读后续写-湖畔野营：风雨后的温暖与星空下的团聚 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Everyonehasaninterestingcampingexperiencetowriteabout.Forme,itwaslastyearinOctober,whenmyfamilyandItookourfirstcampingtriptotheLakeHoustonWildernessParkandsleptunderneaththestars.Aswewalkedthroughthebeautifulpark,thecolorsofthesunshinedbrightlyontothepileofleaves.Thegentlewindoftheforestwelcomeduswiththesoundofcracklingdriedleaves,whichgavemegoodfeelingseveryonegotatthebeginningofautumn.Myfamilywerealltogether,whichwasthemostimportantpartofthetripforme.Itwasdifficultforustoplananactivitylikethisone,wherewecouldbealltogetheratthesametimeandplace.Wehadfinishedsettingupthetentwhenitsuddenlystartedraining.Luckily,wehadputupthetentonahighflatsurfacewherewatercouldnotcomeintoourtent.Evenwiththerain,Ihadneverbeenhappier.Thequietforestandbigtreessurroundedthetent.Whilewewereallenjoyingthesoundoftheraindropsdrippingonourtent,Mom,wholikedadventures,preparedsomesnacksanddrinksforuswhilewewereplayinggames,andchattingaboutourdailylifestories.Mylittlesisterdancedunconsciously.Inoticedhowuniqueitwascampingunderthesoundoftherain;weweregatheredaroundinthemiddleofnatureanditwasanicefeeling.Astheraincontinuedtopour,wewerehidinginourcomfortabletent,feelingsafeanddelighted.Thesoftsoundofraindropsagainstthefabricwasalmosthypnotic(催眠的),blendingwiththelaughterinside.Mydad,whorarelygottimeofffromwork,wasmorerelaxedthanIhadseenhiminages.Heandmybrothersharedjokes,whilemymom’ssnackskeptourspiritshigh.Therewassomethingaboutbeingtogetherinthatmoment,awayfromtheusualdistractions.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Astherainbecamelighter,mysistersuggestedwestepoutside.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asnightfell,wereturnedtothecampsite.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章讲述了作者一家去年十月首次前往休斯顿湖荒野公园露营的经历。在美丽的公园中，秋日的景色和森林的微风令人愉悦。搭好帐篷后突然下雨，一家人躲在帐篷里，享受着雨滴声，玩游戏、聊天、分享生活故事，父亲难得放松，一家人其乐融融。故事山分析开端：作者一家前往休斯顿湖荒野公园露营，享受秋日美景。发展：搭好帐篷后下雨，一家人在帐篷里躲避，玩游戏、聊天，享受家庭时光。高潮（续写部分）：雨变小后外出活动，夜晚回到营地继续享受露营的乐趣。结局：一家人在这次露营中收获了快乐和美好的回忆。伏笔以及在续写中的回应美丽的公园和秋日景色：伏笔暗示后续外出可欣赏更多美景，续写中雨变小后外出感受自然。一家人在帐篷里其乐融融：为后续外出活动后回到营地继续享受家庭时光做铺垫。妈妈准备零食和饮料：在续写中可能继续在活动中或回到营地后分享。妹妹无意识地跳舞：暗示妹妹活泼的性格，在续写外出活动中可能有更多活泼的表现。父亲难得放松：在续写中父亲可能在后续活动中继续保持放松状态，享受家庭时光。续写要点第一段：雨变小后妹妹建议外出，可描述外出看到的雨后景色，一家人的活动，如散步、欣赏雨后植物、呼吸新鲜空气等。第二段：夜晚回到营地，描述夜晚的氛围，如星空、篝火（若有），一家人围坐交流感受，总结这次露营的美好。情感线起初一家人在雨中帐篷里享受温馨家庭时光，情感温暖而愉悦。雨变小外出时，情感转为对自然的好奇与兴奋，感受雨后大自然的清新。夜晚回到营地，情感更加深厚，一家人围坐分享感受，对这次露营充满珍惜和满足，体会到家庭团聚和自然带来的双重美好，情感在露营过程中不断升华。故事线一家人在公园露营遇雨躲进帐篷。雨变小后妹妹建议外出，一家人走出帐篷。外出欣赏雨后自然景色，感受清新空气和植物变化。夜晚回到营地，准备夜晚活动。一家人围坐交流露营感受，分享快乐。结束露营，带着美好回忆回家。主旨升华句Thiscampingtripnotonlybroughtusclosertonaturebutalsostrengthenedthebondwithinourfamily.