Unit2HealthyLifestyleReadingforWriting课件-高中英语人教版选择性2

ReadingforWritingWritealettertotheeditoraboutyourlifestyleToreadtwolettersandcompleteatableToanalysetheorganizationofthelettersTolearntowritealetteraboutoneaspectofyourownlifestylethatyouwouldliketochangeLead-inWatchavideo,thinkaboutyourlifestyleLeadinginStayingupLate1.Doyouhaveotherunhealthyhabits?overeatinggameaddictionlackofexercise2.Whatisyourlifestyle?Myideallifestylegoodhabitseathealthyfoodgotobedearlydoexerciseregularlystudyhardkeepawayfromphones...MycurrentlifestylebadhabitsChangebadhabitsandformgoodonesIfthereisasummercamporganisedbythemagazineHealthyLife,wouldyouliketojoin?Whyorwhynot?Whatdoyouexpecttolearnthere?ReadingReadformainideaandstructure1.Whowritethesetwoletters?2.Whatarethepurposesofwritingtheseletters?readingandthinkingWangLuandGeorgeFielding.Toinformtheeditoroftheirproblemsandthechangesthattheymadetobetterthemselves.How?TwostudentsattendedthesummercamporganisedbythemagazineHealthyLifeandwrotetotheeditor.Readthetextquickly,andfillintheblankstofinishthemainideaofit.Thesearetwo________from_______and_________,whoattended

,totheeditortoinformtheeditoroftheir_________,_________,___________and___________.thesummercampWangLuGeorgeproblemsdecisionsactionsresultslettersFast-ReadingWhatisthebasicstructureofaletter?DearEditor,

Yourstruly,/Sincerely,signature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________bodyComplimentaryclose信尾敬语Salutation称呼ReadingforstructuresReadeachletter,labeleachparagraphusinginformationbelow.AidentifyproblemsBconsiderwhattodo Cdescribewhathe/shehasdonetochangeDgivetheresults ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternProblemProblemDecisionDecisionAction(s)Action(s)Result(s)Result(s)ReadingforstructuresAnalyzetheorganizationoftheletters.Labeltheparagraphsusingthelettersbelow.Someparagraphsmaycovermorethanonetopic.Aidentifyingproblem(s)BconsideringwhattodoCwhathe/shehasdonetochangeDtheresultsPassage1Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____AB123-4C5DPassage2Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____1A2A&B3B4C5DReadforstructuresA.identifyingproblem(s)B.consideringwhattodoC.whathe/shehasdonetochangeD.theresultsreadforstructureProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)ABCDAA&BBCDProblem-solutionpatternReadforthestructuresA.identifyingproblem(s)B.consideringwhattodoC.whathe/shehasdonetochangeD.theresultsLabeltheparagraphsusingthelettersbelow.ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternReadfordetailsReadingfordetailsReadthesetwoletterscarefullyandcompletethetableonP21.

InformationWangLuProblem●didnotfeel_______●felt

_______________,lacked_______●got_______,experienced___________Decision●to________________●to________________Action●stopped_______________________________________●exerciseseverydayfor______________Result●more____________________in__________________●sleeps______,nolonger_____________●feelslike________________________wellsleepyanddizzypassionflueasilymanytoothacheseatnosugarexerciseregularlybuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30minutesdynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlysuffersfromfluortoothachesincontrolofherownlifeReadingfordetails

InformationWangLuProblemdidnotfeel_______felt

_______________,lacked_______got_______,experienced___________Decisionto________________to________________Actionstopped_______________________________________exerciseseverydayfor______________Resultmore____________________in__________________sleeps______,nolonger_____________feelslike________________________wellsleepyanddizzypassionflueasilymanytoothacheseatnosugarexerciseregularlybuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30minutesdynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlysuffersfromfluortoothachesincontrolofherownlife✎

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InformationWangLuProblem●didnotfeel_______●felt

_______________,lacked_______●got_______,experienced___________Decision●to________________●to________________Action●stopped_______________________________________●exerciseseverydayfor______________Result●more____________________in__________________●sleeps______,nolonger_____________●feelslike________________________wellsleepyanddizzypassionflueasilymanytoothacheseatnosugarexerciseregularlybuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30minutesdynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlysuffersfromfluortoothachesincontrolofherownlife

InformationWangLuProblem●felt___________

●feltevenmore_________after_________________________Decision●to___________________________

________________Action●goes____________________

___________Result●feelsmuchmore_________________

●feelshecan_____________________________

stressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamestakecontrolofhislifeandfindotherwaystorelaxrockclimbingmonthlywithhisdadenergeticchangehimselfforthebetterReadingfordetails

