人与动物类读后续写猫鼬救主课件-高三英语二轮复习

人与动物类读后续写猫鼬救主OncetherelivedakindmannamedAlvininasmallvillagewithhiswife.Theyhadalittleson.Oneday,asAlvinwasreturninghomefromanearbyvillage,hecameacrossababymongoose(猫鼬)cryingnexttohismother’sdeadbody.“Oh,whatapoorcreature!”thoughtAlvin.“IfIleavehimhere,hewillsurelydie.”Hepickedhimupandtookhimhome.“Gowri,Ifoundthislittlecreatureonmywayhome.Letustakecareofhim,”Alvinsaidtohiswife.“Verywellalongwithourson,Iwilltakecareofthemongoosetoo,”repliedGowri.Themongoosegrewupwithalotofloveandcareintheirhouse.Hesleptnexttotheirsoninthecradle(摇篮),drankmilkandplayedwiththeboyeveryday.Thelittlemongoose’sdayswerefullofjoy.Asboththeboyandmongoosegrewup,theirfriendshipchangedtoarelationshipbetweentwobrothers.Themongoosegrewupfastandasdayswentby,Gowribegantogetdoubtsinhermind.“Afterall,thisisawildanimal.Soonerorlater,hewillshowhistruecolors,”shethoughttoherself.Sheputthemongoose’sbedseparatelyandwouldwatchhimcarefullywheneverheplayedwithherson.读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnedaywhenAlvinwasaway,Gowridecidedtogototherivertofetchapotofwater.Shelookedaroundandsawhersonsleepingsoundlyinhiscradle.Themongoosewasalsoasleepontheflooratthefootofthecradle.“Itshouldtakeonlyafewminutes.IhopeIcantrustthatmongoosenottoharmmylittleson,”shesaidtoherselfandhurriedtotheriver.Suddenly,themongoosewokeupwithastart.Hehadheardaverylownoise.Lookingup,themongoosesawalargeblacksnakecrawling(爬行)inthroughaholeinthewall.“Thesnakewillharmmybrother.MotherandFatherareaway.Iwillhavetoprotectmylittlebrother,”thoughtthemongoose,asthesnakecamecrawlingtowardsthecradle.读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Paragraph1:Thebravelittlemongoosejumpedquicklyonthehugeblacksnake.___________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ButassoonasGowrisawbloodonthemongoose’smouthandteeth,shethought,“Thiswildanimalhaskilledmylittleson.”_______________________________________________________OncetherelivedakindmannamedAlvininasmallvillagewithhiswife.Theyhadalittleson.Oneday,asAlvinwasreturninghomefromanearbyvillage,hecameacrossababymongoose(猫鼬)cryingnexttohismother’sdeadbody.“Oh,whatapoorcreature!”thoughtAlvin.“IfIleavehimhere,hewillsurelydie.”Hepickedhimupandtookhimhome.“Gowri,Ifoundthislittlecreatureonmywayhome.Letustakecareofhim,”Alvinsaidtohiswife.“Verywellalongwithourson,Iwilltakecareofthemongoosetoo,”repliedGowri.Themongoosegrewupwithalotofloveandcareintheirhouse.Hesleptnexttotheirsoninthecradle(摇篮),drankmilkandplayedwiththeboyeveryday.Thelittlemongoose’sdayswerefullofjoy.Asboththeboyandmongoosegrewup,theirfriendshipchangedtoarelationshipbetweentwobrothers.Themongoosegrewupfastandasdayswentby,Gowribegantogetdoubtsinhermind.