初中 初三 英语沪教牛津版 9AU Writing 9AU Writing-

ThepersonIadmire

Writingof9AUnit2

深圳市福田区.

红岭中学石厦初中部龙伊人

Afterthislesson,you'llbeableto

*learnthestructureofThepersonIadmire.

*finishacompositionofThepersonIadmirein

class.

二Inordertomakeallthesehappen,youneedto

"listencarefully

*thinkactively

*practicediligently

Contents,Ifyoudothat,youcan

*graspthemethodofwritingThepersonI

admire.

"expressthepositivesidethatthepersonyou

admirehasbroughtyou.

01

Guessinggame

•HeisaChineseexpertin

agriculture.

•Heisalwayscalledthe“Father

ofHybridRice".

•Heisanoutstandingsinger,

musician,directorandactorfrom

Taiwan,China.

•Heisthesuperstarinalmostall

theyoungpeople'smind.

•HeisaChineseentrepreneur

andengineer.

•HeisthefounderandCEOof

Shenzhen-basedHuawei.

卜•IJnfinrtunatelv.hediedina

•HeisadoctorofShanghai

HuashanHospital.

•Heiscalled"'HardcoreDoctor”

becauseofhissimplescientific

articlesandhumorouslanguage

style.

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二ofthemjias-excellentqualitiesandgreat

E」veinentswhichareworthrespecting.

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WhoisthepersonthatIadmire?

Whatishe?

Whatarehismajorachievements?Why

doIadmirehim?

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一:Answerthequestions.

WhoisthepersonthatIadmire?

ThepersonIadmireisYuanLongping.

Whatishe?

Heisafamousexpertinagriculture.

（额Whatarehismajorachievements?

Hedevelopedthefirsthybridriceinthe1970s.Ithashelpedmany

countriessolvefamineproblems.

WhydoIadmirehim?

Learnsomenewwordsandphrases

expertinagricultureinsiston

hybridricelizardn.

selflessadj.

persistencen.

selflessnessn.

spiritofstudyingwelfaren.

harshenvironmentfaminen.

ThepersonIadmire

Everyonehassomeonethatheadmires.Asforme,IadmireYuanLongpingmost,afamousChinese

agronomist.Yuanisknownasthe“FatherofHybridRice"，thehybridricehedevelopedhashelped

dozensofcountriessolvefamineproblems.

Firstly,IadmireYuan'spersistence.DuringthedecadeheandhisteamstudiedhybridriceinArica,

theyhaveovercomemanydifficulties,suchastheshortofcleanwaterandtheharshenvironment

andsoon.Theyinsistedonstudyinginsteadofgivingup.

Whafsmore,IadmireYuan'sspiritofstudying.From2006tonow,Yuanandhisteamhavesolved

manyproblemsinAfrica,likebadfrogswhoeatrice,speciallizardswholiketosurfinthefieldofrice.

Yuanandhisteamhavethespiritofstudyingwhichledthemtoabrightfuture.Finally,Iadmire

Yuan'sselflessness.Hesaidthattocontributethewelfareofthepeoplealloftheworldisoneofhis

lifelongwishes,hehelpedmanycountriessolvefamineproblemsbysharinghisachievements.Heis

suchaselflessscientistwhocaresaboutwhetherthererehungrypeopleinsteadofprotectinghis

achievements.

YuanLongpingissucharespectablepersonwhoownsthebestqualitiesofpersistenceand

selflessness,hesetsthegoodexampleandinfluencesmeallthetime.

Let'sgetthestructureofthis

composition.

Abriefintroduction

(whoishe?whatishe?)ThepersonIadmire

Everyonehassomeonethatheadmires.Asforme,IadmireYuanLongpingmost,afamousChinese

agronomist.Yuanisknownasthe“FatherofHybridRice"，thehybridricehedevelopedhashelped

dozensofcountriessolvefamineproblems.

Iirstl\;IadmireYuan'spersistence.DuringthedecadeheandhisteamstudiedRybridTice^inArica,

theyhaveovercomemanydifficulties,suchastheshortofcleanwaterandtheharshenvironmentand

soon.Theyinsistedonstudyinginsteadofgivingup.WhydoTaamtFe^

_____________him?Iadmire

spiritofstudying.From2006tonowTTuanandhistcanihavcsolvedmanyproblemsinAfrica,

likebadfrogswhoeatrice,speciallizardswholikejosurfinthefieldofrice.Yuanandhisteamhave

the^pkivof^tudyictrled-therrrtoa^Ftglirfuture.mall\,IadmireYuan'sselflessness.Hesaid

thattocontributelbrtheweifarerofthepeoplealloftheworldisoneofhislifelongwishes,hehelped

manycountriessolvefamineproblemsbysharinghisachievements.Heissuchaselflessscientistwho

caresaboutwhetherthere'reConclusion

hungrypeopleinsteadofprotectinghiFachievements^

YuanLongpingissucharespectablepersonwhoownsthebestqualitiesofpersistenceand

Aelflessnessrhe-setbthegood-exarnple-andirrfluencesFTe—atlthetime二

Getthestructureofthecomposition

AbriefintroductionhepersonIadmireis...

1ymostadmirableperson

(whoishe?whatishe?)

ThepersonFirstly,Iadmirehis/her...

WhydoIadmirei/Vhafsmore,Iadmirehis/her...

Iadmirehim/her?Finally/Lastly,Iadmirehis/her...

e/Sheissucha...personthat

Conclusiontakesme...

e/Shehasinfluencedmealot...

Now,youcanpressthepausebuttonandanswersomequestions：

Haveyouunderstoodthevideo?

Doyouhaveanydifferentideas?

Haveyoutakensomenotes?

Haveyouwrittendownyourown

ideas?

03

Trytowrite

Writethecompositionbyusingthestructurewelearn

周杰伦是一名优质偶像，他不仅才华横溢，还很有社会责任感。无论80后、

90后还是00后，几乎人人都听过他的歌。

请你以“JayChou,thepersonIadmire”为题写一篇作文，要求如下：

1简要介绍周杰伦（性格、职业等）

2说明钦佩他的原因：

a.他才华横溢，却始终谦虚、勤奋。

b.他自很强的社会贲任感，总给人积极正面的影响，是一名优质偶像。

c.（请自行补充第三点）

Learnsomenewwordsandphrases

haveagiftforhigh-quality

humbleadj.idoln.

.

diligentadj.insiston

senseofsocialresponsibilityoutstandingadj.

positiveadj.

Writethecompositionbyusingthestructurewelearn

JayChou,thepersonIadmire

AbriefintroductionJayChou,the

personIadmire(whoishe?whatishe?)

version)-----------------------------------------------------------------------1

ThemostadmirablepersonofmineisJayChou.Heisasinger,musician,directorandactorfromTaiwan,

China.Whenhewasalittleboy,hewasveryshyandhadfewfriends.However,hehasagreatgiftfor

music.Jay'smotherboughthimapiano,andthatwasabrand-newstartofhislife.

WhatIadmireJaymostishisloveformusicandhispersistence.For?0years,hehasinsistedon

writingnewsongs,producingfreshmusic.Hedevotesallhistalentto|thecareerhelovehumblyand

diligently,andneverstopspayingefforts.

What'*mereimportant,IadmireJay'spositiveattitudet。hkcareerandli伍doesWhydoI

admire_____________________

一him?

ashesaysandhas