InformationWangLuProblemfelt___________feltevenmore_____________after_________________________Decisionto___________________________________________Actiongoes_____________________________________Resultfeelsmuchmore________________feelshecan________________________________stressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamestakecontrolofhislifeandfindotherwaystorelaxrockclimbingmonthlywithhisdadenergeticchangehimselfforthebetter

InformationWangLuProblem●felt___________

●feltevenmore_________after_________________________Decision●to___________________________

________________Action●goes____________________

___________Result●feelsmuchmore_________________

●feelshecan_____________________________

stressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamestakecontrolofhislifeandfindotherwaystorelaxrockclimbingmonthlywithhisdadenergeticchangehimselfforthebetterProblemDecisionActionResultpasttensepresenttenseReadingfortenseSummarizefortheorganisationoftheletters.ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)identifyingproblemsconsideringwhattodowhathe/shehasdonetochange

theresults

pasttensepasttensepresent/pasttensepresenttense

Analysethetenseoftheletter.ProblemDecisionAction(s)pasttenseResult(s)presenttensePreparationsforthewritingWritealettertotheeditoraboutoneaspectofyourownlifestylethatyouwouldliketochange.structureProblemDecisionActionResultWhatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochangeWhyyouwanttochangeHowyouplantochangeWhatresultyouhopetosee

pasttensepresenttenseProblem1.AfterIattendedyour...,Irealised...2.Ifelt...andlacked...3.AsItookpartin...,Istartedtoanalyse...Decision1....stimulatedmydecision.2.Imadeupmymindto...3.Idecidedto...

Readforusefulexpressions.Howdidtheydescribeproblems,decisions......?Action1.SometimesI...OthertimesI...2.IgetrefreshedthroughdoingA,BandCResult1.Theresultshavebeenfantastic.2.Inolongersufferfrom...3.IfeellikeI’mincontrolofownlife.readforadvancedexpressionsidentifyingproblems仿写Problem:参加完夏令营后，你努力摆脱digitaladdiction，请写信给编辑，描述你的问题，决定，行动，结果。自从参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后，我意识到我沉迷于电子设备，在玩的时候让我娱乐，但是之后更精疲力尽。AfterIattendedyoursummercampabouthealthandlifestylechoices,IrealizedIwasaddictedtodigitaldevices，whichentertainedmewhenIwasplaying,butwornmeoutafterwards.readforadvancedexpressionsdescribingdecisions激发我的动力下定决心改变……决定掌控……用...代替...仿写：我的动力被激发，我下定决心摆脱坏习惯，掌控自己的生活。Mymotivationstimulated,Imadeupmymindtogetridofbadhabitsandtakecontrolofmylife.readforadvancedexpressionsdescribingactions仿写：每次我想玩电脑游戏的时候，我就出去慢跑。这不仅提高了我的生活质量，也改善了我的身体状况。WheneverIwantedtoplaycomputergames,Iwentjogginginstead,whichnotonlyenhancedmyqualityoflifebutalsoimprovedmyhealth.readforadvancedexpressionsshowingresults仿写：结果是极好的。我在身体和精神上精力充沛。更好的是，我感觉我可以让自己变得更好。Theresultshavebeenfantastic.Igetmoredynamic,refreshedandenergeticbothphysicallyandmentally.Betteryet,IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetter.WritingWhatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochangeWhyyouwanttochangeHowyouplantochangeWhatresultyouhopetoseeWritingWritealettertotheeditoraboutoneaspectofyourownlifestylethatyouwouldliketochange.Usetheorganizationtobrainstormthefollowingitems.IdentifyingproblemsConsideringwhattodoPlanningtheactionstotakeTheexpectedresults本单元的写作任务是给编辑写一封讲述自己生活方式的信。此类作文主要围绕以下几个方面写作：1．首先要详细叙述自己曾经不良的生活方式；2．再以时间为主线叙述事情发展的经过，即从过去不健康或亚健康状态，经过积极的调整，达到现在的身心健康状态；3．最后表达自己对此的感悟。WritingTipsforwritingalettertotheeditoraboutyourlifestyle.(写作技法)一、篇章结构本文兼顾书信和记叙文的体裁特点。首先，它具备书信的基本构成要素，包括称呼、正文、信尾敬语和署名。正文部分为记叙文的写法。第一段：叙述自己曾经不良的生活方式；第二段：为改变生活方式所作出的决定；第三段：为改变生活方式所采取的措施；第四段：产生的积极的结果。二、注意事项1．文章要体现出自己改变前后的身心状态的对比。2．前后两种不同生活方式的对比。3．准确使用人称和语态。开头：Iamwritingtoexpressmy...aboutmycurrentlifestyle,whichIbelieveis...我写信是为了表达对我当前生活方式的……,我觉得我的生活方式是……Iamwritingtotalkaboutmy...andmydeterminationtomakeachange.我写信是为了谈谈我的……和我想要作出改变的决心。Ihavedifficulty/trouble/problems(in)doing...with...我在做……上有困难。

Thesebadhabitscanleadto...

