Unit5OntheroadDevelopingideas明信片写作指导课件-高一英语

unit5OntheroadWriting——明信片写作指导PostcardSendingpostcardstofriends,family,orlovedonesduringtravelcanbeagreatwaytoshowyouraffection,aswellasgivingpeopleanideaofwhereyouare.Readthepostcardandanswerthequestions.sender’splacerecipient’saddresssender’splacerecipientsender1.Whowrotethepostcardandfromwheredidshesendit?2.Whoisreceivingthepostcardandwhereisshe?Whathasthewriterdonesofar?Shehasspentthewholedayhikingandsawsomehugeyaks.Whatisthewritergoingtodonext?SheisgoingtovisitthefamousoldtownofLijiang.Howtowriteapostcard?点拨一、技法指导明信片是人们广结朋友、交流感情、传递信息的一种有效工具,也是一份非常有意义的礼物。它是简化的书信表达形式，不同主题的明信片内容新颖,形式多样。在写作时,同学们可根据自己与收信人的关系来确定是否采用正式格式。在旅行主题的明信片写作中,同学们可以将时间、地点、路线、见闻及感受等告知对方。二、注意事项1.开头和结尾可以按照自己的喜好随意称呼，2.正文按照自己书写的明确目的力求言简意赅3.明信片书写空间有限,不要写太多信息。4.尽量使用短句型。5.对于明信片上的关键信息,可以用大写或者下画线突出显示。ReadthemessageandwriteapostcardtoSam.ReadSam’smessageandunderlinethekeypointsinhismessage.TalkaboutwhatSamwantstoknowandwhatheneeds.Hey!Ihaven’theardfromyousinceyouleft.Youmustbehavingagreattime!How'syourtripbeensofar?Whathaveyouseen?Haveyoumetanybodyinteresting?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Pleasesendmeapostcard!WhatSamwantstoknowWhatSamneedsUsetheexpressionsintheboxtohelpyou.

I’vebeenin…for…Atthemoment,I’mat…Theweatheris…I’mgoingto…Byefornow.Takecare.3MarchHiSam,I’vebeeninBeijingfortwodaysandI’mhavingagreattime!YesterdaywewenttotheGreatWallandtodaywevisitedthePalaceMuseum.Wemetsomeyoungpeoplefromlocaluniversity.Theyhelpedustakealotofpicturesandtoldussomeinterestingfactsaboutthemuseum.Theyarereallywarm-hearted!Tomorrowwe’regoingtotakeawalkintheSummerPalaceandhaveatasteofthefamousBeijingduck.Ican’twait!Byefornow.Takecare!JohnSamSmith109CambridgeCourtLiverpoolL77AGUKl.payavisitto参观2.atthefootof在……脚下景点3.scenicspot4.haveagoodtime/enjoyoneself玩得愉快期盼5.lookforwardto亮点词汇1.Howisitgoing?Ithasbeenalongtimesincewesaweachotherlasttime.进展如何?自从我们上次见面已经很久了2.Howdoyoulikeyourtripto...?你觉得去……的旅行怎么样?3.Whathaveyouseenduringyourtripandwhathasleftthedeepestimpressiononyou?你在旅途中看到了什么,什么给你留下了最深刻的印象?4.Ibelieveyouarehavingagreattimein...now,because...我相信你现在在……过得很愉快,因为……高级句式fef假定你是李华,在海南旅游,收到朋友Sam的来信,询问你的旅游行程。请用明信片的方式给他回信介绍情况。注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。第一步

