2025版高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练二十一短文改错

PAGE1-专项技能保分练(二十一)短文改错Test1[2024·湖北省联考]DearWangping，Howarethingsgoingwithyou?It'sbeensixmonthsinceyoustudiedabroadinEngland.Itisthefirsttimethatyouhadbeenabroad.Withoutdoubt,itishardtofitinthelifeinaforeigncountry.Haveyougotaccustomtolivingthere?Andhowaboutthefood?Asanexchangestudent,haveyouovercomeallthedifficultiesyouhavelearnEnglish?Canyouunderstandthattheteacherssayinclassandcommunicatefreewithyourclassmatesnow?Youaresuchsmartthatyoumusthavebeenmaderapidprogressinyourstudies.EverythingisOKwithme.Ioftenrecallthehappydaysthatwestayedtogether.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua答案与解析：DearWangping，Howarethingsgoingwithyou?It'sbeensixeq\o(month,\s\do10(①months))sinceyoustudiedabroadinEngland.Itisthefirsttimethatyoueq\o(had,\s\do10(②have))beenabroad.Withoutdoubt,itishardtofitineq\o(∧,\s\do10(③with))thelifeinaforeigncountry.Haveyougoteq\o(accustom,\s\do10(④accustomed))tolivingthere?Andhowaboutthefood?Asanexchangestudent,haveyouovercomeallthedifficultiesyouhaveeq\o(learn,\s\do10(⑤learning))English?Canyouunderstandeq\o(that,\s\do10(⑥what))theteacherssayinclassandcommunicateeq\o(free,\s\do10(⑦freely))withyourclassmatesnow?Youareeq\o(such,\s\do10(⑧so))smartthatyoumusthavebeeneq\o(,\s\do10(⑨so))maderapidprogressinyourstudies.EverythingisOKwithme.Ioftenrecallthehappydayseq\o(that,\s\do10(⑩when))westayedtogether.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua①month改为monthsmonth为可数名词，前有six修饰，应用复数。故将month改为months。②had改为have此句“Itisthefirsttimethatsbhavedone...”是现在完成时的固定句型之一，故将had改为have。③在in后加withfitinwith...为固定搭配，意为“适应……”，故在in后加with。④accustom改为accustomedgetaccustomedtodoingsth.意为“习惯于做某事”，为固定用法，故将accustom改为accustomed。⑤learn改为learning分析句子结构可知，此处为havedifficulty(in)doingsth.的变形。故将learn改为learning。⑥that改为what分析句子结构可知，understand为动词，后接宾语从句，宾语从句引导词在从句中作say的宾语，故将that改为what。⑦free改为freelycommunicate为动词，应用副词修饰。freely意为“自由地”；free作为副词时，意为“免费地”，不符合语境。故将free改为freely。⑧such改为sosmart为形容词，前面应用so修饰；such常用来修饰名词结构。故将such改为so。⑨删除beenmake与其主语you之间为主动关系，故应用主动语态，故删除been。⑩that改为when分析句子结构可知，...westayedtogether为定语从句，先行词为days，定语从句引导词在从句中作时间状语，应用when引导。故将that改为when。Test2[2024·重庆一中检测]TeahasalonghistoryinChina,datedbackto5,000yearsago.Obvious,itplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture.Agoodmanyofdistinguishedpoetsandwritershadwrittenmanymasterpiecesabouttheappreciateofteaandtheloveforit,amongthemwasLuYuintheTangdynasty.HewroteTheClassicofTea,afirstbookontea,buthewasregardedasthe“TeaSaint(圣人)”．Chinesepeopletakedelightintea­drinking.Itservedalmosteverywhere.Wheneverguestvisit,offeringacupofteatothemisabasicsocialcustom.TeaispartofChinesepeople'sdailylife.答案与解析：TeahasalonghistoryinChina,eq\o(dated,\s\do10(①dating))backto5,000yearsago.eq\o(Obvious,\s\do10(②Obviously)),itplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture.Agoodmanyeq\o(,\s\do10(③))distinguishedpoetsandwriterseq\o(had,\s\do10(④have))writtenmanymasterpiecesabouttheeq\o(appreciate,\s\do10(⑤appreciation))ofteaandtheloveforit,amongeq\o(them,\s\do10(⑥whom))wasLuYuintheTangdynasty.HewroteTheClassicofTea,eq\o(a,\s\do10(⑦the))firstbookontea,eq\o(but,\s\do10(⑧and/so))hewasregardedasthe“TeaSaint(圣人)”．Chinesepeopletakedelightintea­drinking.Iteq\o(∧,\s\do10(⑨is))servedalmosteverywhere.Whenevereq\o(guest,\s\do10(⑩guests))visit,offeringacupofteatothemisabasicsocialcustom.TeaispartofChinesepeople'sdailylife.①dated改为datingdatebackto...意为“追溯到……”，无被动语态，此处应用现在分词形式作时间状语。故将dated改为dating。②Obvious改为Obviously此处作状语，用来修饰后面的整个句子，应用副词。故将Obvious改为Obviously。③删除ofagoodmany后可干脆加可数名词复数，和many的用法类似，此处意为“很多杰出诗人和作家”，表示泛指，不须要of。故删除of。④had改为have句意为：很多杰出的诗人和作家写了很多对于茶的鉴赏和酷爱的杰作……此处表示诗人和作家关于茶的写作这件事从过去持续到现在，应用现在完成时。