“Afterall,thisisawildanimal.Soonerorlater,hewillshowhistruecolors,”shethoughttoherself.Sheputthemongoose’sbedseparatelyandwouldwatchhimcarefullywheneverheplayedwithherson.OnedaywhenAlvinwasaway,Gowridecidedtogototherivertofetchapotofwater.Shelookedaroundandsawhersonsleepingsoundlyinhiscradle.Themongoosewasalsoasleepontheflooratthefootofthecradle.“Itshouldtakeonlyafewminutes.IhopeIcantrustthatmongoosenottoharmmylittleson,”shesaidtoherselfandhurriedtotheriver.Suddenly,themongoosewokeupwithastart.Hehadheardaverylownoise.Lookingup,themongoosesawalargeblacksnakecrawling(爬行)inthroughaholeinthewall.“Thesnakewillharmmybrother.MotherandFatherareaway.Iwillhavetoprotectmylittlebrother,”thoughtthemongoose,asthesnakecamecrawlingtowardsthecradle.读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Characters？1.OncetherelivedakindmannamedAlvininasmallvillagewithhiswife.Theyhadalittleson.Oneday,asAlvinwasreturninghomefromanearbyvillage,hecameacrossababymongoose(猫鼬)cryingnexttohismother’sdeadbody.2.“Oh,whatapoorcreature!”thoughtAlvin.“IfIleavehimhere,hewillsurelydie.”Hepickedhimupandtookhimhome.3.“Gowri,Ifoundthislittlecreatureonmywayhome.Letustakecareofhim,”Alvinsaidtohiswife.“Verywellalongwithourson,Iwilltakecareofthemongoosetoo,”repliedGowri.4.Themongoosegrewupwithalotofloveandcareintheirhouse.Hesleptnexttotheirsoninthecradle(摇篮),drankmilkandplayedwiththeboyeveryday.Thelittlemongoose’sdayswerefullofjoy.Asboththeboyandmongoosegrewup,theirfriendshipchangedtoarelationshipbetweentwobrothers.5.Themongoosegrewupfastandasdayswentby,Gowribegantogetdoubtsinhermind.“Afterall,thisisawildanimal.Soonerorlater,hewillshowhistruecolors,”shethoughttoherself.Sheputthemongoose’sbedseparatelyandwouldwatchhimcarefullywheneverheplayedwithherson.6.OnedaywhenAlvinwasaway,Gowridecidedtogototherivertofetchapotofwater.Shelookedaroundandsawhersonsleepingsoundlyinhiscradle.Themongoosewasalsoasleepontheflooratthefootofthecradle.“Itshouldtakeonlyafewminutes.IhopeIcantrustthatmongoosenottoharmmylittleson,”shesaidtoherselfandhurriedtotheriver.7.Suddenly,themongoosewokeupwithastart.Hehadheardaverylownoise.Lookingup,themongoosesawalargeblacksnakecrawling(爬行)inthroughaholeinthewall.8.“Thesnakewillharmmybrother.MotherandFatherareaway.Iwillhavetoprotectmylittlebrother,”thoughtthemongoose,asthesnakecamecrawlingtowardsthecradle.读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。路遇小猫鼬收养小猫鼬心有疑云离家打水事起：蛇入屋，家无人plots？（一）read1.characters:2.plot:3.theme:Akindman:AlvinHiswife:GowriTheirlittlesonAmongoose（猫鼬）savedbyAlvinPara1~Para2：Alvin路遇小猫鼬Para3~Para4：Alvin一家收养小猫鼬大背景Growuptogether=brothersPara5：Gowri对猫鼬心存疑云Para6：Gowri离家打水小背景Para7~Para8：事起：蛇入屋，家无人Theprejudiceinpeople’sheartsislikeahugemountain.人们心中的成见是一座大山。Theimportanceofloveandtrust爱与信任的重要性（二）think十句五定法Paragraph1Paragraph21衔接句（上）6衔接句（上）273849大结局5衔接句（下）10升华主题1号衔接句（承接上文）：上文“勇敢的小猫鼬迅速地跳到了巨大的黑蛇背上。”双方展开搏斗Themongooseletoutoneangryroar（咆哮）andthenaimedabiteatthesnake’sneck.Themongoosearcheditsbackandhissed（发出嘶嘶声）.Thesnakewrappeditselftightlyaroundthemongoose.2号自主发挥句开始：按照情节发展，应交代_________________。双方搏斗的结果（猫鼬击败了黑蛇）Afteralong,fierce（激烈的）fight,thelittlemongoosefinallymanagedtokillthesnake.Themongoosetriedhisbestandeventuallydefeatedtheblacksnake.3~4号自由发挥句：小猫鼬战胜了黑蛇，守护了亲人。此处可以写________________________________________________________________。小猫鼬骄傲开心等心情小猫鼬和thelittleson的一些有爱互动Themongooseleaptandwaggedhistailinexcitement.猫鼬兴奋地摇着尾巴跳来跳去。Themongoosewatchedhislittlebrotherwithstarsinhiseyes.猫鼬看着他的兄弟，眼里闪烁着星星。

