高考英语书面表达高分策略解析

1、书面表达如何做到词汇丰富，句式多变,如何超越20分，从而超越他人？,书面表达最基本的：,要点齐全 “要点不全是不可能得高分的” 符合题意 写跑了题，再优美也没用 卷面整洁 记住：卷面即“脸面” 写足词数，超过或低于要求词数一样被动 接下来就是： 词汇丰富，句式多变，衔接连贯 那么如何做到词汇丰富，句式多变？,How can we get high marks in writing?,1.合理利用介词和名词代替动词，降低句子 的复杂性2.使用短语结构来简化从句或合并短句。3.将意义相关的几个句子，用一定的连接方式合并起来4.尝试改变句子的开头方式,一.使用准确地道的词汇和句子，避免用中文式英语,

2、二. 语言简洁不重复，同时句式灵活多变,一.准确性是指要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等，但是不少考生由于受汉语思维习惯的影响，在写作时不自觉地产生不规范的表达。要做到准确、地道地表达文章，首先要牢记掌握一些常用句型和习惯表达方式，避免中文式英语，在实践中不断总结英汉表达差异，培养用英语思维写作的习惯。,一.试比较下例句子在英汉表达上的差异: (1).我在报纸上看到一则消息 I saw a news on newspaper. 修改:I read a piece of news from the newspaper. (2).现在我详细给你介绍一下屋子的情况 Now Ill

3、introduce the room to you carefully. 修改:Now Ill give you some detailed information of the room. (3).工人们热烈欢迎我们参观农场 The workers welcomed us to visit the farm. 修改:The farm workers gave us a warm welcome.,(4).老师要我们课后查字典。 中文式:The teacher asked us to look up the dictionary after class. 修改:The teacher aske

4、d us to look up the word in the dictionary after class. (5).门上有一张字条，上面写着 There was a note on the door, which wrote 修改:There was a note on the door, which read (6)百分之四十学生认为应收门票但价位不能太高 错误表达:40% of the students think fees should be charged but the price shouldnt be expensive. 修改:but the price shouldnt

5、be too high.,二.简洁性就是要做到语言简洁、不重复。多样性就是能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句，语言结构和词汇要丰富。因此，在确保行文准确流畅的前提下，需要文字清晰简洁，语句灵活多变，使文章的语言结构更加丰富多彩。可以采用以下几种方式：,1.合理利用介词或名词代替动词，能有效降低句子的复杂性，在令句子通顺自然的同时，也能减少语法错误。 (1).I have got some news to tell you. (for) (2).The flat has an area of 25 square meters and there is a bedroom, a bathroom

6、, and a kitchen. (with) (3).He always comes to help me whenever I am in trouble. (comes to my help) (4).She is a beautiful girl and has two big eyes. (with),2.使用短语结构来简化从句或合并短句。常见的结构有介词短语、名词短语、非谓语动词短语、独立主格结构、同位语等。 (1)Theyoungmanpointedtoapolicemannotfarawayandsaid ,“Hestoppedusanhouragoandtoldustocat

7、chtheoffender.” 修改为：,_a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ,Pointing to,(2)MybrotherwasridingthebikeandI satontheseatbehindhim. 修改为： Mybrotherwasridingthebike ontheseatbehind.,withmesitting,(3).He got the first prize. It surprised us. 修改为: To our surprise, he got the first prize. He go

8、t the first prize, which surprised us. (4).He heard of the news of her death. He went pale with sorrow. 修改为: At the news of her death, he went pale with sorrow. Hearing of the news of her death, he ,3.通过合并句子，将意义相关的几个句子，用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过紧缩，去掉一些多余的成分可以避免冗长累赘，使句子凝练，层次清晰。 (1)IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowar

9、d theeast.Atthattime,anelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet 修改为 IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.(NMET2009范文),(2)TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool. 修改为： TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStr

10、eet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.(NMET2008范文),(3)Icanfollowmyowninterests.Icanreadbooks,visitmuseumsandtakecomputer courses.,修改为：,Icanfollowmyowninterests,_reading books,visitingmuseumsandtakingcomputercourses.(NMET2010范文),such as,(4).After a short rest, we sang, danced and told stories and

11、 jokes. We had a lot of fun. 修改为: After a short rest, we had a lot of fun singing, dancing and telling stories and jokes.,(6).The telephone was ringing. But when I picked it up, it had been hung up. 修改为: The telephone had been hung up _ I could answer it. (7).He is ill. He cant study. He still atten

12、ds school. 修改:He is ill and cant study, yet he still attends school.,before,(8).He saw the boy in the street. He stopped to speak to him. He gave him a penny. 修改为: Seeing the boy in the street, he stopped to speak to him and gave him a penny.,4.尝试改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，紧接着就是谓语、宾语，最后再加状语。要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调

13、句、感叹句主从复合句、分词作状语及其他一些特殊句式，这样能增加文章的节奏和韵律美。 (1) Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.,修改为：,Earlyinthemorning,wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.(NMET10范文),(2)Wehadtostandtheretocatchtheoffender.,修改为：,Therewasnothingforustodobutcatchtheoffender.(NMET07范文),(3)OurbraveAhFusaved

14、mylittlesister.,修改为：,ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmysister.(NMET10范文),We could do nothing but wait to catch the offender.,(4).You will be allowed in only when your identity has been checked. 修改为: Only when your identity has been checked, will you be allowed in. (5).We were glad to see the crops and v

15、egetables growing very well. 修改为: How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing very well!,(6).If you go through the gate, you will find the entrance to Bear Country. 修改为: Go through the gate, _ you will find the entrance to Bear Country. (7).When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.

16、修改为: _ he spoke, _ excited he felt.,and,The more,the more,Now use the methods above to perfect a passage. This passage is written by one of my students. Read it and tell me what you think of it.,Dear sir, Im writing to apologize to you . I said something bad to you this morning . It damaged you so m

17、uch. I didnt have the meaning .I then was also on the head of air . I d like to say sorry to you. I know there was no reason for being late .I last night felt sick and very unhappy .I didnt sleep well. I got up at half past seven this morning. Also ,I realized I forgot my book at home as soon as I g

18、ot on the bus . I had to go home to get the book .On the bus I met one of my old friends ,and said hello to him . Im wrong .I wont be late again .Give me another chance . Thank you .,Yours, LiMing,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Lets improve the passage together: 1.vocabulary a. correct the words that are unsuitabl

19、e It damaged you. I felt sick and unhappy last night. I realized I had forgotten my book at home.,hurt,uncomfortable,left,b. Replace the ordinary words with specific(具体的) and advanced(高级的) ones. I said something bad to you this morning. I felt ill and very uncomfortable last night. I didnt sleep wel

20、l. I had to go home to get the book. I wont be late again.,extremely (more advanced),rude (more specific),stayed awake (more advanced),fetch (more specific),will never (more advanced),2. Sentences 1.Correct the Chinglish sentences I hadnt the meaning. I then was also on the head of air.,I didnt mean

21、 that.,I was very angry then.,2.Perfect the sentences with different sentence patterns(句式) a. Rewrite the sentences with different beginnings. I said something rude to you this morning. It hurt you so much. I felt sick and extremely uncomfortable. I stayed awake all night. I was wrong.,This morning, I said something rude to you, which hurt you