这些坏习惯会导致…Imakeupmymindtochange.../Iamdeterminedtochange...

我下定决心要改变……Idecidetosetrealisticgoalsand...我决定要设定现实的目的并…Iwanttoestablishahealthyroutine.

我想要养成健康的作息习惯。Ahealthierlifestyleisessentialfor...更健康的生活方式对…至关重要。Ahealthylifestyleinvolves

regularexercise,balancedmeals,andenoughsleep.

健康的生活方式包括定期锻炼、平衡膳食以及充足的睡眠。It'sofgreatimportancetoexerciseregularlyand...

定期锻炼和……是很重要的。Onewaytostartistoaddexercisetomydailyroutine.

一个开始的方法是将运动添加到我的日常安排中。Iwilltrytosticktoaregularsleepscheduleandmakesure...

我会努力去遵守正常的作息时间并确保……主体：结尾：

Iamwillingtomakepositivechangeswhichwillbebeneficialtomy...

我愿意作出积极的改变,这些改变会对我的..有益。Ibelievethatahealthylifestyleisthefoundationforahappyandfulfllinglife,andIamwillingtodowhateverittakestoachieveit.

我相信一个健康的生活方式是幸福美满的生活的基础，

我愿意尽一切努力去实现它。UsefulexpressionsProblemDecisionActionResult1.IrealizedthatIwasaddictedto...2.Iusedto...3.IgotsoabsorbedthatI...1.IrealizedthatIneedtochangemyself.2.Idecidedtodo/madeupmymindtodo...1.Tokeephealthy,weshould…/wewouldbetter...2.It’simportant/essentialto....3.....isanothergoodwaytokeephealthy/fit.4.Istopped…1.Ifeelmore....thanever....2.Ithasenhanced/improved...3.IfeelconfidentIwillreachmygoal!常用表达1．Havingagoodhabitisveryimportant.2．Playingcomputergamesforalongtimewilldoharmtoyourhealth.3．Doingexerciseisanothergoodwaytokeephealthy/fit.4．Runningisthebestworkoutforlosingweightbecauseit’scheap.5．Itisimportanttoaskyourdoctorforahealthcheckonceayear.6．Goingtobedearlyandgettingupearlyisalsoveryimportant.7．Tokeephealthy，we’dbettercutdownonfatandsugarinourdiets.8．Itisbadforyourhealthtostayindoorsforalongtime.OutlineDearEditor，AfterIattendedyoursummercampabouthealthandlifestylechoices，IrealisedI...eitherphysicallyormentally...(详述自己曾面临的问题)Imadeupmymindtochangetwothingsinmylife...(为解决问题作出的决定)AfterthatIstopped...Sometimes,I...OthertimesI...(实施的举措)Theresultshavebeen...Ifeelmore...Inolonger...(产生的积极结果)Yours，LiHuaNowyouaregoingtojointhecamp.Writealettertotheeditortotellhimyouronelifestylethatyouwanttochange.

假如你是李华，正在英国参加交换生活动。你想参加HealthyLife

杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动。请给杂志社的编辑写一封信，内容如下：1.Whatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochange;2.Whyyouwanttochange;3.Howyouplantochange;4.Whatresultyouhopetosee.Writingtask假定你是李华，参加完HealthyLife杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动后，你努力改变不健康的生活习惯。请给杂志社的编辑写一封信，内容如下：1．你想改变什么样的生活习惯；2．为什么你想要改变；3．你计划如何改变；4．你希望看到什么结果。注意：1.开头和结尾已给,不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearEditor,

Yourssincerely,

LiHuaStep1

Analyzethestructure假定你是李华，参加完HealthyLife杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动后，你努力改变不健康的生活习惯。请给杂志社的编辑写一封信，内容如下：1．你想改变什么样的生活习惯；2．为什么你想要改变；3．你计划如何改变；4．你希望看到什么结果。注意：1.开头和结尾已给,不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。审题确定文体：主体时态：主体人称：第一人称一般现在时一般将来时书信谋篇①介绍自己不良的生活习惯；②改变不良生活习惯的原因

和行动计划；③预期的结果。Brainstormwithyourpartner.BrainstormProblemDecisionActionResultWhatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochangeWhyyouwanttochangeHowyouplantochangeWhatresultyouhopetosee

LetterwritingstructurecontentlanguageSalutationBodyCloseDear...,para1para2para3ProblemDecisionActionResultYourtruly/sincerely,signature

AfterIattendedyour...,Irealisedthat.../AsItookpartin...,Istartedtoanalyse.../Mostworrying

...stimulatedmydecision/Imadeupmymindto.../Idecidedto...

