are many factors contributing to / accounting for the phenomenon. 3. These reasons give a ris