市公开课--地点介绍写作课.ppt

Unit 2 Working the land Reading Daily SentenceRevision * An advantage of (doing) sth is that .: 的好处就 是 * An advantage of living in the dormitory is that it helps you develop the ability of independence. * An advantage of living in the countryside is that you can not only breathe fresh air but also can enjoy quiet nights. * An advantage of travelling is that it can not only enrich your knowledge but also broaden your view. Daily Sentence- New Sentence 毫无疑问阅读在英语考试中至关重要。 There is no doubt that reading plays an important part in English examinations. 毫无疑问良好的家庭教育在孩子的成长起到关 键的作用。 There is no doubt that a good family education plays a vital role in childrens growth. There is no doubt that friendship plays an important part in our life. 毫无疑问 Basic Writing 基础写作 Place Introduction 地方介绍 Discussion :Analyze and find: When introducing a place Possible topic Useful phrases: Located in the south of Guangdong Province, Zhongshan covers an area of 1800 square kilometers with a population of 1.43 million. /Zhongshan, one of the ten most liveable cities, is named after the great revolutionist Sun Yat- sen and enjoys the reputation of “a famous emigration homeland”./Although it is not a large city, it has a long history which can date back to Song Dynasty. / It is warm all year around with an average temperature of 22. /Besides the Museum of Sun Yat-sen, it is well- known for such famous places of interest as Qijiang Park and Wuguishan Mountain, which attract visitors from all over the world./ Located in covers an area of with a population of a long history average temperature famous places of interest A place Area Location Places of interest History Population BrainstormBrainstorm: possible topic?: possible topic? climate surroundings Useful Phrases: Location: Area: Population: History: places of interest: Useful Phrases: Location: lie in; be located in Area: cover an area of; with an area of Population: has a population of; with a population of History: has a history of; with a history of places of interest: be famous for 1.Location (1.Location (位置位置):): 1) lie in 2) be located in/on/to 温哥华位于加拿大的西海岸. Vancouver is located on the west coast of Canada. 温哥华位于加拿大的西海岸,是一个美丽的城市。 Vancouver, a beautify city , is located on the west coast of Canada. 温哥华位于加拿大的西海岸,是个美丽的城市, 有着舒 适的居住环境。 句子合并： Vancouver, a beautiful city with a comfortable living condition, is located on the west coast of Canada. Located onLocated on the west coast of Canada, Vancouver, is a beautiful city with a comfortable living condition. 巧用同位语、分词，with结构等 Typical mistakes:Typical mistakes: Vancouver, a beautiful city with a comfortable living condition, which is located on the west coast of Canada. Vancouver, a beautiful city with a comfortable living condition, located on the west coast of Canada. Vancouver, is located onlocated on the west coast of Canada, is a beautiful city with a comfortable living condition. 没谓语 located on 双谓语 没谓语 is located on the west coast of 2.Area (2.Area (面积面积):): 1) cover/ have an area of square kilometers 2) with an area of 3.Population (3.Population (人口人口 ) ) ： 1) have a population of 2) with a population of 广州，中国第三大城市，/面积：7,434平方公里，/人 口：大约一千万。 Guangzhou is the third largest city in China. It covers an area of 7,434 square kilometers. It has a population of about 10 million. 句子合并: Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, covers an area of 7,434 square kilometers with a population of about 10 million. 巧用同位语，with结构等 广州位于广东的中部是中国第三大城市；面积有7,434 平方公里；人口是大约一千万。 Guangzhou，the third largest city in China, is located in the centre of Guangdong province. Guangzhou covers an area of 7,434 square kilometers with a population of more than 11 million. 句子合并: Located in the centre of Guangdong province, Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, covers an area of 1,783 square kilometers with a population of 1.46million. 巧用同位语，with结构等 Typical mistakes:Typical mistakes: Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, is located in the centre of Guangdong Province , covers an area of 1,783 square kilometers with a population of 1.46million. Located in the centre of Guangdong Province, Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, which covers an area of 1,783 square kilometers and a population of 1.46million. 双谓语 which covers an area of 1,783 square kilometers and has 没谓语 and covers an area of 1,783 square kilometers 4.History (4.History (历史历史 ) ) have a (long )history (of years). be a place with a (long) history (of years). 