2024中考英语二轮复习作文金题一

PAGEPAGE12024中考英语作文金题（一）A（2024中考选练）书面表达。假如你是Jack，明天(星期六)是你的生日，你的父母将给你举办一个生日派对。请你写一封邀请函邀请你的好挚友Mike。词数80左右。要求：1.语句通顺，表达精确，内容连贯，可适当发挥；2．文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息。Dear__Mike，This__Saturday__is__my__birthday__and__my__parents__will__hold__a__party__for__me.I__am__glad__to__invite__you__to__come__to__the__party.I__am__sure__we__will__have__a__good__time.We__will__have__dinner__at__18：30，so__you__had__better__arrive__at__18：15.After__dinner，we__will__play__some__small__games__and__then__eat__the__cake.My__parents__and__I__sincerely__expect__you__to__come__and__hope__to__see__you.Yours，JackB 你的家长或老师可能常常和你谈学习问题。请你叙述一次你的家长或老师对你谈学习的情景、内容以及你的感想。要求：1)不运用真实的校名、人名等相关信息。2)内容完整，书写整齐。词数80—100。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:WhenIwasinGrade7,myEnglishwasverypoor.Ievencouldn’tunderstandwhatmyEnglishteachersaidinclass.IfeltsoupsetthatIwantedtogiveupEnglish.Oneday,MrsZhang,myEnglishteacheraskedmetogotoherofficeandhadalongtalkwithme.SheencouragedmetostudyEnglishwellandgavemesomegoodadvice.Thishelpedmealot.Ibecameconfidentfromthenonandmademuchprogress.IbelievemyEnglishwillbemuchbetterinthefuture.C下面六幅图描述了十月九日星期三早晨你所经验的一件事．请依据这些图画，用英语写一篇日记．

留意：1

日记须包括全部图画的内容，可以适当增加细微环节，使其连贯．

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日记格式已写出，留意时态．

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词数：80

左右。

Oct.9th

Wednesday

Fine

In

the

morning，my

friend

and

I

【参考范文】

Oct.9th

Wednesday

Fine

Inthemorning，myfriendandIwenttotheparkbybike．（引出话题）Aboybeforeuswasridingabikeveryfast．Suddenlyhefelloffhisbikeandhurthisleg．Hewaslyingonthegroundandcouldn'tmove．（一个小孩出了事故）MyfriendandIrantohimandtriedtohelphim．Wedecidedtosendhimtothenearesthospitalatonce（高分句型）．（我们奋力挽救）Inthehospital，hewaswellexaminedandgiventimelytreatment．Hisparentscametothehospitalsoonaftergettingacall．Wetoldthemwhathadhappened．Theyweregratefultousforhelpingtheirson．（详细介绍在医院的情景）Thoughwedidn'tplayinthepark，wefeltveryhappy!（高分句型）（我们的感受）

【解析】高分句型：

①Wedecidedtosendhimtothenearesthospitalatonce．我们确定立刻送他去最近的医院．句子中decidetodosth表示确定做某事．

②Thoughwedidn'tplayinthepark，wefeltveryhappy．虽然我们没有在公园里玩，但我们感到很兴奋．这里though引导一个让步状语从句．

图画作文要求考生仔细视察图画，思索写作主题，能够围绕主题，将图画内容一一描述出来．D学校定于6月28日14点30分在学校操场召开全校学生大会，大会内容为远离毒品(drug)，珍爱生命，要求按时参与。请你于6月27日以学生会(theStudentUnion)名义用英语写一则通知，词数不少于20个，请把答案写在答题卡相应的位置。(共10分)【参考范文】Notice

Girlsandboys,

MayIhaveyourattention,please?

I’mverygladtotellyouagoodthing.Wewillhaveastudentmeetingontheschoolplayground.Itisat14:30onJune28th.Themeetingisabouthowtostayawayfromdrugsandcherishyourlives.

Pleasedon’tbelate.