故将had改为have。⑤appreciate改为appreciationabout是介词，后面接名词或动名词作宾语。故将appreciate改为appreciation。⑥them改为whom此处是非限制性定语从句，引导词作介词among的宾语，在从句中作主语，应用whom，指代名词短语poetsandwriters。故将them改为whom。⑦a改为the“the＋序数词＋名词”表示“第几……”，“a/an＋序数词”表示“又一/再一”。此处特指《茶经》是关于茶的第一本书，应用定冠词。故将a改为the。⑧but改为and/so句意为：他写了第一本关于茶的书籍——《茶经》，(所以)被认为是“茶圣”。依据句意可知，前后句存在顺承关系或因果关系，而非转折关系。故将but改为and/so。⑨在It后加is此处It指代茶，与serve之间是被动关系，又依据本段整体时态可知，此处应用一般现在时。故在It后加is。⑩guest改为guests句意为：无论什么时候客人来访，给他们上一杯茶是一种基本的社交习俗。guest为可数名词，且依据后面的them可知，此处应用复数形式。故将guest改为guests。Test3[2024·山西省联考]ThismorningmyAmericanfriendsJackandIwenttothetemplefairholdinginourcity.Whenwearrivedatthepark,wewereamazedatthatwesaw.Thereweresuchmanydifferentperformancesandboothssellingtraditionhandicrafts.Sincetherewerelotsofgamestoplay,foodtoeat,andperformancestosee,wespendatleastsixhourswalkingthroughcrowdsofpeople.Jacksaidhehadgreattimebecausehenotonlytastednumerouskindsoflocalsnacksandanotherdishesbutalsoenjoyedlivedragonandliondances,waistdrumdancingandotherfolkperformances.Wecamebackofhomeataboutsevenp．m.,tiredandhappy.答案与解析：ThismorningmyAmericaneq\o(friends,\s\do10(①friend))JackandIwenttothetemplefaireq\o(holding,\s\do10(②held))inourcity.Whenwearrivedatthepark,wewereamazedateq\o(that,\s\do10(③what))wesaw.Therewereeq\o(such,\s\do10(④so))manydifferentperformancesandboothssellingeq\o(tradition,\s\do10(⑤traditional))handicrafts.Sincetherewerelotsofgamestoplay,foodtoeat,andperformancestosee,weeq\o(spend,\s\do10(⑥spent))atleastsixhourswalkingthroughcrowdsofpeople.Jacksaidhehadeq\o(∧,\s\do10(⑦a))greattimebecausehenotonlytastednumerouskindsoflocalsnacksandeq\o(another,\s\do10(⑧other))dishesbutalsoenjoyedlivedragonandliondances,waistdrumdancingandotherfolkperformances.Wecamebackeq\o(,\s\do10(⑨))homeataboutsevenp．m.,tiredeq\o(and,\s\do10(⑩but))happy.①friends改为friend此处指Jack这个美国挚友，故应用friend的单数形式。故将friends改为friend。②holding改为held分析句子成分可知，此处为非谓语作定语，修饰thetemplefair，且hold与thetemplefair之间为逻辑上的被动关系，故应用过去分词作后置定语。故将holding改为held。③that改为what分析句子结构可知，介词at之后是宾语从句，该从句中谓语动词saw缺少宾语，应用what引导该从句。故将that改为what。④such改为so名词前有many修饰时，其前通常用so，构成“somany＋复数名词”。故将such改为so。快解：当名词前有many，much，few和little等词修饰时，要用so而不用such。⑤tradition改为traditional此处修饰名词handicrafts，应用形容词。故将tradition改为traditional。⑥spend改为spent依据语境可知，此处叙述的是发生在过去的事务，故谓语动词应用一般过去时。故将spend改为spent。⑦在had后加ahaveagreattime为固定搭配，意为“玩得快乐”。故在had后加a。⑧another改为other依据语境可知，此处指很多当地小吃及其他的菜，other意为“其他的；别的”，符合语境。故将another改为other。⑨删除of句中home是副词，其前不加介词。故删除of。⑩and改为but句中tired和happy的意思是相对立的，所以用but表示意义的转折。故将and改为but。Test4[2024·长春市质量监测二]It'sbeenalongtimebeforeIleftmyhometown.Irememberitwasthebeautifulplacewithanexcellentenvironment,andpeopletherewereverykind­hearted.Lastweekend,Imakeacalltoafriendlivingthere,buthesentmesomepicturesofthecitybye­mail.Fromthephoto,Icanseethatgreatchangeshavebeentakenplacethere.Forexample,thestreetshavebecomewide,andthebuildingshigher.Beside,thepeoplearedressedmodernclothes.Severalmodernshoppingmallsarebeingbuilt.MyhometownhaschangedverygreatlythatIcanhardlybelievemyeyes.Ihopemyhometowncanbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.答案与解析：It'sbeenalongtimeeq\o(before,\s\do10(①since))Ileftmyhometown.Irememberitwaseq\o(the,\s\do10(②a))beautifulplacewithanexcellentenvironment,andpeopletherewereverykind­hearted.Lastweekend,Ieq\o(make,\s\do10(③made))acalltoafriendlivingthere,eq\o(but,\s\do10(④and))hesentmesomepicturesofthecitybye­mail.Fromtheeq\o(photo,\s\do10(⑤photos)),Icanseethatgreatchangeshaveeq\o(,\s\do10(⑥))takenplacethere.Forexample,thestreetshavebecomeeq\o(wide,\s\do10(⑦wider)),andthebuildingshigher.eq\o(Beside,\s\do10(⑧Besides)),thepeoplearedressedeq\o(∧,\s\do10(⑨in))modernclothes.Severalmode