2015年中考英语（四川人教版）七年级（上）高频话题写作指导units_59与朋友共度时光_课件

七年级（上）Units 5-9 与朋友共度时光,第二部分 高频话题写作指导,从全国近5年“与朋友共度时光”相关话题书面表达的命题来看，通常会从以下两方面的角度命题： 1. 结合初中学习生活，从班级活动、与同学感动瞬间、与同学度过的美好时光、初中毕业留言等角度进行考查。,写作导图,2. 结合作者亲身经历，从生日聚会、自己一天的生活、参加某种活动等角度进行考查。 分析近3年60套四川真题可知，四川对此话题的书面表达是以介绍我的初中好友，与朋友共度的美好时光为主，下面以（2014资阳）为例：,Spending time with friends,Basic information,Reasons,Feeling,Name: Li Ping,Look: long hair; white skin,Personality: quiet,smile to us; encourage me; worked hard,Hobby: reading,We can be good friends forever,亮点句型速成,常用句型：,Thanks for telling me about your best friend.,推荐句型：,Thanks for staying with me very much.,Thanks for staying with me very much during these days. Thank you very much for staying with me during these days and I do feel happy.,开头句：,1. My best friend in junior middle school is Li Ping. 2. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friendLi Ming.,正文句：,1. She is a beautiful girl with long hair and white skin.,2. Playing with her is an important part in my spare time. 3. I can get/receive many/lots of presents/ gifts. 4. I still remember that we went to the movies together on Sunday. 5. Im very happy to go to the cinema with Mike last weekend. 6. I love it because its very useful for me.,7. I really enjoy that we got together during these days.,结尾句： 1. I hope we can be good friends forever. 2. I hope she will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.,典例剖析,假如你叫李华。你的美国笔友Nick在来信中谈到他中学时的好朋友。请你根据以下提示用英语给他回信，介绍你初中时的一位好朋友。 1. 外貌、性格、爱好； 2. 喜欢他（她）的理由； 3. 和他（她）一起做过的一件难忘的事； 4. 希望永远和他（她）做好朋友。,注意：1. 词数60左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名及学校名，好朋友 的姓名一律用Li Ping指代; 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Nick, Thanks for telling me about your best friend. My best friend in junior middle school is Li Ping. _ Best wishes. Li Hua,细读所给文字提示，提取信息： 1.本文要求写一封书信，介绍你的初中好友。 叙述过去的事用一般过去时，其它部分用 一般现在时；人称为第一人称。 2. 根据内容提示，开头写出我初中好友是李 萍；然后正文介绍她的外貌、性格、爱好， 喜欢她的理由，和她一起做过的一件难忘的 事；最后表明自己希望和她永远做好朋友。,【审题指导】,【高分范文】,Dear Nick, Thanks for telling me about your best friend. My best friend in junior middle school is Li Ping. She is a beautiful girl with long hair and white skin. She is thin, so she can wear many colorful dresses. She is very quiet. She loves reading, too. She always reads books in the library. She is very,Friendly. When we meet her, she often smiles to us. So we all love her. Playing with her is an important part in my spare time. She is a kind and nice girl. Once I failed in my English test. She encouraged me to be happy and we worked hard together. We stayed up learning English,together, did English exercises together, asked our teacher for help together, and she often encouraged me to study hard, so we would get good grades. With her help, I passed my next test. I was thankful for her. Li Ping is important in my life. I hope we can be good friends forever. Best wishes. Li Hua,1. 一起努力_ 2. 向老师寻求帮助 _ 3. 她是一个漂亮的女孩，有长长的头发，白皙的皮肤。 _ 4. 与她玩耍是我业余时间最重要的一部分。 _ 5. 我希望我们永远是好朋友。_,work hard together,ask our teacher for help together,She i