IgetrefreshedthroughdoingA,BandC/WheneverIwantedtodo...,Ido...instead

Theresultshavebeenfantastic/Inolongersufferfrom.../Ifeelmuchmoredynamic,refreshedandenergeticthepossible

usefulexpressions1.AfterIattendedyour...,Irealised...2.Ifelt...andlacked...3.AsItookpartin...,Istartedtoanalyse...1....stimulatedmydecision.2.Imadeupmymindto...3.Idecidedto...1.SometimesI...OthertimesI...2.IgetrefreshedthroughdoingA,BandC1.Theresultshavebeenfantastic.2.Inolongersufferfrom...3.IfeellikeI’mincontrolofownlife.ProblemDecisionActionResult连词成句(含本单元句型)1．我经常不吃早餐，吃垃圾食品，熬夜，很少做体育锻炼。Ioftenskipbreakfast，eatjunkfood，stayuplateandtakelittlephysicalexercise.2．他们给我的身体和精神都带来了负面影响。Theyhavebroughtmeanegativeeffectphysicallyandmentally.3．我经常感到紧张和疲惫不堪。Iamoftenstressedoutandwornout.4．为了保持健康，我决定马上改变一下自己。Tokeepfit，Ihavemadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.5．我会保持均衡的饮食。Iwillkeepabalanceddiet.6．我认为定期锻炼是个好主意。Ithinktoworkoutregularlyisagoodidea.7．我应该养成早睡早起的习惯。Iamsupposedtodevelopthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.8．我会变得更加精神，更有活力和精力充沛。Iwillgetmorerefreshed，dynamicandenergetic.9．更好的是，我觉得我可以让自己变得更好。Betteryet，IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetter.第三步句式升级1．将句1和句2用定语从句合并成一句话。Ioftenskipbreakfast，eatjunkfood，stayuplateandtakelittlephysicalexercise，whichhavebroughtmeanegativeeffectphysicallyandmentally.2．用it充当形式主语改写句6。Ithinkit’sagoodideatoworkoutregularly.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。SamplewritingDearEditor，Afterattendingyoursummercamp,IrealizedIhadsomeunhealthylivinghabits.Forinstance,Ioftenskipbreakfast,eatjunkfood,stayuplateandtakelittlephysicalexercise,whichhavebroughtmeanegativeeffectphysicallyandmentally.Iamoftenstressedoutandwornout.Tokeepfit,Ihavemadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.Firstofall,Iwillkeepabalanceddiet.What’smore,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoworkoutregularly.Lastbutnotleast,Iamsupposedtodevelopthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.Ibelievetheresultswillbefantastic.Iwillgetmorerefreshed，dynamicandenergetic.Betteryet,IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetterYours,LiHua假定你是李华，你的笔友王强最近沉迷于电脑游戏，这给他带来很多危害。请你给他写一封书信，劝说他戒掉这个不良习惯，并提出建议。内容包括：1．浪费了学习的时间；2．对身心健康造成危害；3．你的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Homework参考范文DearWangQiang，Hearingthatyouareaddictedtoplayingcomputergames，Ifeltveryworried.Tobeginwith，itwillmakeyouwastetoomuchvaluabletimewhichshouldbespentonyourstudy.Inaddition，playingcomputergamesforalongtimewilldoharmtoyourhealth，especiallytoyoureyes.Worsestill，somegamesarefullofviolence，whichwillbeharmfultoyourmentalhealth.Therefore，Istronglyhopethatyoucanbreakawayfromit.Theearlier，thebetter.Youcanreadmoregoodbooks，takemoreexerciseorparticipateinsomesocialactivitiestobroadenyourhorizons.Ihopetheadviceabovewillbeofbenefittoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours，LiHuaWriting

假如你是李华，你因玩手机上瘾影响了学习和生活，决定改掉这个不良习惯。请你给杂志HealthyLife

的编辑写一封邮件，内容包括：1.简单介绍自己的不良习惯

2.说明为摆脱不良习惯将要做的尝试

3.表达期待注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Para1:表明写信的目的＋说明问题+不良影响；Para2:决心做出改变+具体的措施;Para3:表达希望。1.审题定调人称:本文要以第一人称为主;时态:时态以一般现在时为主。2.谋篇布局Deareditor,I’mwritingtosharesomethingwithyou.IrealizethatI_____________沉迷于digitaldevice,_____entertainsmealotwhenIamplaying,but_______________________对...有消极的影响

mylifeandstudies.Suddenly,Ibecomeawarethatifleftunchecked,mybadhabitswould__________________________使我一事无成.