读后续写+城市屋顶的绿色变革：从垃圾堆到美丽花园 讲义 高二下学期4月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成2篇完整的短文。MaggieandAlexliveinatallbuildinginaneighborhoodinthecenterofthecity.Therearenotreesneartheirbuilding,buttheyarehappyintheirhomeanditisclosetotheirjobs.Inthepartofthecitywheretheylive,thereisnotmuchfreshfoodtobuy.Thestoresonlyhaveprocessedfoodsinpackages.MaggieandAlexandalltheotherpeopleinthebuildinghavetoeatfoodthattheybuyinboxesandplasticcontainers.Thismakessomuchgarbagethatnooneknowswheretoputit.WhiletheywaitforFridays,whenthecitycollectsthegarbage,alltheneighborsputtheirtrashintobagsandsometimesleaveitinthehallwayoronthebig,sunnyroof.Thewholebuildinglooksterrible.Noonecanspendtimeplayingontheroofbecauseitisfulloftrash.Oneday,MaggieandAlexdecidetomakeachange.Theygouptotheroofandseparatealltherecycla-blegarbage,likecardboard,plasticbottles,glass,andaluminumcans.Thentheytakeallofthegarbagedowntothestreetforthegarbagecollectors.Buttheydonotcarrydowntheplasticbottles!Theycutoffthetopsandusethemaspotstoplanttomatoesandcarrots.Theyplantherbs,too.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:MaggieandAlextelltheirneighborsabouttheirproject._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Nowtherooflooksbeautifullikeagarden.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文本主旨本文讲述了Maggie和Alex居住在城市中心的一栋高楼里，周围没有树木，且由于附近商店只售卖加工食品，导致他们产生了大量垃圾。为了解决垃圾问题，他们决定利用屋顶空间，将塑料瓶改造成种植容器，种植蔬菜和香草。这一创新举措不仅解决了垃圾问题，还为屋顶带来了生机。二、五要素分析1.

人物（Characters）Maggie和Alex：故事的主角，居住在城市中心的高楼里，对环境问题有责任感。邻居们：居住在同一栋楼的居民，最初对垃圾问题无动于衷，但后来被Maggie和Alex的行动所影响。2.

时间（Time）时间背景：未明确提及具体时间，但从上下文可以推测是现代城市生活背景。3.

地点（Place）主要地点：城市中心的一栋高楼及其屋顶。4.

事件（Event）主要事件：Maggie和Alex决定利用屋顶空间，将塑料瓶改造成种植容器，种植蔬菜和香草，解决垃圾问题，并最终带动邻居们一起参与。5.

