中考英语作文技巧(好句子)

1、English writing,附作文评分标准（供参考） A (1315分): 包含内容要点，语言基本无误; 行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。 B（ 1012分）：基本内容要点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 C（ 79分）：包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能答意。 D（ 36分）：语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云 E（ 02分）：白卷或文不对题；只抄写了提示词。,巧用精准的高级词汇,句型、词组优先 善用关联词 活用多种句型,避免使用过分简单的句子,长短句结合（长句为主，但不能太长） 妙用格言，谚语（proverbs)等

2、,得高分的一些技巧,Liu Xiang is 21. He comes from Shanghai. He is a running star.,Liu Xiang, a 21-year-old running star, comes from Shanghai.,My father is good. My mother is good, too.,My father is hard-working and my mother is kind.,Which is better?,1. 我们应该努力学习来取得好成绩。,A. We should work hard to get good grad

3、es. B. Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.,2. 我们应多花时间学习。 A. We have to concentrate more on study. B. We have to study more and play less.,句型、词组优先,3. 我们不能玩电脑游戏。,A . We cant play computer games. B . We need to stay away from computer games.,1）He ran very quickly.,He ran as quickly as he

4、could.,2）I will learn English well.,I will try my best to learn English well.,3）I cant learn English well.,I find it (its) difficult for me to learn English well.,句型、词组优先,1.表示并列或递进: and, bothand, whats more, not onlybut also, besides, 2. 顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second (ly), next,

5、 later, then, finally, in the end, at last 3. 选择: or, eitheror 4. 转折: but, however, althoughthough, 5. 因果: because, so, therefore, since, for, as a result 6. 条件: if , unless 7. 对比: instead, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand 8. 解释: for example, for instance, such as/like 9. 强调:

6、 also, especially, actually, in fact 10. 结论: all in all, in a word, in general,2.关联词(linking words),People used to do farm work . They felt tired. They got little money.,Now there are many factories here. People can find different jobs in factories.,以家乡的变化为例：,they worked hard and felt tired, they go

7、t little money.,Although,They felt tired. They got little money.,Now there are many factories here. People can find different jobs in factories.,Now there are many factories here, people can find different jobs easily.,because,The water is dirty, people cant swim or fish in it.,We could see fish. Th

8、ey were swimming in the water.,We cant see anything in the water now.,We could see fish. They were swimming in the water.,We could see fish swimming in the clear water.,The water is dirty for people swim or fish in.,too to,so that,The water is dirty, people cant swim or fish in it.,The water is dirt

9、y people cant swim or fish in it.,Giving advice,He could/ should/shouldnt v. He is supposed to v. Hed better v. Its better/best for him to v . Why not v? /Why doesnt he v? What/How about v-ing.? v.-ing.is good/necessary/helpful for him.,3. 活用多种句型：,我们应该多学多练。,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfec

10、t.”（熟能生巧） So we should spend more time learning and practicing.,4. 妙用格言，谚语（proverbs)等,以下文为例,The ways to stay healthy Health is the most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge. Firstly, we should pay attention to the diet. Its best to eat lots of fruit and ve

11、getables.“ An apple a day keeps the doctor away,” so fruit is good for health. Besides, we are not supposed to have a lot of junk food. Secondly, exercise is necessary. On the one hand, we are not easy to get fat. On the other hand, we can be stronger. Finally, wed better have good living habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. Whats more, we must stay away from cigarettes. In general,