大学英语四六级作文讲义

1、精选文档英语四六级考试冲刺辅导写作 -LeoHBUE 新题型试卷结构时间分布:试卷构成试题内容答题时间Part IWriting30 minutesPart IIReading Comprehension (Skimming and Scanning)15 minutesPart IIIListening Comprehension35 minutesPart IVReading Comprehension (Reading in Depth)25 minutesPart VCloze or Error Correction15 minutesPart VITranslation or Sho

2、rt Answer Questions5 minutes审题:改卷老师的建议:l 书写和框架l 在第一段的最后一到两句话有没有清楚地给出文章的中心句。l 文章的主题第二段有没有清楚的次观点来support文章的中心句，这时还会重点找一些连接词和过渡词，他们使支持次观点从结构上清楚的展现。l 最后就会看最后一段的句首部分有没有表示文章结束的过渡词和对文章观点的再次陈述。l正文写作:检查：框架1,2,3原则1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）3）the first,

3、 the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）8）most important of all, m

4、oreover, finally9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our lifeFirstly，peoples living standard has been greatly improvedSecondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what th

5、ey need or likeLast but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life Tips 1.说出你的中心,你的观点: in terms of (根据)my point of view 我的观点.高中学过的in my opinion that ,There are several conspicuous (明显的)reasons why I strongly support that atpresent, currently, lately, recently, nowadays, theseyears, i

6、nthepastseveral decades, overthelastseveralyears2. 变化词汇,那你就要积累了,因为我不可能列举那么多给你,但是我下面列举几个:very可以用很多词代替,比如fairly ,really , quietly 3.表示举例（Exemplification）所用的过渡词：for example, for instance, a good case in point, as a example, as a case, as an illustration, such as, in point,namely, like, that is 划线的基本掌握就

7、行了,如果要想使文章放光彩,那就用case,例证,显得你很专业.4.表示原因（Cause）所用的过渡词：because, because of, since, for, as, be due to, owing to, , as a result of, on the ground of, derive from, originate from, lead to, result (in), based on5.表示对比 :by contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, notbut, rather than, othe

8、rwise, unlike, instead, conversely, compared with ,in comparison with6.表示让步（Concession）所用的过渡词：though, although, even though, but, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, notwithstanding, yet, admittedly, in spite of, despite, it is truebut, granted that7. 表示强调（Emphasis）所用的过渡词：mainly, chiefly, especially

9、, indeed, in fact, as a matter of fact, actually, particularly, certainly, above all, surely, undoubtedly, no doubt, all in all, most important/significant of all,这中间一定要选两个出来啊.强调是加分的地方.8. 表示结论（Conclusion）所用的过渡词：in conclusion, in short, as a whole, in a word, on the whole, in summary, in brief, to su

10、m up, to conclude ,呵呵找一个就行.结尾时可以在用完说的那个not only but also 后再套上去,就像流行歌曲首先唱,我现在的处境怎么怎么样,爱你吧又怕伤害了你,放手吧又怕自己错过了你,然后”于是我冷静的做了一个决定”,套上上面的词汇,in conclusion 我还是要放手,或者基于前面的原因,to sum up 我还是选择将爱情进行到底.常用的句子1表示原因1）There are three reasons for this 2）The reasons for this are as follows 3）The reason for this is obviou

11、s 4) The reason for this is that 5) We have good reason to believe that 2表示好处 1）It has the following advantages 2）It does us a lot of good 3）It benefits us quite a lot 4）It is beneficial to us 5）It is of great benefit to us 例如： Books are like friendsThey can help us know the world better，and they ca

12、n open our minds and widen our horizonsTherefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us 3表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages 2）It does us much harm 3）It is harmful to us 例如： However，everything divides into twoTelevision can also be harmful to usIt can do harm to our health and ma

13、ke us lazy if we spend too much time watching television 4表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sbto do sth2）We think it necessary to do sth 3）It plays an important role in our life 例如： Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in sch