原因（Reason）原因：城市中心缺乏新鲜食物，居民们产生的垃圾过多，导致垃圾堆积问题严重。Maggie和Alex希望通过创新方式解决这一问题。三、词汇积累短语freshfood（新鲜食物）processedfoods（加工食品）plasticcontainers（塑料容器）recyclablegarbage（可回收垃圾）cardboard（纸板）aluminumcans（铝罐）planttomatoesandcarrots（种植西红柿和胡萝卜）herbs（香草）separatethegarbage（分类垃圾）garbagecollectors（垃圾收集者）tellneighbors（告诉邻居）makeachange（做出改变）beautifulgarden（美丽的花园）communityeffort（社区努力）reducewaste（减少浪费）urbanliving（城市生活）environmentalimpact（环境影响）positiveinfluence（积极影响）佳句Livinginthecitycenter,MaggieandAlexhadtodealwithalotofgarbage.Theydecidedtomakeachangebyrecyclingandreusingmaterials.Cuttingoffthetopsofplasticbottles,theyusedthemaspotsforplanting.MaggieandAlextoldtheirneighborsabouttheirproject,hopingtoinspirethem.Theroofbegantolooklikeabeautifulgarden,fulloflife.Theireffortsnotonlyreducedwastebutalsobeautifiedthebuilding.Thecommunityeffortledtoacleanerandmoresustainablelivingenvironment.MaggieandAlex’sprojecthadapositiveinfluenceontheirneighbors.Theyrealizedthatsmallchangescouldmakeabigdifference.Theroofgardenbecameaplacewhereneighborscouldgatherandenjoynature.Byplantingvegetablesandherbs,theywereabletohavefreshfood.Theprojectshowedthaturbanlivingcouldbemoresustainable.MaggieandAlex’sinitiativeledtoastrongersenseofcommunity.Thebeautifulgardenontheroofbecameasymboloftheirenvironmentalefforts.Theirprojectdemonstratedthepowerofcollectiveaction.四、续写分析（一）衔接句MaggieandAlextelltheirneighborsabouttheirproject.（Maggie和Alex告诉他们的邻居关于他们的项目。）这句话为续写部分设定了一个积极的行动方向，即Maggie和Alex开始向邻居们介绍他们的环保项目。Nowtherooflooksbeautifullikeagarden.（现在屋顶看起来像一个美丽的花园。）这句话为续写部分设定了一个积极的结果，即屋顶的环境得到了改善，变成了一个美丽的花园。（二）情节合理性邻居的反应：Maggie和Alex向邻居们介绍项目后，邻居们可能会有不同的反应，有的可能会积极参与，有的可能会持观望态度。花园的建设：随着项目的推进，屋顶逐渐变成了一个美丽的花园，这不仅解决了垃圾问题，还为居民们提供了一个休闲和交流的场所。（三）情感铺垫积极的改变：Maggie和Alex的行动带来了积极的变化，这种情感需要在续写中体现。社区的团结：通过共同的努力，社区居民之间的关系变得更加紧密，这种情感转变需要通过续写来合理展开。五、情感走向积极的改变：Maggie和Alex的行动带来了积极的变化，解决了垃圾问题，美化了环境。社区的团结：通过共同的努力，社区居民之间的关系变得更加紧密，形成了一个更加和谐的社区。环保意识的提升：居民们通过参与项目，提高了环保意识，认识到小改变可以带来大影响。六、主题深化环保与创新：通过Maggie和Alex的行动，展示了环保和创新的重要性。社区的力量：通过社区居民的共同努力，展示了集体行动的力量。可持续生活：通过屋顶花园的建设，展示了城市生活中可持续生活的可能性。七、下水文（一）版本一Paragraph1:MaggieandAlextelltheirneighborsabouttheirproject.Theyexplainhowtheyrecycledplasticbottlesandusedthemaspotsforplantingvegetablesandherbs.Theirenthusiasmiscontagious,andmanyneighborsareinspiredtojoinin.Together,theycleanuptheroofandstartplantingmorevegetablesandflowers.Thecommunityeffortnotonlyreduceswastebutalsobringspeopleclosertogether.Paragraph2:Nowtherooflooksbeautifullikeagarden.Itisfullofcolorfulflowers,freshvegetables,andaromaticherbs.Theonce-trash-filledroofhasbeentransformedintoagreenoasiswhereneighborscanrelaxandenjoynature.Theprojecthashadapositiveinfluenceonthecommunity,andpeoplearemoreconsciousaboutreducingwasteandlivingsustainably.Theroofgardenhasbecomeasymboloftheircollectiveeffortandaplacewheretheycangatherandsharetheirexperiences.（二）版本二Paragraph1:MaggieandAlextelltheirneighborsabouttheirproject.Theyshowthemtheplasticbottlestheyhaveturnedintopotsandexplainhowithelpsreducewaste.Manyneighborsarecuriousandexcitedtotryitthemselves.Theystartacommunityefforttocleanuptheroofandplantmorevegetablesandflowers.Theprojectbringsthecommunitytogether,andpeoplebegintoseethepotentialoftheirsharedspace.Paragraph2:Nowtherooflooksbeautifullikeagarden.Itisavibrantandlivelyspacefilledwithgreenplantsandcolorfulflowers.Thetransformationhasnotonlyimprovedtheappearanceofthebuildingbutalsocreatedasenseofcommunity.Neighborsgatherontherooftotendtotheirplantsandsharestories.Theprojecthasshownthatsmallchangescanmakeabigdifference,andithasinspiredotherstothinkcreativelyaboutreducingwasteandlivingmoresustainably.【答案】Paragraph1:

MaggieandAlextelltheirneighborsabouttheirproject.Theirneighborsgetveryexcited.