郑州留学中介留学文书写作样本精品赏析低碳生活.ppt

1、留学文书写作样本精品赏析：低碳生活,写作难点： 如何选题：2、4题是议论文;2题容易偏题;K 5题相对易写，但也要做到出彩、不落俗套。 写作要领： 反映一个中学生从不成熟到逐渐成熟的成长心路。,【精彩例文】,Consider your talents and strengths, academic and otherwise. What is one thing you do really well? Reading the news that China had an over 6 billion C02 emission every year, I was really shocked.

2、I remember that back in 2007 I had already heard the phrase “ low carbon living ” so I wondered why there was still such a high amount of C02 emission in China and the whole world. When school started, I invited several members in our school social practice association to conduct a research study on

3、 the public knowledge about low carbon living. We made 500 questionnaires and distributed them on Shenyang s main streets. Collecting all the feedback, we spent 3 days analyzing the data from which I was disappointed to see that only 30% of the people knew exactly the significance of living a low ca

4、rbon life and the correct way of doing it. turned out that to most people, low carbon living remained just a concept instead of real action. Since then, I together with other members of social practice association have set up several publicizing stations in the city and spent our weekends introducin

5、g knowledge about low carbon living to the pedestrians. For example, we made brochures to tell them that bringing your water bottle and tableware with you when you went out would save the world millions of trees. And through using energy saving light and taking public transportation or bike riding,

6、we could dramatically reduce the C02 emission. We tried our best to tell more people that living a low carbon life is not that difficult and however small a change you are willing to make matters to the world, our common home. In the bigger picture, I know what we were doing might not make a big dif

7、ference but I felt the responsibility to influence as many people as I can.,【低碳生活】,读了中国每年排放超过60亿吨二氧化碳的新闻，我感到非常震惊。我记得早在2007年的时候我就听说了 “低碳生活”的概念，所以我很想知道为什么到现在中国和全世界的二氧化碳排放量仍然如此之高。 于是开学后，我邀请了学校社会实践协会的几位同学一起做了一个关于公众对低碳生活了解程度的调查。我们制作了500份问卷，然后在沈阳的主要街 道上分发。在收集到所有的反馈之后，我们花了三天的时间分析数据，从中我失望地看到只有30%的人真的了解低碳生活的

8、重要性，并且知道低碳生活的正确方 式。原来对多数人来说，低碳生活仅仅是个概念并没有切实的行动。 从此之后，我和社会实践协会的其他成员一起在城市里设立了几个宣传站点，利用周末向行人介绍低碳生活的相关知识。比如，我们做了宣传册来告诉人 们外出时要自己带水杯和桌布，这样可以为世界节约几百万株的树木。我们还告诉他们通过使用节能灯，乘坐公共交通工具或者骑自行车，我们可以显著地减少二氧 化碳的排放。我们尽最大的努力告诉更多的人低碳生活并不困难，而无论多小的改变，只 要你愿意，都对我们共同的家园意义非凡。 我知道在更大的范围内，我们做的事情并不能改变什么，但是我觉得影响尽可能多的人是我的责任。,【佳文精评】 对于普通人来说，最大的成就不是个人的善举，而是将善的种子传播，影响更多的人，让更多的人参与行善的过程，服诺网认为作者的经历就是最好的证明。当被问 及自己做得最好的一件事，作者没