14、ools or in businessSoon， computers will be found in every home，tooWe have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age 5表示措施 1）We should take some effective measures2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the

15、difficulties 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）witheg: The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more seriousTherefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it6表示变化 1）Some changes have taken place in

16、the past five years2）A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education eg: Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five yearsThe major reasons for these changes are not far to seekNowadays，increasing pe

17、ople are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins7表示事实、现状 1）We cannot ignore the fact that 2）No one can deny the fact that3）There is no denying the fact that4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in We cannot ignore the fact that indu

18、strialization brings with it the problems of pollution8表示比较 1）Compared with A，B2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV 3）There is a striking contrast between themeg: Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordableTo begin with，they do not consume natural resources of pet

19、roleumfurthermore，they do not cause the pollution problemLast but not least，they contribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise 9表示数量 1）It has increased（decreased）fromto 2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，0003）The output of July in this factory incre

20、ased by15 compared with that of JanuaryFrom the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000 10表示看法 1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth 2）People have different opi

21、nions on this problem3）People take different views of（on）the question4）Some people believe thatOthers argue that11表示结论 1）In short，it can be said that 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that From what has been mentioned above，we

22、 can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary , however， its method should be improved 12套语 1）Its well known to us that 2）As is known to us， 3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about 4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that 5）As aproverb says，“Where there i

23、s a will，there is a way写作绝招：开头万能公式一：名人名言经典句型：A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that开头万能公式一：名人名言经典句型：A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言）It goes without s

24、aying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that 读书应该博览还是选择？ As Decartes（笛卡尔） once put, “The reading of all good books is like a conversation with the finest men of past centuries.” Francis Bacon, a British philosopher, commented, “Histories make men wis

25、e; poems witty; the mathematics subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend.” 历史使人明智;诗歌使人灵秀; 数学使人周密; 自然哲学使人深刻; 道德使人庄重; 逻辑和修辞使人擅辩.2 开头万能公式二：数字统计According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.H

26、onesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。更多句型：A recent statistics shows that 1 结尾万能公式一：如此结论Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.更多过渡短语：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of

27、 this, thus更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find that2 结尾万能公式二：如此建议如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型. 更多句型：Accordingly, I recommend that so

28、me measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.题型分类： 一、第一种题型（对比观点选择题；Essay I） (一)题型特点： 1、大多为三点提纲，提纲模式一般为：有一些人；还有人；我的看法或观点； 2、少数时候也会出现两点提纲的情况，此时可以补充成三点提纲来写作。 (二) 历年真题： 2000.6； 1999.6； 1998.6； 1997.6； 1996.1；1995.6；1993.6； 1993.1 二、 第二种题型（社会热点话题；Essay II): (一)题型

29、特点： 1、应该为三点提纲，但是通常以两点提纲出现的题目居多，所涉及主题为当时社会热点； 2、如果是两点提纲，则补充成三点提纲写作。 3、通常模式为：现象概述-细节（原因、危害、方式等）-自我评论 (二)历年真题： 2002.12； 2000.12； 2000.1； 1999.1； 1997.12； 1995.1； 三、第三种题型（图表题；Report; Essay III）:（一）题型特点： 1、以图表作为信息来源的写作模式2、通常模式为：描述图表-解释原因-自我评论（二）历年真题：2003.6; 2000.6； 1996.6； 1992.1； 1991.6图表题：真题：The sugges

30、ted Title is: Car Accidents Declining in Walton City. Remember that your composition must be written according to the following outline: 1.Rise and fall of the rate of car accidents as indicated by the graph; 2.Possible reason (s) for the decline of car accidents in the city; 3.Your predictions of w

31、hat will happen this year.Your composition should be no less than 120 words and you should quote as few figures as possible.范文：Car Accidents Declining in Walton CityAccording to the graph, the rise and fall of the rate of car accidents in Walton City varies with the seasons. From January to March la