That’sall,thankyou.

June27th

TheStudentUnionE父爱如山！假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。写作要点：1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教化，过上更好的生活；2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时，他激励我不放弃；遇到困难时，父亲激励我笑对生活；表达对父亲的感谢和祝愿。温馨提示：1.短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；2.短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。Dearfather,Father’sDayiscoming,I’dliketosaysomethingtoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours【参考范文】Onepossiblepassage：Dearfather,Father’sDayiscoming.I，dliketosaysomethingtoyou.YoualwaysworkhardsothatIcanreceiveabettereducationandliveabetterlife.Youarestrictwithmeinmystudyandhelpmewithmyhomework.WhenIfailedanexam,youencouragedmetobeconfidentandkeeptrying.WhenIhadtroubleinlife,youalwaystoldmetobebraveandsmileatlife.Youhavegivenmesomuch,notonlyinmystudybutalsoinmylife.Thankyouforyourdeeplove.Thankyouforallthatyouhavedoneforme.Iloveyou!Ihopeyouwillbehealthyandhappyforever!HappyFathersDay!Yours,LiHuaF（挚友与四周的人）依据要求完成短文写作。来自美国的小迈克看完了这篇报道后深受感动，他觉得不仅中国人应当向雷锋学习，而且假如全世界的人都能做到这样，世界就会更美妙。下面请你帮小迈克完成这篇发出号召的演讲稿。内容包括：1.简洁介绍雷锋的事迹；2.提出学习雷锋的详细行动建议(至少三条)；3.呼吁大家都来学习雷锋。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Goodmorning,mydearteachersandstudents!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sallformyspeech!Thankyouforlistening.【参考范文】书面表达Goodmorning,mydearteachersandstudents!IfeelsogladtotalkaboutaChinesemodelsoldiernamedLeiFeng.OnDecember18,1940,LeiFengwasborninapoorpeasantfamilyinasmallvillagewhichliesinHunanIthinkpeoplefromthewholeworldshouldlearnfromLeiFeng.TolearnfromLeiFeng,wecandowhatwecantohelppeopleinneedandraisemoneyforthepoor.What'smore,wecandomuchvoluntaryworktomakeourcitymorebeautiful.Asstudents，weshouldhelptocleantheteachers'offices,studyhardandhelpeachotherwithstudy.Hopefully,LivingLeiFengwillliveallovertheworld.That'sallformyspeech!Thankyouforlistening.G你班上周实行了关于是否缩短寒暑假并增加春秋假的探讨,同学们各抒己见。请你依据下表中的探讨记录,结合你自己对此事的看法,用英语给校报写一篇短文。赞成1、目前学期长而枯燥,学生无法充分休息;2、春秋两季风景美丽,学生可以感受自然。反对1、一年分成四个学期,影响学习效果;2、作业可能因此变多,加重学习压力。你的观点……至少一点留意:1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。2.结构完整,语言通顺,意思清晰、连贯,书写规范。3.词数不少于90。文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词Weheldadiscussionaboutwhethertoshorten（缩短）thesummerandwinterholidaysandaddthespringandautumnholidayslastweek.Opinionsaredifferent.Somestudentsthink__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文一】留意：一、正确运用时态。本文发表的观点应用一般现在时来写。二、留意写作要求中的留意点。Onepossibleversion:Weheldadiscussionaboutwhethertoshorten（缩短）thesummerandwinterholidaysandaddthespringandautumnholidayslastweek.Opinionsaredifferent.Somestudentsthinkthatthetermsarelongandboringatpresentandstudentscan’tgetenoughrest.Springandautumnhavebeautifulviews.Ifthespringandautumnholidaysareadded,studentswillhavemorechancestofeelthebeautyofthenature.Somestudentsthinkifweaddthespringandautumnholi⁃days,ayearwillbedividedintofourtermsanditwillhavebadeffectonteachingandlearning.Ifso,studentsmayhavemorehomeworktodo