审题谋篇分步写作体裁应用文人称以第一人称为主时态一般现在时、一般过去时框架第一段和第二段:介绍旅游行程第三段:个人fef1.我和家人在海南旅行了不到七天。IhavebeenonatripforlessthansevendaysinHainanwithmyfamily.2.目前,我住在三亚。它位于中国的南部。Atthemoment,IamstayingatSanya.ltliesinthesouthofChina.下飞机后,我们欣赏了美丽的景色。3.Afterwegotofftheplane,weenjoyedthebeautifulscenery.当我们在海滩附近的一家海鲜餐厅吃午饭时,找与一个来自非洲的年轻人成了新朋友。Whenwewerehavinglunchataseafoodrestaurantnearthebeach,lmadeanewfriendwithayoungmanfromAfrica.5.他着迷于中国文化,已经游览了好几个风景名胜。HeisattractedtoChinesecultureandhastravelledseveralplacesofinterest.要点翻译fef1.用定语从句升级要点2Atthemoment,IamstayingatSanyawhichliesinthesouthofChina.2.用can'twait升级要点3Afterwegotofftheplane,wecouldn'twaittoenjoythebeautifulscenery.3.用省略的状语从句和定语从句升级要点4和要点5Whenhavinglunchataseafoodrestaurantnearthebeach,ImadeanewfriendwithayoungmanfromAfricawhoisattractedtoChinescultureandhastravelledseveralplacesofinterest.词句升级fefJulyIhavebeenonatripforlessthansevendaysinHainanwithmyfamily.Atthemoment,I'mstayingatSanyawhichliesinthesouthofChina.Wewenttherebyplane.Afterwegotofftheplane,wecomldn’twaittoenjoythebeautifulscenery.Theweatherisalittlehotbuttheskyisextremelyclear,Youcanseecrowdsofvisitors-theyoung,theold...ontheisland.Somearesurfingandothersdivinginthedeeperpartofthesea.Weareexcitedtoseesomespecialtreesandplantsalongtheroad.Whenhavinglunchataseafoodrestaurantnearthebeach,lmadaanewfriendwithayoungmanfromAfricawhoisattractedtoChinesecultureandhastravelledseveralplacesofinterest.Itisdefinitelyanexcitingtrip.IfIhavechance,Iwillbemorethanhappytovisittheplaceagain.Sincerelyyours,LiHua连句成篇fef假如称是John,正在中国北京旅游,请你。的朋友5am写一张明信片,简单介绍一下保京的旅游情况。注意:1、开头和结尾已给出。2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯HiSam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Byfornow,Takecare!Jobn落实检查fefHiSam,I'vebeenhereinBeijingfortwodaysandlamhavingagreattime!YesterdaywewenttothGreatWallandtodaywevisitedthePalaceMuseumwherewemetsomeyoungpeoplefromaloca!university.Theyhelpedustakealotofpicturesandtoldussomeinterestingfactsaboutthemuseum.Theywerereallywarm*hearted!TomorrowwearegoingtotakeawalkintheSummerPalaceandhaveatasteofthefamousBeijingroastduck,Missyouandseeyouassoonaspossiblewhenlcomeback.Byfornow,Takecare!John落实检查Unit5OntheroadPresentingideasLookatthelogosanddecidewhichChinesecitiestheyrepresent.Findoutwhateachcityisbestknownfor.Sanya,knownastheEasternHawaii,isaninternatioaltouristcity.It’sfamousforitswonderfulsunshine,whitesandybeachesandclearwater.

Enjoyavideo.❤typicalplantinSanya❤Chinesecharacter“三”intheshapeofwaterandplant❤Chinesecharacter“亚”

intheshapeofacommonbuildingbyseaside❤Chinesecharacter“京”

intheshapeofPekingOperafacialmakeupBeijingisthecapitalofChina.It’sthepolitical,economicandculturalcenterofourcountry.ThemostrepresentitivecultureisPekingOpera.Timetoviewavideo.❤Chinesecharacter“桂林”

intheshapeofthefamousmountainsandwatersinGuilin.Asoneofthemost-visitedChinesecities,Guilinhaslongbeenfamousforitslimestone(石灰岩)karsthills.Peoplesay:Guilin’ssceneryispeerlessintheworld(桂林山水甲天下).Chooseadifferentpl