32、st year it increased by 68%, from March to June it dropped by about half the previous rate; and from June to August there was a steep rise of 66.6%. After that, however, there was a steady decrease, and this makes us optimistic that car accidents are declining in Walton City.注：1.According to the gra

33、ph 如图所示，还可以说成 As can be seen from the graph 2.steep rise 陡然上升，steady decrease 缓慢下降There are three reasons for this improvement. To begin with, new traffic regulationshave made drivers more careful, furthermore, more people are using bicycles for transportation, and finally, in the later part of the

34、year good weather made the roads safer to drive on.This year, major roads have been repaired and the number of public buses has been increased. Moreover, a traffic safety campaign has made all the local people more aware of the dangers of unsafe driving. So, I am confident that there will be even fe

35、wer car accidents in Walton in the future.四、第四种题型（书信题； Essay IV）: (一) 题型特点： 1、写书信（二）历年真题： 2001.6； 2002.1；书信的格式（一）开 头 段： 1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你） Dear Sir/Mr. Prometheus, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department. I am a at your I am a at your college, enrolled in the course. My

36、name is , I am . 2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友） Dear Prometheus, Hello/Hi. How are you? / I hope everything is fine. / How are things going with you? / How are you getting on in? 3、解释写信的原因 （1）致谢： I deeply appreciate your courtesy and I hope to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises. / I am greatly

37、indebted to you for (the double) you have gone to on my behalf. / Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada. / I am writing to you to express my heartfelt gratitude. / I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for. / I would like to thank you most sincerely for. （2）抱怨： I am writing to comp

38、lain about the poor service at your dining-room. / I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at / I wish to make a complaint about. / I am writing to draw your attention to. / I am afraid I have got a complaint about. （3） 致歉： I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with ce

39、rtain essential information regarding the following aspects. / I am writing to you because I am unable to. / I am terribly sorry that. / I would like to express my apologies for not being able to.（4）询问： I would like to obtain/request/seek/inquire about some information about / I am writing to ask if

40、 you can do me a favor. / I would like some detailed information on/about 2002年1月真题范文： Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base

41、 your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。 January 12th,2002 Dear Mr. President,Im very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but Im afraid Im not content with the canteen service on campus.Firstly, the qual

42、ity of the dishes should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year, they are the same. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day. So I think the most urgent problem is variety.Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hop

43、e that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food. Finally, the environment is so noisy that we cant enjoy our meals in good mood. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax. Those presented suggestions are not just of my own, but also of many other studen

44、ts. We hope our respectable president will pay attention to your suggestions. By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling. So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service. Best wishes, Yours sincerely, Li Ming五、第五种题型（谚语格言题； Essay

45、V）: (一) 题型特点： 1、文章题目为一句格言或谚语 2、通常模式为：解释谚语-举例论证-画龙点睛 (二) 历年真题： 1997.1；Paragraph I:（1）点明要阐释的谚语或名言(general)； （2）用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反两面的逻辑(specific)。Haste Makes Waste “Haste makes waste” is meant that one should do everything step by step. Even simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to co

46、mplete them, neglecting important stages in the process. One should make full preparations before beginning an task.Paragraph II:（1）作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句； （2）支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证（至少两点，有时有正反两面的逻辑）； （3）本段总结（可以省略）。Take English study for example. Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to

47、 speak in an understandable way. Similarly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good composition.Paragraph III: （1）总结全文，定下结论（通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义）。In short, laying a solid foundation is essential if we want to make achievements in

48、our studies or work, or indeed in any other aspect of our lives. At every step, review what has been achieved and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step. And remember, Rome was not built in a day.Model Test近年来兴起了一股国家公务员热,谈谈你对这一现象的理解: 1 公务员考试热的原因何在, 2公务员考试热的利弊分析 3你认为这股热潮的未来走势1 公务员考试热的原因何在 十四个万能理由 1经济 2安全 3 环境 4 效率 5 健康 6性格 7情感 8交流 9兴趣 10方便 11 成就 12他人 13经验 14 耐久 Test for National Civil Servant Now