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短文改错专题突破练171Last month,I visited the Great Wall of China.It was packing with many tourists.As a girl from small village,I found it was difficulty for me to get a scenic photo opportunity.However,the setting was really attractive.Visiting this wonder was a tiring and absolutely unbelievable experience,easy proven by those large crowds around me.They made me realized just how lucky I was to be there.How long have they all been waiting for to visit this wonder?Saw a friend of mine in Beijing gave us an opportunity that others wish to have in their entire lives.For that,I am forever grateful.答案Last month,I visited the Great Wall of China.It was with many tourists.As a girl from small village,I found it was for me to get a scenic photo opportunity.However,the setting was really attractive.Visiting this wonder was a tiring absolutely unbelievable experience,proven by those large crowds around me.They made me just how lucky I was to be there.How long they all been waiting to visit this wonder?a friend of mine in Beijing gave an opportunity that others wish to have in their entire lives.For that,I am forever grateful.2Most people directly link senior high school life with plenty of stress and endless homeworks.However,some interested activities indeed contribute to reduce the pressure.Last week the entertainment department of our Student Union organized the activity in which each class shoot a short movie.Our class chose a story setting in World War ,that showed the preciousness of peace. I think this process was a good lesson that taught to me how to strike a balance between studying or relaxation. Now I am determined than ever to treasure everything I have and fight for my future.答案Most people directly link senior high school life with plenty of stress and endless .However,some activities indeed contribute to the pressure.Last week the entertainment department of our Student Union organized activity in which each class a short movie.Our class chose a story in World War , showed the preciousness of peace. I think this process was a good lesson that taught me how to strike a balance between studying relaxation. Now I am determined than ever to treasure everything I have and fight for my future.3With the development of science and technology,intelligent robots will be wide used in the future. At home,robots will help people do some housework and taking care of the elderly,babies and patients. In addition to these task,robots will even be able to play the chess and do exercise with people. In factories,robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs avoid accidents.Robots will change our future life by many ways,what will make it more colorful and comfortable. Therefore,we shouldnt depend on intelligent robots too much,for they were made to help humans rather than replace us.As helpers of we humans,robots should be used properly.答案With the development of science and technology,intelligent robots will be used in the future. At home,robots will help people do some housework and care of the elderly,babies and patients. In addition to these ,robots will even be able to play chess and do exercise with people. In factories,robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs avoid accidents.Robots will change our future life many ways, will make it more colorful and comfortable. ,we shouldnt depend on intelligent robots too much,for they made to help humans rather than replace us.As helpers of humans,robots should be used properly.4Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all,the traffic rules must be strict obeyed.When we cross streets,wait until the traffic light turn green.Next,dont forget walk on the pavement.Finally,I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling.Since we cant pay enough attention on the traffic around us,so accidents may happen.Taking good care of ourselves and dont let our parents worry about us.答案Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic and accidents. As student,what can we do to guarantee our ? First of all,the traffic rules must be obeyed.When we cross streets,wait until the traffic light green.Next,dont forget walk on the pavement.Finally,I think it very to wear headphones while walking or cycling.Since we cant pay enough attention the traffic around us, accidents may happen. good care of ourselves and dont let our parents worry about us.5Living without an aim is like sailing without compass.If there is no aim in our lives,we will get lose. Last term,I couldnt accept the truth which I failed in my math examination.I decided to give it up,so I skipped from classes frequently.Considered my case,my teacher offered me several detailed approach and advised me to set a short-term goal to improve my math.Finally,I work harder than ever and made great progress in her math. In my opinion,success lies in a series of goals.However,we should remember to make our targets clearly and spare no effort to realize our dreams.答案Living without an aim is like sailing without compass.If there is no aim in our lives,we will get . Last term,I couldnt accept the truth I failed in my math examination.I decided to give it up,so I skipped classes frequently. my case,my teacher offered me several detailed and advised me to set a short-term goal to improve my math.Finally,I harder than ever and made great progress in math. In my opinion,success lies in a series of goals.,we should remember to make our targets and spare no effort to realize our dreams.6Last weekend I went on a eco-travel with a travel agency.All the way we appreciate the beautiful scenery and fresh air,so a few of us picked flowers while going sightseeing.What was worse,many tourists threw rubbishes here and there.I dont think that it is a truly eco-travel.An eco-travel not only allows us to express our love for nature,but needs our responsibility as well as. A real eco-travel should like this:take nothing away but your good memory;leave nothing behind but all cleaner water and green trees.Enjoyed the beauty of nature,we should try their best to protect it.答案Last weekend I went on eco-travel with a travel agency.All the way we the beautiful scenery and fresh air, a few of us picked flowers while going sightseeing.What was worse,many tourists threw here and there.I dont think that it is a eco-travel.An eco-travel not only allows us to express our love for nature,but needs our responsibility as well . A real eco-travel should like this:take nothing away but your good memory;leave nothing behind but all water and green trees. the beauty of nature,we should try best to protect it.7I like travelling and my dream of visit Beijing,the capital city of our country,come true during the National Day holidays this year.In October 1st,I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents,there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem,feeling extremely exciting.Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction,like the Great Wall.Standing on the Great Wall,I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”Although I was tired,but I really had a good time.答案I like travelling and my dream of Beijing,the capital city of our country, true during the National Day holidays this year. October 1st,I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents, we watched the flag-raising ceremony.As I watched flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem,feeling extremely .Then we went to some other famous tourist ,like the Great Wall.Standing on the Great Wall,I felt very .I thought of the old saying that“One who to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”Although I was tired, I really had a good time.8When asked about honesty,many people will surely say that honesty is very importance or its basic to a person.I think its great that every one of us has realized its importance.However,it seemed that there are still some people not full aware of it.Once I went to the market with my mum for a big dinner in Saturday. When we were walking past the stalls,a loud noise was caught my attention. It came from a butchers stand,which a lady accused him of inject water into the pork and asked for the money back.But the butcher refused and even argued that it wouldnt do harm her health.We can also see being honest are easier said than done.I think we should plant honesty like a tree in our heart so that we wont hesitate to be honest when they are in society.With it,we will be fully trusted and popular with others.答案When asked about honesty,many people will surely say that honesty is very or its basic to a person.I think its great that every one of us has realized its importance.However,it that there are still some people not aware of it.Once I went to the market with my mum for a big dinner Saturday. When we were walking past the stalls,a loud noise caught my attention. It came from a butchers stand, a lady accused him of water into the pork and asked for the money back.But the butcher refused and even argued that it wouldnt do harm her health.We can also see being honest easier said than done.I think we should plant honesty like a tree in our heart so that we wont hesitate to be honest when are in society.With it,we will be fully trusted and popular with others.9It is known that some students cheat in exams. It has three reason.First of all,there are so many exams.Beside,the exams given are difficulty in some way. Secondly,some students have to cheat in exams because of they are too lazy.The last reason is to please our parents and teachers.For some students,low marks brought them great pressure and make them depressing.In my opinion,cheating in exams are wrong.We should take active attitude to our studies,and try to get a mark what is true as well as good.答案It is known that some students cheat in exams. It has three .First of all,there are so many exams., the exams given are in some way. Secondly,some students have to cheat in exams because they are too lazy.The last reason is to please parents and teachers.For some students,low marks them great pressure and make them .In my opinion,cheating in exams wrong.We should take active attitu
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