读后续写Jenny与母亲和解故事讲义-江西省宜春市宜丰中学高一下学期第一次月考英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文。Jennywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrel(争吵)withhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.

Shecouldn’thelpweeping（哭泣)sorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescolding(责备)

fromhermother.Havingwandered(闲逛）aimlesslyinthestreetforhours,

shefeltalittlehungryandwishedfor

somethingtoeat,butitwasnotevenpossibleforher,

sinceshehadnothingwithher.Shestoodbesideastand(摊位)forawhile,

watchingthemiddleagedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.

However,

withnomoneyinhand,shesighedandhadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,

“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes…butIdon’thavemoneyonme”

shereplied.“That’snothing.

I’lltreatyoutoday,”saidtheman,

“ein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,

whosesmellwassoattractive.

Asshewaseating,

Jennycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”

askedthemankindly.“Nothing,

actually

Iwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidJennyasshewipedhertears,

“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,

whilemymother,

drovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.

Sheissomerciless(无情的)paredtoastranger!”Hearingthewords,

thesellersmiled

“Girl,

doyoureallythinkso?

Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.

Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumb(呆滞的）withshock;sherememberedmother’sfamiliarfaceandweathered(饱经风霜的)hands.

“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelindebted(感激的；蒙恩的),butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”Onthewayhome,Jennymadeuphermindtomakeanapologytohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:

Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.____________________________________________________________________________________________Jenny与母亲和解故事续写续写分析故事线第一段：Jenny怀着紧张的心情走到家门口，深吸一口气后慢慢推开门。屋内寂静，她看到母亲疲惫又担忧地坐在沙发上。此时Jenny意识到自己对母亲的伤害，眼中含泪，脚步迟疑地走向母亲，低声且带着颤抖的情绪向母亲道歉。第二段：母亲温柔地摸了摸Jenny的头发，将她从沉思中唤回。Jenny抬头看到母亲和善的眼睛，随后被母亲拉进温暖的怀抱。母亲轻声表达自己不该责骂Jenny。Jenny在母亲怀里哭泣，深切感受到一直以来被自己忽视的母爱。两人紧紧相拥，深知她们之间的亲情坚不可摧。从这天起，Jenny再也不会对母亲的爱习以为常。高频单词mother：母亲，是故事中与Jenny情感交流的核心人物，围绕着她和Jenny的关系展开情节。sorry：抱歉，体现Jenny和母亲对自己之前行为的愧疚与歉意，是推动故事和解的关键情感表达。love：爱，是故事的主题，贯穿始终，通过Jenny与母亲的互动展现母爱的深沉以及Jenny对母爱的重新认识。breath：呼吸，“tookadeepbreath”体现Jenny进门时的紧张心理状态。embrace：拥抱，母亲和Jenny之间拥抱的动作象征着她们关系的修复与和解。voice：声音，Jenny向母亲道歉时颤抖的声音，以及母亲温柔的低语，都传达着人物的情感。eyes：眼睛，通过描写母亲和善的眼睛以及Jenny含泪的眼睛，展现人物内心复杂的情感。短语approachingthedoorway：接近门口，描述Jenny回家的动作，引出后续与母亲的见面场景。tookadeepbreath：深吸一口气，生动展现Jenny内心的紧张与不安，即将面对母亲时的心理状态。pushedthedooropen：推开门，Jenny进入家门的具体动作。filledwithtears：充满泪水，形象地表现Jenny意识到伤害母亲后的懊悔和自责之情。walkedtowards：走向，Jenny走向母亲准备道歉的动作描述。pulled...intoawarmembrace：把……拉进温暖的怀抱，母亲接纳Jenny的动作，体现母爱的包容。sobbedinone'sarms：在某人怀里哭泣，描绘Jenny在母亲怀抱中释放情绪的状态。took...forgranted：对……习以为常，强调Jenny之前对母爱忽视的状态，与现在的珍惜形成对比。主旨升华句Thisstoryservesasapoignantreminderthattheloveofamotherisaneverpresentandselflessforce,oftenoverlookeduntilmomentsofcrisisorreflection,whenwetrulyunderstanditsprofoundvalue.（这个故事深刻地提醒我们，母亲的爱是一种永恒且无私的力量，常常被我们忽视，直到危机或反思时刻，我们才真正理解其深远价值。）ThroughJenny'sexperience,welearnthatapologiesandforgivenessarethebridgesthatcanmendeventhemoststrainedrelationships,andthatfamilybondsarestrengthenedbyhonestmunicationandmutualunderstanding.（通过Jenny的经历，我们明白道歉和原谅是修复即使最紧张关系的桥梁，家庭关系通过坦诚沟通和相互理解得以加强。）Itshowsthatthesmallestactsofkindnessandrecognition,likeasimpleapologyorawarmembrace,canhaveatransformativeeffectonourrelationshipsandteachustocherishthelovethatsurroundsuseveryday.（它表明，像一个简单的道歉或温暖的拥抱这样微小的善意和认可行为，能够对我们的关系产生变革性影响，并教会我们珍惜每天围绕在身边的爱。）写作示范一Paragraph1:Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Herhandstrembledslightlyasshereachedforthedoorknob.Shepushedthedooropen,andthefamiliarscentofhomefilledhernostrils.Inthelivingroom,hermothersat,hereyesfixedonthedoor.Themomenttheireyesmet,Jennysawtheworryandloveinhermother'sgaze.AlumpformedinJenny'sthroat.Sheslowlywalkedtowardshermother,herlegsfeelinglikelead."Mom,"shemanagedtochokeout,hervoicebarelyaboveawhisper,"I'mtrulysorryforrunningaway.Iwaswrong."Shebitherlip,tryingtoholdbackthefloodoftearsthatthreatenedtospill.Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Jennylookeduptoseehermother'sfacesoftwithaffection.HermotherstoodupandpulledJennyclose,wrappingherinatightembrace."Shh,mydear,"hermothermurmured."I'msorrytoo.Ishouldhavebeenmoreunderstanding."Jenny'sshouldersshookasshecried,releasingallthepentupemotions.Inthatembrace,shefeltthewarmthandsecurityofhermother'slove.Theystayedlikethatforalongtime,neitherwantingtoletgo.Fromthatdayforward,Jennymadeapromisetoherselftoalwayscherishandappreciatehermother'slove,forshenowknewhowpreciousitwas.写作示范二Paragraph1:Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Shehesitatedforamoment,gatheringthecouragetofacehermother.Withafinalresolve,shepushedthedooropen.Thehousewasquiet,buttheairseemedthickwithunspokenwords.Shesawhermothersittingonthecouch,lookingweary.Jenny'sheartachedatthesight.Shetookafewtentativestepstowardshermother,hereyesbrimmingwithtears."Mom,"shesaid,hervoicequivering,"I'mreallysorryformyrudeness.Ididn'tmeantohurtyou."Herhandswereclaspedtightlyinfrontofher,asignofhernervousness.Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Jennylookedupintohermother'skindeyes.Hermothersmiledfaintlyandthenpulledherintoawarmembrace."It'sallright,sweetie,"hermothersaidsoftly."Weallmakemistakes."Jennyburiedherfaceinhermother'sshoulderandsobbed.Sherealizedhowmuchshehadmissedthiscloseness.Astheyheldeachother,Jennyfeltasenseofpeacewashoverher.Sheknewthattheirrelationshipwasstrongerthananyquarrel.Fromthatmomenton,Jennymadeitapointtoexpressherloveandgratitudetohermothereveryday,neveragaintakingherforgranted.参考答案Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.

Shecouldhearherownheartbeatingloudlyinherears.Herhandtrembledslightlyasshereachedforthedoorknob.Assheentered,shesawhermothersittinginthedimlylitlivingroom.Jennywalkedslowlytowardsher,herstepsheavywithguilt.“Mom,”shesaidsoftly,“I’mback.I’msosorryf