外研安徽 九年级 下册 英语 Module 8《模块主题写作》复习课 课件

Module8Myfuturelife模块主题写作一、主题分析本模块写作情境为“毕业，走向未来的生活”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”这一主题群，涉及子主题“多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活”。常见的写作任务是谈论初中生活、介绍自己各方面的成长、表达感谢、畅想未来等。二、素材积累(1)主题词汇chance//graduate//saygoodbyeto//thanksto//happiness//confident//improve//mybestwishes//hopeto//tryone’sbest(2)重点句式1.Wearegoingto_________________(告别)juniorhighschooldays.2.Dearteachersandclassmates,______________________(很荣幸)formetomakeaspeech.3.I’velearnedto____________(尽最大努力),whateverIdo.saygoodbyetoit’sagreathonourtrymybest4.Ilearned___________________(重要性)workingtogether.5._______________(总之),Iwillalwaysremembertheseunforgettabledays.6.Iwouldliketo___________________(表达最美好的祝愿)to...theimportanceofInawordshowmybestwishes三、写作示例又到一年毕业季，又逢青春告别时。假设你是九年级一班的李华，你所在的班级计划举办一场告别初中的欢送会(afarewellparty)。请你撰写一份发言稿，谈谈三年来你的成长，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学和老师们的祝愿。注意：词数：80—100(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Dearteachersandclassmates,Aswearegoingtosaygoodbyetojuniorhighschooldays,Iamfilledwithjoyandexcitement._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua谋篇布局1.审题立意：①主题：毕业发言稿；②人称：第一人称；③时态：一般现在时、一般过去时。2.写作提纲毕业发言稿引出话题Aswearegoingtosaygoodbyetojuniorhighschooldays...经历和收获Iusedtobeafraidofspeakinginpublic...Myclassmatesalsohelpedmealot...I’vemadeupmymindtoimprovetheabilityofstudy...表达祝愿Iwouldliketoshowmybestwishestothose...基础篇Dearteachersandclassmates,Aswearegoingtosaygoodbyetojuniorhighschooldays,Iamfilledwithjoyandexcitement.IwasafraidofspeakinginpublicinGrade7.Butnow,IrealizethatIwasjustbeingsilly.Sincethen,IhavetriedtospeakEnglishinpublicandlearnedalot.MyclassmateshelpedmealotandIlearnedtoworktogetherwithothers.NowIbecomeconfident.IwillgotoseniorhighschoolandIhopetobecomehappier.Ialsowanttoimprovetheabilityofstudy,anddevelopaninterestinvoluntaryactivities.Atlast,Iwouldliketoshowmybestwishestoallmyteachers,parentsandfriends.Thankyouall!Yours,LiHua名师点评本文结构清晰，题干中所给要点都涵盖其中。开头点明即将告别初中生活，接下来具体阐述成长以及自己的期待，最后表达祝福和感谢。文章尽管要点齐全，但没有增添细节，适当拓展，内容不够充实。提高篇Dearteachersandclassmates,Aswearegoingtosaygoodbyetojuniorhighschooldays,Iamfilledwithjoyandexcitement.Iusedtobe①afraidofspeakinginpublicinGrade7.IthoughtIwouldneverlearnEnglishwell.Butnow,IrealizethatIwasjustbeingsilly.Sincethen,IhavetriedtospeakEnglishinpublicmanytimesandlearnedalot.Myclassmatesalsohelpedmealot,soIlearnedtheimportanceof②workingtogether.③NowIammoreandmoreconfident.EventhoughIamsadthatjuniorhighwillbeover,Ibecomehappierandhealthiertohavenewexperiencesinseniorhighschool.④I’vemadeupmymind②toimprovetheabilityofstudy,anddevelopinterestinvoluntaryactivities.Atlast,Iwouldliketoshowmybestwishestothosestandingbymealltheway⑤,teachers,parentsandfriendsincluded.Thankyouall!Yours,LiHua名师点评本文要点齐全，合理增加了一些细节和拓展。①第二段用usedtobe表达前后的变化对比。②运用theimportanceof,makeupone’smind等短语使文字更加丰富。③运用so引导结果状语从句，表达同学对作者的重要性。④运用eventhough引导的让步状语从句，表达对未来的期待。⑤运用现在分词作后置定语，表达对一路支持的人的感谢。四、写作练笔毕业在即,假如你将代表全校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言,根据提示并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“ThankYou,DearAll!”的发言稿。提示：1.回顾美好的校园时光;2.老师生动有趣的教学和鼓励;3.……注意：1.词数：80—100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThankYou,DearAll!Dearteachersandclassmates,It’sagreathonourformetomakeaspeech.Ithasbeenthreeyearsforustostudyinthisbeautifulschool.Ourteachersalwaystrytomaketheirlessonslivelyandinteresting.Wehavelearnedalotovertheseyears,butwecouldhardlysucceedwithoutourteachers’encouragement,ourparents’supportorourclassmates’help.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________