（这次露营之旅不仅让我们更亲近自然，还加强了我们家庭之间的联系。）Amidstthebeautyofnature,wediscoveredthetruemeaningoffamilytogethernessandthesimplejoysoflife.（在大自然的美景中，我们发现了家庭团聚的真正意义和生活的简单快乐。）Thememoriescreatedduringthiscampingadventurewillstaywithusforever,remindingusofthepreciousnessoffamilyandthewondersofnature.（这次露营冒险中创造的回忆将永远伴随着我们，提醒我们家庭的珍贵和大自然的神奇。）Campingunderthestarsandsharinglaughterintherain,werealizedthathappinessliesinthesimplestmomentswithourlovedones.（在星空下露营，在雨中分享欢笑，我们意识到幸福在于与亲人共度的最平凡时刻。）Thisexperiencetaughtusthateveninthemidstofunexpectedweather,thewarmthoffamilyandthebeautyofnaturecanturnanysituationintoamemorableone.（这次经历告诉我们，即使在意外的天气中，家庭的温暖和自然的美丽也能将任何情况变成难忘的经历。）写作示范一Astherainbecamelighter,mysistersuggestedwestepoutside.Withouthesitation,weallputonourraincoatsandshoes,excitedtoexploretheworldaftertherain.Theairwasfreshandclean,filledwiththesweetsmellofwetearthandleaves.Dropsofwatersparkledonthegrassandleavesliketinydiamonds.Wewalkedalongthepath,listeningtothegentledrippingofwaterfromthetrees.Mysisterranahead,tryingtocatchthedropletsfallingfromthebranches.Welaughedandplayed,fullyenjoyingthebeautyofnatureaftertherain.Asnightfell,wereturnedtothecampsite.Welitasmallfire,andthewarmlightflickeredinthedarkness.Sittingaroundthefire,wesharedthestoriesofwhatwesawduringthewalk.Mydadsaiditwasthemostrelaxingdayhehadinalongtime.Mymomservedsomehotchocolate,andthesweettastefilledourmouths.Lookingupatthestarrysky,wefeltadeepsenseofcontentment.Thiscampingtripwasnotjustanadventure,butapreciousmemorythatwouldstaywithusforever.写作示范二Astherainbecamelighter,mysistersuggestedwestepoutside.Weopenedthetentflapandweregreetedbyaworldtransformed.Theraindropshadpaintedtheleavesabrightergreen,andtheflowersseemedtostandtaller,asifshowingofftheirbeautyafterthebath.Westrolledthroughtheforest,ourfeetcrunchingonthewetleaves.Mybrotherfoundasmallstreamthathadswelledwiththerain,andwewatchedthewaterrushby,chattingabouthownaturecouldbesopowerfulandyetsobeautiful.Asnightfell,wereturnedtothecampsite.Thestarstwinkledbrightlyaboveus,asiftheywerewaitingtojoinourparty.Welaydownonthegrass,lookingupatthevastsky,pointingoutconstellationsandsharinglegends.Mombroughtoutsomemarshmallows,andweroastedthemoverthefire,thesweetsmellmixingwiththesmellofthecampfire.Everyonewasfilledwithjoy,andwerealizedthatthiscampingtripwasaperfectescapefromthehustleandbustleofdailylife,achancetoreconnectwithnatureandeachother.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Astherainbecamelighter,mysistersuggestedwestepoutside.Atfirst,wehesitated—whowantedtogetwetandmuddy?ButMom,evertheadventurer,convincedustobravetheexp