3) The history can date back to 中山是一座历史很悠久的城市，能够追溯到宋代。 Zhongshan is a city with a long history. Its history can date back to Song Dynasty. 句子合并： Zhongshan is a city with a long history which can date back to Song Dynasty. 5.Places of interest (5.Places of interest (名胜名胜 ) ) be well-known / famous for be a place with many famous places of interest such as .悉尼是澳大利亚最大的城市，有许多名胜，比如说悉尼 歌剧院(Sydney Opera House)。它每年吸引了成千上万 的来自世界各地的游客。 Sydney , the biggest city in Australia, has many places of interest, such as Sydney Opera House, attracting millions of tourists from all over the world every year. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia with many places of interest, such as Sydney Opera House, which attracts millions of tourists from all over the world every year. Typical mistakes:Typical mistakes: Sydney , the biggest city in Australia, has many places of interest, such as Sydney Opera House， attracts millions of tourists from all over the world every year. 双谓语 which attracts millions of tourists from all over the attracting millions of tourists from all over the 6.6.气候特征：气候特征： 1)The climate there is mild all the year around with an average temperature about 22. 2)The average temperature of Hong Kong is about 22 and the rainy season is between May and July. More useful phrases: be considered as 被认为是 attract tourists from home and abroad foreign customs and traditions tourist attractions旅游景点 places of interest 名胜古迹 enjoy the reputation of flower city享有花城之美称 be rich in natural resources自然资源丰富 has a pleasant climate 气候宜人 be made up of =consist of由组成 be close to; neighboring 临近 is home to是的家园 leave a deep impression on给留下深刻印象 Practice:Practice: 1.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一 。 China, one of the largest countries in the world, is located in the east of Asia. 2.中山位于广东的南部，是孙中山的故乡，是中 国十佳宜居城市之一。 Located in the south of Guangdong province, Zhongshan, the hometown of Sun Yat-sen, is one of ten liveable cities in China. Practice:Practice: 3.多伦多是加拿大东部的一个繁华的港口城市， 总面积1, 850平方千米，总人口261万人。 (cover a total area of) Toronto, a busy port city on the east coast of Canada, covers a total area of 1,850 square kilometers with a population of 2.61million. Practice:Practice: 4. 中国是一个古老的(ancient) 国度，有将近五千 年的历史。(with a history of ) China is an ancient country with a long history of almost 5000 years. 5. 西藏有其独特(unique)的文化，和众多的名胜 如布达拉宫(Potala Palace)，深深地吸引各地游 。(be well-known for) Tibet is well-known for its unique culture and a number of places of interest such as Potala Palace, attracting tourists from all over the world. Lets have a try. 5Lets have a try. 5个句子个句子 北京中国首都 位置：中国北部 人口：2114万 面积：16410平方千 拥有3000多年悠久历史，在不同的朝代有不同的称谓 。 作为文化名城，拥有众多名胜，如长城，故宫等，吸 引八方来客。 2008年成功举办了奥运会，给世界人民很好的机会了 解北京。 参考词汇词汇 ：朝代 dynasty 故宫宫 the Forbidden City Group Work: Focus on: 1) Information arrangement( within 5 sentences) 2) Work out the sentence structure of each sentence 3) what phrases can you use 4) How to polish your writing by using 非谓语，同位语，with结构，定语从句等 While writing: Focus on: 1) how to combine simple sentences; 2) avoid grammatical mistakes; 3) try to use 非谓语，同位语，with结构 ，定语从句等 4) great handwriting. Show timeShow time HomeworkHomework Try to polish your composition and write it on your Writing notebook. Typical mistakes:Typical mistakes: The capital city of China, Beijing, located in the north of China with a population of 21.14 million which cover an area of 16,410 square kilometers. Beijing, the capital city of China, located in the north of China and covers an area of 16,410 square kilometers with a population of 21.14 million. It was more than 3000 years history and different dynasty has different name. Typical mistakes:Typical mistakes: As for a famous cultural city, Beijing is well know for number of place of interest, for example, the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and so on, which attracting tourists from home and abroad every year. In 2008, Beijing hold the Olympic Games successful, which leave a very good impression on those who from all over the world to know more about it. Beijing, the capital city of China, is located in the north of China. /It covers an area of 16,410 square kilometers with a population of 21.14 million./ It was an ancient city with a long history of more than 3000 years and has different names in different dynasties./ As a famous cultural city, Beijing is famous for many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and so on, attracting touris