读后续写+鲨鱼周的意外与甜品店的温暖馈赠+讲义 高一下学期3月半月考英语试卷

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。About7yearsago,Iwasavolunteeratanaquarium(海洋馆),ItwasamazingbecauseIadoredtheocean.AtthetimethoughIwantedtobeabiologist,soitwasextraspecialforme.“SharkWeek"rolledaround,and,IwasexcitedbecauseIlovesharks,Apparentlyeveryoneelsewantedtoworksharkweektooastheschedulefilledupfast.Ihadoneshiftduringsharkweek.I.wasdroppedoffattheaquariuminthemorning.Iwenttomystationwithacoworker..andthenIstartedfeelingsick.Istartedtremblingabit,andthenmystomachstartedaching.Apparentlymyfacewassuperpaleandmycoworkernoticedmeabouttofall.over.Shewasabletowalkmetooneoftheemployeesonlydoorsbeforehavingtogobacktoherstation.Imademywayslowlytotheofficeandexplainedthesituation.Ineededtogohome.Iwantedtocry.ThatwasmyonlyshiftduringsharkweekandIhadtomissit.Andontopofthat,Ihadtotakethebushome.NormallyIdidn'tmindtakingthebushome,butmybusstopwasupaverysteep(多的)cityhill.It’squiteaclimbevenifyouaren’tsick.ButIstillmanagedtodoit.Now,onthatwalk,there'sacupcakeshopbeforeIreachmy.stop.MymomwouldgivemesomemoneytobuymyselfatreatafterworkusuallysoIwenttherefrequently.Welltheyalsohavehomemadeicecreamthere.AndconsideringitwasahotsummerdayandIfeltsick,Idecidedtostopin.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.BeforeIcouldevenpulloutmywallet,thewomanheldupherhand.文本主旨本文主要讲述了作者在海洋馆担任志愿者期间，在“鲨鱼周”上班时突然生病，不得不提前回家。回家途中经过常去的甜品店，因天气炎热且身体不适决定买冰淇淋，由此展开的一段经历，展现了生活中意外状况下的温暖瞬间。五要素分析人物：作者、同事、甜品店店员、妈妈时间：约7年前的夏天，“鲨鱼周”期间的一个工作日地点：海洋馆、从海洋馆回家的路上、家附近的甜品店事件：作者在“鲨鱼周”上班时生病，提前回家，途中去甜品店买冰淇淋原因：作者生病无法继续工作，因炎热和身体不适想买冰淇淋缓解词汇积累sick（生病的）、trembling（颤抖的）、aching（疼痛的）、pale（苍白的）volunteer（志愿者）、shift（轮班）、station（工作岗位）cupcakeshop（纸杯蛋糕店）、counter（柜台）、wallet（钱包）、homemade（自制的）、icecream（冰淇淋）续写分析衔接句：续写第一段开头“Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.”承接上文作者决定在甜品店买冰淇淋，自然引出在店内的后续情节。续写第二段开头“BeforeIcouldevenpulloutmywallet,thewomanheldupherhand.”则紧接上一段作者准备付款的动作，使故事连贯发展。情节合理性：从作者生病提前回家，到因炎热不适决定买冰淇淋，再到店员的反应，整个情节发展符合生活逻辑。例如，作者身体不适想吃冰淇淋缓解，而店员的善意举动也在情理之中，可能是看到作者状态不佳心生怜悯。情感铺垫：前文作者因生病错过“鲨鱼周”唯一轮班的沮丧，以及回家途中的艰难，为后文在甜品店获得温暖形成对比，情感过渡自然。情节一致性人物行为一致：作者一直处于生病状态，在整个过程中行动缓慢、状态不佳，符合其身体状况。场景一致：故事场景始终围绕从海洋馆回家的路线，包括经过的甜品店，没有突兀的场景转换。情感一致：作者一开始的沮丧情绪，到在甜品店感受到温暖，情感转变合理且连贯。主题一致：全文围绕作者在“鲨鱼周”的意外经历展开，展现生活中的意外与温暖，主题贯穿始终。逻辑一致：从作者决定买冰淇淋，到准备付款，再到店员的反应，逻辑紧密相连。高分语句呼应原文+高级句型呼应原文中作者身体不适的描述：JustasIwasonthevergeofcollapseattheaquarium,myweakenedstatewasonceagainevidentasItotteredtowardsthecounterinthecupcakeshop,longingforarespitefrommysickness.（使用了Justas引导的方式状语从句，以及onthevergeof等短语，生动地体现了作者状态的延续性）呼应作者错过鲨鱼周轮班的沮丧：DespitethedisappointmentofhavingtoabandonmyonlyshiftduringSharkWeek,thisunexpectedencounterinthecupcakeshopofferedaglimmerofhope,muchlikealighthouseguidingashipthroughstormyseas.（运用Despite引导的让步状语，以及muchlike的类比结构，强化了情感对比）高级句型提升文采Notonlydidthecoldicecreamsoothemyachingbody,butthekindgestureofthewomanbehindthecounteralsowarmedmyheart,makingmerealizethateveninthefaceofadversity,thereisalwayskindnesstobefound.（使用Notonly...butalso的倒装结构，强调了冰淇淋和店员善意的双重作用）Thecupcakeshop,whichhadalwaysbeenaplaceofindulgenceinnormaltimes,nowbecameahavenofcomfortinmymomentofneed,asanctuarywhereIcouldfindsolacefrommyphysicalandemotionaldistress.（运用非限定性定语从句，丰富了对店铺意义的表达）主题表达&意义延伸直接引语点明主旨Asthewomanhandedmetheicecreamandsaid,“Thisone'sonthehouse.Youlooklikeyoucoulduseabreak,”Irealizedthatsometimes,thesimplestactsofkindnesscanhavethemostprofoundimpactonourday.（通过店员的直接引语，直接点明了善良举动对人产生积极影响的主旨）促成转变，引发感悟Fromthedespairofmissingmyshiftandfeelingunwell,theunexpectedkindnessinthecupcakeshoptransformedmyperspective.Icametounderstandthatlifeisfullofunexpectedtwists,butit'softenthekindnessofstrangersthathelpsusnavigatethroughthetoughtimes.（描述了从消极到积极的情感转变，引发对生活中陌生人善意重要性的感悟）借象征物点明主旨Thecupoficecream,asimpletreatonanordinaryday,becameasymbolofhopeandkindnessinmyotherwisegloomyday.Itrepresentedthesmallbutsignificantgesturesthatcanbrighteneventhedarkestoftimes.（将冰淇淋作为象征物，点明其代表的希望与善意，深化主题）情感走向作者最初因生病错过“鲨鱼周”轮班而沮丧，在回家路上身体不适心情低落，进入甜品店后，店员的善意举动使作者感受到温暖，情感逐渐从消极转向积极。主题深化通过描述作者在困境中得到陌生人的善意，展现了生活中人与人之间的温暖与关爱，深化了即使生活有意外挫折，但仍有美好瞬间值得铭记的主题。下水文两篇下水文一

Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.Thewomanbehindthecounterlooksatmewithconcern.ShenoticesmypalefaceandthewayI'mstrugglingtostandsteadily.Itrytosmile,butitprobablycomesoutmorelikeagrimace.ItellherI'mnotfeelingwellandthatIjustneedsomethingtocoolmedown.BeforeIcouldevenpulloutmywallet,thewomanheldupherhand.“Thisone'sonthehouse,”shesayssoftly.“Youlooklikeyoucouldusealittlepick-me-up.”I'mstunned.Istutteroutathankyou,feelingalumpforminmythroat.Shehandsmethecupoficecream,andItakeasmallbite.Thecold,creamysweetnessspreadsthroughmymouth,andforamoment,IforgethowsickIfeel.Isitdownatasmalltable,savoringthetreatandtheunexpectedkindness.WhenIfinallyleavetheshop,Ifeelabitbetter,bothphysicallyandemotionally.Thatsimpleactofkindnessturnsmydisappointingdayaround.下水文二

Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.Myvoiceisweak,andIcanbarelykeepmyeyesopen.Theshopisquiet,withjustafewothercustomersenjoyingtheirtreats.Ileanagainstthecounter,waitingformyicecream,prayingIdon'tpassoutbeforeIcangetit.BeforeIcouldevenpulloutmywallet,thewomanheldupherhand.“Don'tworryaboutit,”shesayswithawarmsmile.“Youseemreallyunwell.Ihopethismakesyoufeelbetter.”Shequicklyscoopsagenerousportionoficecreamintoacupandhandsittome.I'mtouchedbyherkindness.Itakeafewspoonfuls,andtheicecreamseemstorevivemealittle.IstarttotellherhowmuchIappreciateit,butshejustwavesmeoff.AsIleavetheshop,Ifeelanewsenseofgratitude.Thatsmallactofkindnessfromastrangergivesmethestrengthtomakeitupthesteephilltomybusstop.Italsoremindsmethatevenontheworstdays,therearealwaysgoodpeopleandsmallmiracles.参考答案Paragraph1:Iwalkuptothecounterandaskforatinycupoficecream.Thewomanbehindthecounterdidtheusualcustomerservice“How’syourday?”ItalkedabouthowIhadtogohomebecause