5号衔接句（开启下文）：上文本来猫鼬在室内，Gowri外出去打水。下文Gowri看到了猫鼬嘴巴和牙齿上的血（划线句），因此本句衔接内容安排应是______________________。猫鼬和Gowri的碰面Justthen,hearingGowri’sreturning,heranoutinordertotellherthathehadprotectedhislittlebrotherfromadreadfulsnake.Whoseblood妈妈觉得是儿子的血事实是黑蛇的血误会6号衔接句分析（承接上文）在误会的情况下，妈妈Gowri会是什么心理？又会有什么行为呢？Inafitofanger（盛怒之下）Alvin’swifethrewthepotfullofwateronthemongoose,killinghiminstantly.（极端结局）Feelingangry,shedemandedthatthemongooseleaveherhomeatonce.（可挽回结局）7~8号自由发挥句：具体可自由发挥，但主要方向应是：_____。解开误会Enteringthehousewithaheavyheart,shewasamazedtoseeherlittlesonlyinginhiscradlestilldeepinsleep.Onthefloorwasahugeblacksnakewithitsuglyheadbittenoff.9号句交代大结局：根据上文思路，结局有二。一，极端行为下，误会解开后，结局为：___________________________________________________________________二，可挽回行为下，误会揭开后，结局为：___________________________________________________________________母亲非常后悔（语言描写，心理描写，神态描写等等）母亲非常后悔，并设法补偿忠诚的小猫鼬。（情节描写，环境描写，互动描写等等）“Oh！whathaveIdone”criedAlvin'swife.“Ikilledthatfaithfullittlemongoosewhosavedthelifeofmypreciousson.”Gowrifoundwhatshehaddoneandregretteditsomuch.Shetoldthetruthtoherhusband.Thecouplewenttotheforestimmediatelyandretrieved（挽回，找回）thepoormongoose.10号句升华主题：根据上文思路，主题有二。一，救主人的猫鼬已死，主题为：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二，猫鼬和Alvin一家人和好，主题为：_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theprejudiceinpeople’sheartsislikeahugemountain.人们心中的成见是一座大山。Theimportanceofloveandtrust爱与信任的重要性Throughthisexperience,theydiscoveredthatthebondbetweenhumansandanimalsisbuiltonloveandtrust.Weshouldtrustandlovethemastheydo.范文（1极端结局）Thebravelittlemongoosejumpedquicklyonthehugeblacksnake.Thesnakewrappeditselftightlyaroundthemongoose.Themongooseletoutoneangryroar（咆哮）andthenaimedabiteatthesnake’sneck.Afteralong,fiercefight,thelittlewarrior（战士）finallymanagedtokillthesnake.Themongoosewatchedhislittlebrotherwithstarsinhiseyes.Justthen,hearingGowri’sreturning,heranoutinordertotellherthathehadprotectedhislittlebrotherfromadreadfulsnake.ButassoonasGowrisawbloodonthemongoose’smouthandteeth,shethought,“Thiswildanimalhaskilledmylittleson.”InafitofangerAlvin’swifethrewthepotfullofwateronthemongoose,killinghiminstantly.Enteringthehousewithaheavyheart,shewasamazedtoseeherlittlesonlyinginhiscradlestilldeepinsleep.Onthefloorwasahugeblacksnakewithitsuglyheadbittenoff.“Oh!whathaveIdone”criedAlvin'swife.“Ikilledthatfaithfullittlemongoosewhosavedthelifeofmypreciousson.”Theprejudiceinpeople’sheartsisalwayslikeahugemountain.范文（2可挽回结局）Thebravel